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Posted: 13 years ago

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Originally posted by: mandymore
m feeling sleepy...will read d update tmrw..take care dear...

sorry dear for making u wait

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mahimaneet

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Posted: 13 years ago

#532

thank u guys for all d likes and comments...love ya😊

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mahimaneet

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Posted: 13 years ago

#533

~SMITTEN BY LOVE~

(hopefully just 2-3 more parts to go😃)

PART-5

(SMITTEN BY LOVE means struck by lovein love with that person...just thought to expl...like a cupid strikes you wid an arrow, when u fell in love at the first sight...and if u r smitten by someone that means you are deeply ain )

His eyes were dark with passion...He smiled at me and I instantly turned away from him...maan lured me back reaching my black hair and ran his fingers right through to the tip...I was enticed to look back at him, and then I noticed him looking at my lips...He wanted to kiss me again...I wasn't planning on it, but desperately wanted to feel him again...so i closed my eyes, expecting him to rush and attack my lips...but then felt him touch the back of my neck...and then his lips, slowly wetted mine...it was only for few seconds and he pulled it back, but I wanted more...i bit my lips to hide my nervesness, while he smiled affectionately and took me in his arms, and smacked his lips on mine...my mind was in heaven and didn't wanted him to stop...while he just took me to another level of ecstacy...ohhh i was falling for this man who cocooned me in his arms like an precious treasure...

We kissed and kissed for eternity...like we possessed eachother...there where lot of questions running in my mind, and the answers looked lot more complicated...i shivered in his arms, thinking about what future we have together when he is already engaged...but then his one comforting squeeze, just washed away my all inhibition...i loved him and that was the only truth...and he too confessed that he liked me...wasn't that enough of a assurance...yes for me it was more then enough...

I hugged him more passionately, pressing him as close as possible...the chilling wild teased us for seeking eachothers warmth...Our heartbeats seemed to pound in time with each other and so loudly and so strongly...it all sounded so erotic, our breathing came in an sudden rasps...i was to much high in this new found desire...but then suddenly hearing some sound, i broke the kiss fearing if somebody saw us...

"dekho na, koi hai" i said looking here and there...

"ummm koi nahi hai...its just us here" he said nuzzling my hair...

"are you sure" i moaned feeling intoxicated with his sensual touch...

"don't speak, don't break the spell" he again hovered over my lips, slightly brushing his lips on mine...

"shhh...nobody is out here jaan" he whispered huskily, breathing on my lips..."just us" and he softly captured my lips in a slow passionate kiss...the feeling was so sensuous, that i could feel myself getting wet in anticipation...

We stayed there in eachothers arms...caressing and loving eachother...but suddenly it started raining...bringing us out of our cozy moment...i realised how intimate we have been just few minutes back...blushing i pulled myself away from him...and started walking towards his car...he pulled me back, making me collide with his firm musculine chest...

"maan" i moaned slowly meeting his gaze...feeling shy...

he kept staring at me, as we stood their drenching in rain...i had no guts to face him, as i knew how aroused i was for him...i softly leaned myself on his chest, hugging him with love...

"ghar chale" i slowly whispered on his skin, near his heart...and within no time he lifted me off the ground...carrying me in his arms, walking towards his car...heavy rain drops showered my face, as i hided myself in his chest...

He gently layed me on the passengers seat...and came from the other side, taking his drivers seat...i confusingly looked at him, as he started the car...

"woh driver kaha gaye"

"umm how can i let anyone see me romancing my love" he said with an teasing smile, making me blush even more...the word "love" echoed in my ears...am i dreaming, was he really calling me his love...i smiled looking away...but then what about his fiancee, wasn't that love...those picture which i have seen, them being together, so close, so happy...what was that...

I kept thinking throughout our way...silence prevailed between us, neither he broke that space, nor i intended to...i was feeling this immense pain, thinking what if he is using me for his lust...i was scared for an heartbreak...but then my reveries broke, when his hand softly caressed my curls...pushing them off my face...i looked at him, with my teary eyes...

"jaan what happened" he gently took me in his arms, getting concerened...

"did i hurt you" he cupped my face in his palms...while i shook my head saying no...

"then whats the matter" he sounded scared...fustrated...

"woh aapki...fiancee" i trembled forming my words...as i didnt wanted to hurt him...but alas i think i did hurt him...as he abruptly left me and turned his face away from me...

"i will sought that out" his tone was rough, harsh...like he was hurt and i knew it...there is something bothering him...may be his relation with his fiancee...thats why he was not happy when i saw him for the first time at the cafe...

"ohhh babaji he is already hurt and what i did...i hurted him more" i pouted cursing myself...

"jhalli kya jarurat thi unka mood kharab karne ki...ab dekho gussa ho gaye"

i kept playing with my curls, pushing them away...thinking how to manofy him...there was this abnormal silence between us...and i so much hated it...twisting my lips, i poked my finger on his back...

He turned around, facing me...raising his eye brow...kind off intimidating me...but whats the use, his mere presence was enough to make me shiver...and then his sexy looks...uff always left me trembling to feel him more carnally...

"woh...umm...woh" i was forming my words, for an excuse..."umm aapko choclates pasand hai" i chirpily jerked myself closer to him, as i found this topic of my intrest to talk with him...

"umm aapko pasand toh hogi na...waise bhi kis ullu ko choclates pasand nahi hoti" i giggled more girlishly, fetching my bag, searching for my choclate bar...

"mujhe nahi pasand" i heard his stern voice, halting my movements...i looked at him making a baby face, for unknowingly calling him ullu...

"aapko sachi mai nahi pasand" i was more concerened now...

"nahi"

"itna sa"

"nahi"

"jara sa"

"nahi" i could see he was irritated...

"thoda sa bhi nahi"

"nahi...he shouted...i hate choclates, do you get that" he jerked me close, holding my arms...burying his face in the crook of my neck...

"i promise i will sought it out...just trust me" he whispered painfully...breathing heavily...

I was now more concerened, as it all looked so confusing...i was pretty much sure from side, that i loved him...and thats why i let myself free to sway in his passion...but what about him, why he is doing this...his confession sounded so pure, so serene...like he finally found what he craved for so long...

but then if he loved me, then why he waited for so long to confess it...and now his passion, he is just making me drown in the same whirlpool of desire...

Babaji is definately playing games with me...i pouted looking up...still in his strong embrace...he hugged me more firmly, as i circled my arms around his neck, just gently keeping my head on his shoulders...thinking what to expect next...i was really unsure about the ongoing situations...so kept adjusting my head and armns around him, making myself comfy in his hold...

"stay still jaan...kitna hilti ho tum" he chuckled...squeezing myback...

"umm mujhase nahi hota" i pouted, still adjusting my face on his shoulder...rubbing my cheek on his shirt...

"aise karogi toh...mujhase fir control nahi hoga" he huskily whispered, making it sound so sensuous...then nuzzled his nose on my shoulder, gently biting it...

"ahhh..." i moaned pressing him more close to me...intending to begin our act of passion...

But then it was too late to stay out, or rather to stay together...as knowing him he had that power to snatch anyones virginity, with just his mere look...and for that matter i really didnt trusted myself with him around...so better call it a day off...

"maan its too late...let me go" i moaned as his long sexy fingers kept playing with the hook of my bra, above my shirt...

"ummm" he hugged me more closely, showing his wild intentions...

"please chodo na" i playfully scratched his back...

"not before i love you enough sweetheart" he continued giving me sensuous kisses all around my neck and shoulder...

"maan please" i tried softly pushing him away...but then he was admant...

"jaan please...few minutes more" he pleaded like a small baby...and i had to agree for his demands...he gave a victorious grin, finding my surrender...then kissed me more lusciously, tasting every nook and corner of my mouth...

"ummm"...i pulled my lips, out of his mouth...breathing heavily..."ab chalo let me go"...and straightening my cloths, i looked at the rear view mirror...and adjusted my hair...i looked at my swollen lips, then blushed realising maan was staring at me...

"are they hurting" he spoke teasingly...leaning casually on his car door...

but i could senses what was playing in his mind...so before he grab me again...i came out of the car...and started walking, without bidding him goodbye...but right in the next moment i found myself carnally pushed againt the car door...and maan pressing himself on me..."my good bye kiss??????" he raised his eye brows looking at my lips...and before i could act anything, he captured them for a slow gentle one...

We kissed eachother goodbye and i turned slowly...wanting to drink in the sight of him before I head to my door...I had only walked one step when maan again grabbed my arm and pulled me towards him again, pressing me close to him with his arm around my waist as we kissed...All of ours kisses were sweet and gentle, heartfelt and meaningful, but this one was different...It was still meaningful but the way he pressed his lips to mine so passionately sent a wave of heat running through me...This kiss was hot and filled with longing...He broke away and left me breathless, feeling as if my knees might just give in...His gaze set on mine and I knew immediately what was going to happen next...Closing the distance between us i returned his kiss and gripped his shirt as it intensified...We held the kiss for as long as we could, neither one of us wanting to break away until it got to the point where we were both out of breath and clinging to each other...

But then his mobile rang...and we broke apart, for him to take his call...i was blushing thinking about our closeness, and the future together...but then heard his cold voice...

"yes mom...i am on my way"

"..."

"will talk to you when i come back"

"..."

"what ever she said is all true"

"..."

"i said i will talk to you"

"..."

"atleast let me reach home"

And he smashed his phone on the ground, making me stunned with his anger...i looked at him feeling scared, concern...but then his expression was perfectly masked to make out anything...

"sab thik hai na" i said in a low trembling voice...but he didnt answered, rather ignored me. and left from there...screeching his car away, at an immense speed...

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Precap:- twist😲

hello sweeties...sorry for being late...par kya karu not getting enough time to sit and type anything...today i was free so could manage this part...tommorow will give you another part of FOD...and then FOL...just bear wid me till next tuesday...and after that i will get some time to breath...

enjoy this part...and let me know wat u feel about teh twist...n mind it i want 200+ likes...warna acha nahi hoga😡

pls hit the like button and comment...

love ya

varsha😃

Edited by mahimaneet - 13 years ago

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crazyfangc

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Posted: 13 years ago

#534

superbbb,amazingg now i cant wait nexttt

Edited by crazyfangc - 13 years ago

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sobia4maaneet

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Posted: 13 years ago

#535

1stly welcome back i must say ...😊

seriously varsha di ..i thought monday morning after giving my test ill be having a couple to read atleast ...but then u r always un-predictable ..😃

THIS WAS A ROMANTICALLY DESPERATE HOT UPDATE ... i must say 😉😳

this maan is really nt at all ready to let her go ...😳

poor geet cant even trust herself with him around ..

after all MSK ko resist kar pana koi aasaan kaam tiu hai nahi ...😆😳😳

i am getting a clue that maan is nt having a good family bond ...

thts y the feel of longingness ...
so hopefully next update mien we'll get the official news of maan's break up with Sam ...

waiting 2 knw more ...

thnxx for the update ...😊

i hope u will be free with ur work load soon ...😊

take care di ..😊

luv ya ...❤️🤗

Edited by sobia4maaneet - 13 years ago

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TeamMcSwarek

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Posted: 13 years ago

#536

That was intense and hot
but Maan's anger is kind of scary

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mahimaneet

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Posted: 13 years ago

#537

chalo guys now off to sleep🥱...will see u tommorow wid FOD update...mummy sirf 4 hours ki neend hi milegi ab, fir again office...leave me nice comments n likes😊...will reply u tommorow...bye n gud morning😃

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love2_soma

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Posted: 13 years ago

#538

awesome n naughty update...

loved it very much...

but wht will happen nw...m worried abt geet...

thank u sooo much fr d lovely update...

eagerly waiting fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...

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Jeba Rahman

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Posted: 13 years ago

#539

superb update.
seems like maan was forced to his relationship because of his parents.
now what about this twist is good ya bad ?
Plz try to update next part soon.

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sobia4maaneet

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Posted: 13 years ago

#540

Originally posted by: mahimaneet
chalo guys now off to sleep🥱...will see u tommorow wid FOD update...mummy sirf 4 hours ki neend hi milegi ab, fir again office...leave me nice comments n likes😊...will reply u tommorow...bye n gud morning😃

gud nite di ...🥱

have some awesom maan's dream ..😉

n a very good day ahead ...😊

luv ya ...🤗