~KHATTA MEETA PYAR~ MG FF#2 NEW THREAD CHECK PG 1 - Page 29

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Part 14:

With excruciating Passion urging from an Innocent Hug, The Two lost their time around, along with their Mind around...

They say, in poetic words, love or attraction starts with a Spark...When u have a different feel of connotion with someone suddenly u feel butterflies with their touch, u feel the whole surrounding brighten around u and u have white angels surrounding ur head... it seems quite dramatic, yet Maan had this weird filmy feeling with the first intense touch of a gal to his Lucky hands, though he has touched her already to save her once, now the situation is totally different as somewhere in deep down mind, they both had the feeling of this fake things are actually happening in real, they cant deny the fact...

Geet pressed her lips together with eyes closed, to suppress a weird sound escaping her mouth... This guy seems to bring out everything in her, which even she has not known.. his innocent touches for the first time affected deep down in her heart, for a moment, from a stone she thought she would be blossomed into a women second time after her birth...

Sometimes U Can Close Ur Eyes, For the Things Which U Dont wish To See...

But U Cant Close Ur Heart , For Things U Dont Want To feel...
Some feeling are beyond ur control, they just surge deep into ur heart ...

And Make their Own place even Without Ur permission...

And This Feeling is Later Called as Love, As U Realize it!!!

Well, Maan and Geet are in same kind of struggle deep down in their hearts... Their relationship is something wat is enigma to themselves, they might convince and put a cover to it in the name of FAKE, but everything is happening Really Real...

ZZz...ZZz...

Geet's eyes jerked open with the feeling of something virbrating against her heart, making her jitter... she wriggled not making it obvious to still hawk eyes of her Aunt and Mother, while Maan moved in a dazed state...

Maan: Hayeee...lagtha hain mera heart vibrate horaha hain.. he whispered dreamily, still tickling her senses with his hot breath near her soft earlobes, while she bit her lips to control the new feelings...

Geet: U Idiot...its not ur heart, Its Ur Mobile Vibrating...Cut it off...she whispered dangerously into his ears, making him come of his imagination...

Maan snorted his nose...: Chudail kahin ki... ek dream sequence ko bhi puri karna nahi derahi hain.. main bhi na...is ke saath duet dance imagine kiya..grrr...is ke behthar meri Katrina hain..Sowwy Kat , I wont ditch u next time for this Chudail... he muttered getting more confused y he opted over Geet than Katrina for his dream duet sequence...

Geet was getting more uncomfortable with the vibration, as she could feel it right on her curves... she twisted uncomfortably, while Maan still didnt have the mind to come out of the hug...he moved his left hand slowly over her right shoulders, while the other hand was still sticking to her bare back... She felt her little hairs rising on the skin and goosebumps following his path...She lost it...

Geet: dumbo..Y the hell are U doing everything in a Slow Motion??? She gritted her teeth, while Maan chuckled...

Maan: Arghh..as if i do everything on my accord, i was thought of not making it obvious, cos ur Mom now is collecting audience to see Our so called Chemistry, History and Geography... he spat...

Geet: U...U..dare u say anything about My Mom...Ur Sister is Not so less, She is taking a Short film on us!!! She muttered and was about to continue, when her voice stuck in the middle and there escaped a loud gasp, when Irritated Maan plunged his right Hand into her Saree, touching her curves over the blouse, instead of searching the mobile which was stuck between them...

His innocent hands struggled locating the area of vibration, when Geet felt like murdering him at anymoment...her eyes popped up, feeling his hands moving in a wrong direction and that it...

Aaahhh... he hissed with a contact of something sharp piering his hands, as she pinched him with her sharp nails..bitting into his ears...

Geet: Mr.Khurana...search the Mobile in ur pocket..not inside My Saree..

Maan: errmmm... he bit his lips... getting embarrassed SSSorrry...he purred into ears when she smiled hearing his baby tone...

Finally with all the struggle the mobile stopped its vibration, getting tired by itself..

Maaneet were totally stuck...with both side... they stood there for more than half an hour, coyly hugging each other and purring profanities into each other's eyes...

Finally Geet sighed, thanking Payal for dragging who was shooting Maaneet angle badal badal ke...

Geet: grr...I think..Ur Sister has completed her film shooting...Now Move... she roared..she pulled him drastically atmost making him fall...

Maan frowned at her gritting his teeth...making a baby face, that's when his mobile rang again... he annoyingly took the phone it was Dadima..

Maan: Kya hain Dadima.. he rolled his eyes looking at Geet, who was busily checking her saree...

Dadi: agar..if u both are over with ur romacing, can u pls come and attend ur own engagement??? Dadi smugged her giggle...

Maan(ST): Romance My foot...he snorted his nose... he cut the call and turned to Geet...

Maan: Come lets go... he said going towards the hall...

Geet: but where??? She asked getting confused...

Maan: To Fall into Hell Together... he mocked, while Geet stomped her foot and followed him...

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They entered back into a fully decorated hall, Where everybody gave both a sheepish smile...

Geet glared back at Maan, as if he did a terroristic act, while he bit his lips getting confused, especially seeing Annie's naughty smile...

Maan(ST): kahin yeh ladki Youtube mein toh nahi daali uss video ko... he glared at Annie deadly, when Payal glared back at him... Y this all women race is always against me...he made a puppy face ...while Sharda announced...

Sharda: Aap log aagaye..chalo... lets start the engagement ceremony...

Maan sighed: lo...bas iski kami thi...

They both were lead to a well decorated Stage, where there were two chairs kept in the Middle...

Geet stumbled a little but finally grabbed her Sari highly and climbed the stage, making Maan smug his giggle...

They sat on the chair, when Payal Took Arti to both and kept tilak on their foreheads, Geet looked everything weirdly... and made a cribbing face at Rano, who rolled her eyes... she was never used to all these Indian Rituals...

Finally after everybody blessed the couple, when Punditji asked them both to get up...

Geet: Engagement over??? She asked getting uninterested, while Annie chuckled...

Annie: Nahi bhabhi...still Ring ceremony is there... she said and showed two decorated boxes which had beautifully carved gold rings adorned with diamonds on them...

Everything stopped at the moment, when her eyes spotted the couple rings... every bitter memories crashed down at the same time.. she stood numb...she heard nothing wat's happening around her...
It happens when , we take a single step towards our lives, forgetting the past... destiny pulls thousand steps behind all of a sudden and u feel this living is not worth...nothing... Though Geet didnt intend to change anything in her life... she was completely made to forget all her bitter memories, just by the entry of one Man into her life... Maan...
Series of Emotions crashed down and she felt volcanoes erupting from the pit of her heart... her fist tightened with her lips grimed and grunted tightly... Pain of getting betrayed, Pain of getting cheated, Pain of Loosing a biggest possession in her life... All started with one such Ring... her eyes became cloudy , making blood shot up her veins due to the memories of her disgusting past... she sucked her breath in feeling suffocated and stood there like a stone, unable to move on nor move back...

Unaware all her turmoils, Everybody were hooting and whisteling the couple, when Maan rolled his eyes... Annie nudged him to take the ring, which he took it for names sake and looked at Geet, who's head were low... he blinked his eyes for a second, when Sharda whispered to Geet..

Sharda : bte...Give ur hands, he is waiting... she slowly whispered to Geet, who seemed to have forgotten the whole world around...
Worried Sharda looked at Rano, who was starting continuously at Geet's reaction... She knows this would happen...She knows her daughter will dread her past in this moment... she is helpless... she nodded her head in denial submerging her tears, when Sharda looked her sister controlling her tears too... She clutched Geet's hands and raised it toward's Maan who was getting suddenly Confused at Geet's silence...

The movement of her hands jerked Geet out of her reverie and her eyes went to her cursed finger, which bore that Traitor's ring once... she looked at it deeply, it still had the white patch mark, where she has worn TAT ring before... her face turned disgusted just by the sight of that mark and she clutched her that finger with her right hand and scratched the Marks wildly making her finger almost bleed..

Sharda panicked and held Geet's hands not obvious to the crowd..: Geet..What the heck are u doing..Geet...ur finger is gonna bleed..Geet stop it...

The look of that Mark, turned her wild, she scratched tat place with her long nails cruelly, drawing pool of tears from Rano's eyes... she cried clutching her heart...while Dadima stood tensed unable to know wat to do...

Maan was getting pissed off... he didnt understand wat she was doing with her hand...Everybody were shouting at Maan to make Geet wear the ring as they thought She is playing by not showing her fingers...Maan rolled his eyes, the Next moment he did something that Made Rano and Sharda gasp in shock while other's hooted and whisteled not understanding the situation...

Irritated Maan, finally Pulled Geet's left hand for once and Slipped the Ring on over her red ring finger completely hiding her white patch mark..
Geet jerked with his sudden pull and before she could react, she felt a cold metal on her burning fingers... her eye balls stood frozen looking Maan's ring perfectly slid into her slender red fingers, completely concealing her past Mark...

The Gesture is very simple,nothing is planned, but her destiny has been planned... she turned her palms slowly trying to spot her Mark, but she could only find her present...Tat's His Ring..Maan's Ring... Her Past seemed completely disappeared... she shockingly looked up to see not her Past standing on her way to move on...But Maan standing before her, with his hands stretched ready to welcome her into his Future, willingly or unwillingly...knowingly or unknowingly...

The Three women, who knew her real turmoils, were really astound with the reaction of Geet...they expected her to burst the bubbles or cry badly not able to move on...but seeing her dazed state... something hit them.. The relationship that they are jhapping so called is not FAKE, but Purely REAL with deepest emotion...

Like a A Puppet under the control of strings, Like children Behind the Pied Piper, Her hands which clutched Maan's ring, went up and its not her hand that inserted the ring into his finger...But her subconscious heart, which has already rooted a small sapling called LOVE...for the Man before her... Yet to be discovered...

With the Sound of Thunderous Claps around her.. she turned around to hear, She is Finally engaged to the Man beside her, whom holds a secret place in her heart, which still her mind doesn't seem to reciprocate... The stagnant tears of the butchered heart...still rolled down making a pool on her porcelain skin..making the crowd get shocked at once...

Payal: Geet...??? Tu ro kyun rahi ho???? She asked getting panic, when Tears of confusion rolled down in torrents from Geet's big hazel eyes...

Maan suddenly turned to look at her eyes... he felt his earth crashing down for no reason..just her tears.. Geet... he was about to say something but they heard a Voice..

Rano: Its nothing..She is Missing her Dad... Rano announced, making the Whole crowd look at Geet with a sad face... She knows,her daughter is in such a vulnerable state...she may break down if the situation gets prolonged...

Everybody agreed to Rano...but not Maan...he could see something more in her eyes... the same broken eyes, which held something soo deep whenever she cried... Geet excused herself out and went to get some cool air, while Maan couldn't move as he was surrounded by his friends congratulating him...but still his eyes were behind her trying to locate her in the crowd...

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Meri bachi... Didi..Meri bachi ko aur kitna dukh dega yeh bhagwan...Rano cried holding Sharda's hands seeing Geet's state... yeah she induced Geet into all the situation...but as a mother...she is dieing each minute to see her daughter being burnt into ashes cos of her past...Rano was crying bitterly, when she felt a hand on her shoulders...

Sab kuch teek hojayega... Dekhlena...Agar Bhagwan hain toh..wo Geet ki kushi fir se waapas loutadenge... Dadima pressed Rano's shoulders, wiping her tears... Rano nodded in acceptance when Dadi suggested...

Dadi: Rano...abhi Geet ko humare zaroorath hain... wo bahot tuti hui hain...chal hum uske paas chalthe hain... She suggested and moved Rano's Wheel chair, both went out of the Room in search of Geet...

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It was a Cold yet not windy night... She sat in the middle of the huge deserted garden, with her fingers rolling the ring again and again as if she is trying to locate her reason for living like this...yet she couldn't... Tears were non-stop rolling from her puffy eyes, making a streak of her dark mascara getting melted...

Her tormented heart, suddenly stopped getting beating wildly, with a warm structure sitting beside her... she didnt need introduction..without prior notice, this Man has already occupied her Life... she felt a soothing aura around and the next moment, her head fell onto his broad chest and snuggled close into it...hiding her all pains into his embrace...

Maan smiled at her gesture... Who will believe This Geet Handa would become such a child when she gets broken for something... Only he... Only he has seen various phases of this Moon...silently hiding and weeping into his embrace... without any awkwardness...this seemed to be so natural between them...

His right hand slowly rubbed her back, while she hiccupped into his chest slowly... She dont have the strength to share her bitter part of life with anyone...but she only had the strength to show her Tears Before This Man... She never cared about it to show her weakness to him..

Maan: U know wat... I hate NaCl H2O.... he said in a gentle whisper...while Geet sniffed her nose and looked upto him confusingly...

Geet: Wwat??? She said between her hiccups with her red face...

Maan : Wohi toh... Geeta..I Hate Tears...he took a small pearl of her tear in his fingers and smiled naughtily...

Geet rolled her puffy eyes, and gave a serious look...making Maan chuckle..bad Jokee...Ttry Somethinggg elsse... she said in her low yet stern voice and again hid her face into his chest..

Maan sighed , actually smiled a bit at her weird behaviour...

Maan: Ok...Cry...Cry..howmuch ever u want cry...but one thing am sure...People are gonna run geeting hell scared seeing ur face...he said very seriously, when she immediately rose her head and glared at him gritting her teeth...

Geet: What??? U...U... she raised her hand to strangle him, when he caught them before getting damaged...

Maan: Oye..am not telling lies... All ur makeup got washed due to ur tears and ur smudged Mascara is making the Great Maan Singh Khurana scared u know... he said with a scary face... Making Geet fume at once...

She made a funny angry and wiped her face with the handkey...

Geet: Now???... she glared at him..expecting him to compliment her...

Maan: haaan...Now less scary... he blurted and bit his lips, seeing her fuming face once again...

Their eyes unknowingly got stuck at a point, making their eyes locked...
A Small smile simultaneously crept on both their lips... thinking over their silly arguement.. it seemed so natural between them...he making her irriate to hell while she unknowingly getting deeply into his antics ...
Maan smiled widely, making her cheeks form dimples... both had a silent laugh for a while , Geet rolled her eyes...thinking he yet again succeeded in making her smile...Gosh..this man makes me loose before him all the time... her heart spoke...

Geet: U dont have the Habit of Thinking Before U Speak Right??? She asked out of the blue, making Maan make faces... he scratched his head not getting her while she whispered more into her...

Geet: And I Like U For tat... she grinned childishly making him more get collapsed...

Maan(ST): yeh ladki na..sach much Ajeeb hain.. grrr.. he made a puppy irritating face and turned around...
His breath stuck at throat looking around to see, the climate getting more and more dense, with darkness engulfing the garden...

Maan: Wooo...he stammered with a scared face... its getting dark, lets go inside... he said walking ahead,, while Geet smirked..

Geet: So The Great Maan Singh Khurana is yet again afraid of darkness..Shall I call ur Dadima... she said mocking, while Maan gritted his teeth glaring at her...

Maan: What a beautiful habit u have...Irritating me...Congratulations... btw... am going inside... he rushed almost running, when Geet shouted from his back...

Geet:Mr.Maan Singh Khurana...Irritating U has Become My Birth Right... she screamed , making him fume at her as usual...

Maan: Chudail..chudail...Chudail...he screamed at her and ran away making Geet stand there with her mouth wide open...

Geet: Hey...U again said that same word...Gosh..wats that..Maaan...Waaaiiittt...Im not gonna Leave U... She ran behind him clutching her saree, which seems to irritate her more than him today...

Unknown to themselves, there stood two figures hidden inside the garden hearing every their talks...

Rano smiled through tears, when Dadima giggled at their cuteness...
Dadi: pata hain Rano...i still had a bit of worry about how they would be together, as they claim everything was fake... but now am not at all in a dilemma... Thee two deserved to be stuck together for the next sever births i bet..

Rano nodded her head vigourously but suddenly turned to Dadi...

Rano: Maaji...this means are U sure about Wat we planned to do at the end of the function...??? she asked with a little tension, while Dadi smiled mischievously...

Dadi: ab mein 200% sure hoon...chal...hum bhi dekhlenge..yeh dono kitno din tak yeh khel khelte hain...

Both Went back to the hall not before planning an atom bomb for their next target...

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Maaan..Geeet...

Maaan...Geeet...

Maaan..Geeettt...

All of them cheered hooting for Maaneet to dance as the dance floor was opened..

Maan nodded his head vigourously as still Geet was looking at him murderously for calling her with TAT word...

Annie: Bhabhi...pls...dont be a spoil sport...comon... She shrieked in her family tone, among the loud music, making Geet control to close her ears...

Geet: No Annie... its am too tired... she said with a weak smile...while Annie dragged Maan to Geet...

Annie: Bhai this is not fair...look all are in the dance floor...plsss...plsss..plsss..she begged, making Maan make a baby pleading face at Geet... Finally Geet agreed and reluctantly clutched Maan's hand almost squeezing it...

They both reached the Dance floor...

Thankfully there was dimlight and a random music was playing at the back..Maan stood blinking his eyes, nervously...when Geet gave a weird look...

Geet: What are u oogling at Dance...??? she said irritatingly holding his hands...

He nodded his head getting little scared and looked around...all were almost doing the same steps with their one leg in front...one at the back... he sighed... Simple hain...

He held her hands positioning them... the Music changed its beat and both kept their one leg infront together...

AAAhhh!!! Maan screamed holding his legs, as Geet stamped his with her high heels...

Geet: Sorryy..she said biting her lips, when Maan nodded his head with a puppy face...

They again got into a position and stepped their right leg against at the same time...

Ouccchhh!!! This Time its Geet... U Idiot...Dance properly... she screamed holding her legs, when Maan murmured..Wohi toh..mujhe nahi aata... he mumbled ..

Geet: Now y are u speaking to urself.. ??? she asked getting irritated...

Maan: I Dont know these kind of Dances... enough...happy... he spat making faces...

It took sometime for Geet to understand, her expressions mellowed a bit... she pulled him towards a darkest spot and asked him unbelievingly..

Geet: U really dont know ball room dance atleast...

Maan nodded his head in negative...

Geet: Atleast.. Salsa??? She asked expecting him to nod head in accordance...

Maan: Is it any Chinese Dish??? U are hungry kya??? He asked very innocently while Geet felt like banging her head...

Geet: Argghhh its a dance style... ufff...i cant believe..u dont know any styles like Samba, Romba..atleast free style...?

Maan's eyes brightened...: Yeah...I know this Sambhar..u know wat..its sooo tasty..i loveee it...the best in South Indian Dishes...

Geet held her hands tightly... she couldn't handle it...she sighed... : Ok...now lets come to ur choice... What the hell type of dance u know atlast...??? she tried to mellow her anger ...while Maan smiled proudly..

Maan: Punjabi Sher hoon Mein..I know Bhangra and Bollywood style...U want to see a sample??? He asked raising his collar...

Geet nodded her head slightly like lets see what he does...the next moment she got the shock of her life...

He raised his hands in the air and sang jumping...

HAYO RABBA HAYO RABBA ''''''

GADDE TE NA CHAD DI GADIRE TE NA CHAD DI

GADDE TE NA CHAD DI GADIRE TE NA CHAD DI

CHHADEYAN DE TATTU UTTE TAP CHHAD DI

BOLO TARA RA RA, TARA RA RA, KANJRI KALOL KARDI

Geet's eyes opened wide in shock, while Maan excitedly started doing his bhangra... she made a crying face...

Geet: Out of all in the world..U got him for me to stuck with... Godd..i hate u... she folded her hands and waited for him to stop dance...rather say jumping...

Finally Maan got exhausted with his so called dance and panted looking at Geet with a proud smile...

Geet: Over...?? Ur Singing and Dancing??? She asked seriously while he replied..

Maan: Haan...

Geet: Do by any chance, the Singer of this Song know U ARE SINGING HIS SONG???

Maan: What stupid question is this...how do he know?? He asked rolling his eyes...

Geet: Then by chance..dont say to him..he will commit Suicide.. with that she walked away making Maan open his mouth wide...

Maan: Argghhh..how much i want to muder her...he stomped his foot and walked behind her to dance floor...
He stood crossing his hands over chest and tapped his foot..while she chuckled...

Geet: This is not a museum to give statue poses...its a dance floor..and dont ever try to jump and scare ppl around her... follow what i teach ok... she literally gave a warning to which he nodded twisting his lips...

Geet sighed: Ok... hold my waist.. she said making a mind to make him learn atleast few single steps...

But suddenly Maan became serious: Omg..its Ok... I know U Dont know to dance like Me...dont call Urself a Waste... he said very seriously with a pathetic look on his face...

Geet's eyes widened hearing his words...

Geet: Are U by Birth a Tubelight...Or U became one Suddenly ??? she asked gritting her teeth, for which Maan looked at her not understanding this too...

Geet: I said hold my Waist...W-A-I-S-T...not waste u idiot...grrr... she spat, when he made a puppy face bitting his lips and
whispered sorry...

Finding no other go, she pulled his hands and kept it on her bare waist without knowing she is wearing a saree...Maan chuckled at the sudden contact, but the start of the music made them forget their awkwardness...infact...Maan is Maan... he did Sangra (Salsa+Bhangra) in his own style, making Geet laugh like hell...

There is a usual proverb...

Calm Before Storm...May be their happy smiles where the indication of this...

Maaneet were unusually enjoying and giggling making mess of the dance floor, along with the whole other family members, Maan eventually pushing Rahul away from Geet and the surrounding was jittering in happiness, until they heard a Sound...

Attention Please...!!!

Sharda Announced while everybody turned getting confused and the music stopped...

Dadima and Rano wants to declare Something here...very important...

Maaneet who were standing unconsciously holding their hands..gave a look to each other..Now what they are upto..grrr...

Dadi: On this happy occasion,me along with Geet's mother Rano have also decided the further happenings... Maan And Geet's Marriage is fixed after two weeks... and the Date will be announced shortly... Party time...

Everybody hooted and Congratulated Maaneet who stood there with a shock written over their faces...

Maan's hand unknowingly loosened out of the grip in shock, making Geet realise the gravity of the situation.. She looked at Maan's terrified face clearly indicating...he is not happy with what he heard...neither she...
Geet's heart felt like she would burst any moment...its too late...they should have handled it before itself... she turned and looked at Rano painfully, who had guilt written all over her face ..she turned away, when Geet felt a lump in her heart...How could her mom do this to her??? Didnt she do all these things to make her happy??? But still Y cant she understand her daughter???

Tears of not getting understood by her own mother chocked her heart... But she wiped her tears...with a sarcastic smile of once again cheated by the one whom she expected to stand by her...she marched towards her
Mother and Pulled her Wheel chairs driving it into a Room nearby ...

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Maan stood there like a rock... Everything was going on well right...now this is like a blow to them... he is still not in a mindset to understand the situation but something hit him and he turned to his right to see Geet no where ... he hit his head with his hand... he knows about Geet's anger... though he could understand the seriousness of the situation its very needed to stop Geet before she says something out of her anger...he rushed into the hall searching for her...

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What Sin I did to U that U want to play with My life Maa...???? she shouted with a voice filled with rage overpowering her words...

Geet...Rano tried to interrupt when Geet showed her hands to stop...

Enough Maa..Enough of me trying to act like a puppet just for ur happiness...Not only me...I made that Poor guy to dance accordingly to my Wish...Just to see U happy...But How can U even Take a Decision without consulting me??? Her tears shot out of her eyes like torrents, while she wiped them harshly...

U were spying on us Right..?? U were trying to find out the Truth on our relationship Right??? Then Hear me... Me and Maan were faking that we are in a relationship...we were faking everything because I didnt want to break ur heart... But now I Dont Care Maa... I dont care about My life or Ur Wishes...I cant see HIM Suffer due to my commitments towards u...I am not gonna Play with his Life anymore... Please Leave us... I didnt expect U to play with Other's life just for ur Daughter's future... She made a disgusting face and turned away, to see Maan standing with a shocked face ...her face was full of guilt , she couldn't meet his innocent eyes anymore... Rano cried holding her heart hearing her daughter's words of being called selfish... She never intended but it happened..her voice chocked along with tears...she tried to explain, while Geet straight away shouted ...

Geet: Not a Word More Maa...Am going to say to Maan's family and end everything... she turned swiftly and was about to Go..when
Maan shouted...

Maaa... he shouted and ran to Rano, who fainted holding her heart in her wheel chair...While Geet stood rooted...seeing another one in her life...on the way away from her...

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CITY HOSPITALS

INTENSIVE CARE UNIT...

None spoke anything... No words could stop people in venting out their grievance about Rano..while Geet stared into the glass of the Room with a blank expression...

All the others in Maan's family along with Maan and Sharda who were standing for past 4 hours as the Doctor's said Rano had a mild attack and is now out of danger...yet nobody other than Maaneet and Rano knew the reason...including Dadi and Sharda...

The Nurse informed, that they can Go and Meet Rano as she seemed to have gained conscious...Everybody rushed into the room, while Geet still stood near the entrance, not able to see her Mother's face... She stood away from the bed with tears rolling down...

Maan sighed looking at a Mother, who wishes to see her daughter happily get married and a daughter, who does everything for her Mother...
He slowly walked towards Rano and sat near her bed holding her hands, while Tears of Pain rolled down from her eyes...Maan nodded his head in negative and rubbed them away...

Maan: aapko pata hain Maa...aap bhi aapki beti jaise rotlu mat baniye... dono serial heroine ki tarah dikthi ho... he said with a baby face, while Rano smiled weakly... Geet looked at the duo not understanding anything while all smiled hearing Maan's words...

Maan turned to Geet who was standing with a stern look at Maan..:
Dekhiya na Maa...kaise ghoor ghoor ke dekrahi hain... yeh mujhe bahot dara rahi hain maa... he pointed Geet and stuck his tongue out, when Geet couldn't stop reacting...she gritted her teeth glaring at him...

Rano smiled lightly: Beta..isko hindi samaj nahi aati na...isliye...she reasoned for her daughter..when Maan spoke making everybody gasp...

Maan: Mein hoona...isko Zindagi baar keliye dictionary banne keliye...

Everynody looked at him confused, when Maan walked to Geet and stood near her...the next moment, Geet felt his rough hands, slipping on her waist and holding her tightly...she turned and looked at him shocked...while he said to Rano...

Maan: Toh Momma...When Are u Gonna make me and This English Pressure Cookware get Married...???

Tats it...everybody squealed in excitement, when Rano thanked him with her tears...except Shocked Geet, still kept looking at the face of the Maan holding her tightly like he is not gonna leave her in this birth..!!!

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Precap:

Geet pulled Maan harshly into the deserted corridor ...

Geet : What the heck was that...???? Y did u tell them like that When u in the first place know what is the truth behind our relationship...???

Maan stood there still like a hard rock...

Geet: Enough Maan...Im not going to continue this play anymore...u understood it..Not anymore...!!! she released his clutched collar and was about to walk away , when he held her hands...

Maan: Ok...Go and Say anything... But before that Promise Me one thing..

Geet looked at him Puzzled, when he held her arms and dragged her near the room in which Rano was in...They could hear the excitement of everybody happily planning for the marriage ...

Maan: Promise me...even after hearing the truth.. They will Still have this smile on their lips and glow on their faces...If U can Do Tat...U can Go and say anything...I m not bothered...

Geet stood rooted, for the first time in her life, not having the heart to wipe the smile on their faces...

They have come so much towards this fake play... but this time... her hands automatically held and clubbed with his Maan's finally to make it really REAL :)

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Edited by alwayzzgurti - 12 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesome update AG
👏 👏 👏

I so much loved the roller coaster ride
Maaneet hug 😉 with spectators🤓 around
n they analysing the surroundings😆

Maaneet hug mein mobile kyu ghusaya😕
Maan chance maaring😉
haath saaf kar rahan hein Geet pe😆
jab Maan ke paas Geet hein to Kat ki kya zaroorat😔

Engagement was emotional
Poor Geet😭 her scarred past made way to her memories again but Maan shut door on it leaving no room for her painful past😳

Truly destiny has its own ways to pave its path through

Loved Maan🤗 the way he handles Geet not digging in her past n making her smile
Geet finds her solace in his arms😳

Geet's😒 outburst brought out her inner feelings for Maan
she was worried about his life rather than her family
proving how much he means to her👍🏼

Loved how Maan handled the whole scenario

Finally Maaneet to get married
😃

Edited by heytal - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
AG dear entire part was fabulous maan and geet dance and maan so called dance was hillarious and while ring ceremony geet's emotional turmoil and maan gestures to make her better was really too ggoood and the last blow for them whn marriage date was announced was shock for them while they try make all fake the fate has other plan for them
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Posted: 13 years ago
Acting karte karte they have come closer to reality!!!

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