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Posted: 13 years ago
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JEALOUSY MAKES ANYTHING HAPPEN

Part 1

It was usual day for Maan as he was partying with his friends in one of the best disco but everything stopped when he sees angelic face which he has not see in ages. She was none other than Geet, who was coming for the first time to disco and her friend Pinky was happy go lucky type of nature so Pinky was saying to Geet " Hey Geet come and enjoy it's the most happening place in Delhi". To which Geet says "No yaar I am not feeling comfortable you enjoy". Pinky goes from there and starts dancing with Adi who was his fianc. Maan, who was lost in Geet, came from reverie when Adi who was best buddy of Maan called him for introducing Pinky. Now after introducing to Pinky, Maan wants to get information about Geet. So Maan goes near Geet, who was standing in a corner gets scared. So Maan being a true Gentlemen introduce himself "Hi I am Maan Singh Khurana and I wanted to become your friend, will you be my friend". Geet says " Well she compose herself and says "I don't do friendship so easily but as you are friend of Pinky's fiance I will be your friend and with that they become shake their hands and have a unbreakable bonds". But something happens due to which the jealous factor overcome between their loving bond. At the end they become two bodies one soul.

So friend this is the first part of my first os

Do let me know how is it

Please hit the like button n comment which motivate me a lot

Note: this is my first attempt in writing an os as after reading so many FF/SS/OS on maaneet i want to pen down this random story which i liked it very much n please bear if any mistake is done let know know as it enhance my writing skills too.

n anybody want to be in my pmlist to add me as angelic_cute id

Luv

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Edited by angelic_cute - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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thanks a lot sweetie
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Posted: 13 years ago
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nice part dear..
pr thodda chota hai..
pls update soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Lovely update dear. continue soon.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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congrats dear on ur OS
wow loved the prologue n the first part
waiting to see what jealous played role in their love story
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Posted: 13 years ago
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awesome update.
Its very intresting.
love it.
do continue soon.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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awesome update
thanks for pm
cont. soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Very interesting Prologue...
In ur words..."Waiting and watching for the update of this amazing OS.."
Pls start soon...
Thanx for PM dear...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hi...sorry read the prologue before this post...
Title seems very unique...
Waiting eagerly for update...
Thanx for PM dear...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Awesome start dear...
Waiting for next update..
Thanx for pm...

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