SS-MG-CONFLICTING EMOTIONS(PART3-PG17) - Page 6

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nice start...
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Awsome...wow ab kya hoga!!!
Meera luvs yash
Yash luvs geet
Geet luvs maan
Maan luvs meera
Lets c dat is in ur mind...update soon
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lovedd it.. the gals have the rite boys in their hearts but boys... not really 😆

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amazing concept dear
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nice update..both pair in love..
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part 1
nice part...
oh ho Geet loves Maan but Maan loves Meera...
Meera loves Yash but Yash loves Geet...
and they are close friends...
very good...
cont soon dear...
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congrats for new ss
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yaha par to love square bana hua hai
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WHAT A COMPLICATED QUARTET
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PART-2

NEXT MORNING

geet woke up lazily, the morning was beautiful

geet- today i will tell you what i feel for you maan, i dont know what will you say, but now i can't wait more,i want to tell you how special you are to me, i dont know what will you say

geet called maan

maan was still in dreamland with meera, enjoying his time with her, when he heard the ringtone, he woke up

maan- haddd hain, i was seeing such a beautiful dream, dam this phone

he saw the phone and saw the name that was flashing

maan- why is this delhi express calling me, that to in morning??

he picked the phone up

maan- yup tell delhi express, aj you woke up so early..miracle??

geet- shut up you mr zalim khurana uff dhust danav, i think you haven't seen the time, thats why you are saying this, its already 11

maan- hahaha, dont joke geet, i am not in mood

and then seen towards the clock, and the next thing he heard

maan-ahhh, you geet handa, jaldi nahi utha sakti thi, idiot

geet- hello mr i am calling you from past 1 hrs, but ap hain ki lost in your dreamland

and maan again lost in his dream land

geet- hello, mr zalim khurana, are you there?? hello?

maan was still lost, geet was irritated

geet- maaannn

and she shouted, which brought back maan,and he said

maan- why are you shouting, i am like you, means deaf

geet-aww, you idiot, zalim, dhust danav, will kill you

maan- voh tho dekha jaiya ga, acha tell why have you called??

geet started blushing

geet- voh voh

maan was shocked and said

maan- geet you are fine na? i am coming with doctor

  • geet- have you gone mad, i am fine

maan- nahi i thought,the great geet handa stammering

geet was angry and shouted

geet- maaannn

maan- acha sorry now tell, why have you called

geet- i want you to meet me at 12 in coffee cafe


maan- why?

geet- why matalb? i wanted to tell you something

maan- ya i also wanted to tell you something

geet- than cool 12, vaise bhi we have to meet meera and yash at 1

maan- ok cool

geet- bye, zalim khurana

maan- bye delhi express

and they ended the call

...

other side

meera woke up, all blushing blushing,

she called yash

yash picked up the call

yash- hey meer

meera- good morning yash ji

yash- good morning meer gi

and again went to sleep

meera- utho yash

yash- sone do nah meera

meera- shut up and wake up or i am calling geet and telling

yash woke up in a swift

yash- meer i beg you please dont do this to me, she will kill me with her taunt and talk

meera started laughing

yash hain laugh laugh, when you will go through this, then i will ask you

and she started laughing more

meera- ok ok, meet you at 1

yash- ok bye,take care

and call ended

...

it was geet and meera's routine to wake them up, this were their habit to wake them, if they dont, their whole day went bad, and same happen with boys, if dont get call from girls, they felt that still morning has not come, this was beauty in their friendship

...

geet reached the cafe, she was hell nervous, she was practicing from 1 hour ,like a fool still she felt she is blank

geet- geet beta concentrate

geet- see its so simple, maan i love you, hain na

geet- so hell with simple, i am dieing, baba ji please save me

geet gluped as he saw maan approaching, looking hadsome as always

maan- hey delhi express, aj humari yaad kaise ayi

geet- voh voh, like this only

maan- hmm, acha i have to tell you something

geet- me to have to tell you something

maan- nahi geet i will tell you first , varna if i will you to speak you will never stop

geet- thats rude, mr zalim khurana

maan- acha listen, geet you know whta, i...means i, i am in love yaar

geet was totally shocked, but next couple of words broke her

maan- and you know who is the girl, arre your best friend, apni meer

geet smiled, but deep inside she was broken and was crying

maan- yaar i am feeling so so grest, bas i think about her only, you know, yaar do something, i want to be with her

geet was totaly broken, the person she love was in love with her best friend, she was crying inside, she want to run from there, but still smiled

geet- thats great

maan- what great, i thought you will jump like mad

geet again smiled

maan- acha leave it, you want to say something?

geet- nahi, nothing important

maan- importanat ho ya nah ho, tell na

geet smiled and said

geet- nothing, lets go, meer and yash will be waiting

maan hmm and they went

...

they four meet each other, they were busy chating, they were so lost that they didnt read the sad and broken face of geet

geet excused herself and went to washroom and cried and cried

the tears were endless, so was the pain, she composed herself and went out

...

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Edited by ishanidhi08 - 12 years ago

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