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Posted: 13 years ago
mel tu din ba din aur khatar naak hotiii ja rahiii haiii yaaar
muahhh
luved d update part 23 whr romeo makes pammi do all d house works
but yeh kyaa this stupid maan doesnt hv his brains or what
hate him tht he should atleast doubt his mom for 1st maybe he would hv been proved wrong if romeo had done it
but then atleast it would be like he trusted geet's words
but he out n out thought geet is wrongg
waiting for next part
n smwhr in part 23 or 24 u wrote full hindi but u wrote st
its sounds weird
just make it bethakar thts hindi of sit
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Posted: 13 years ago
So maan s again going to repeat the same mistake??
shocking part..
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Posted: 13 years ago
part 24
nice part...
disgusting Pammi is so low...
well if this time Maan didnt believe Geet then i dont want Geet to be with him ever...
he doesnt deserve her at all...
cont soon dear...
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Posted: 13 years ago

argghhh!!!!!!!!!! iss pammi ki toh🤬

something big is gonna happen in next update

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: rsroopali

mel tu din ba din aur khatar naak hotiii ja rahiii haiii yaaar

muahhh
luved d update part 23 whr romeo makes pammi do all d house works
but yeh kyaa this stupid maan doesnt hv his brains or what
hate him tht he should atleast doubt his mom for 1st maybe he would hv been proved wrong if romeo had done it
but then atleast it would be like he trusted geet's words
but he out n out thought geet is wrongg
waiting for next part
n smwhr in part 23 or 24 u wrote full hindi but u wrote st
its sounds weird
just make it bethakar thts hindi of sit

😆thanks roops for pointing it out
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Posted: 13 years ago
OMG!! Maan Misunderstood Romeo
grrr ..hope believe Geet
waiting for next
continue soon
thankx for pm
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Posted: 13 years ago


Part 25
G:Romeo what are you saying. Why did you do this
R:Well she deserved it
G:I know but what will Maan be thinking. How will I make him understand
R:I was thinking to trow these files about Pammi into the media that will open his eyes.
Geet looked at the file, her eyes wided
G:Chi such a cheap women. But no not the media I will show this to Maan.
R:Hmm Good so what know
G:Let me think haan go hide somewhere, where Maan can' t find you. When I have made Maan understand everything you can come back.
R:Are you sure you will be able to handle Maan
G:Haan no worries how angry he is Geet ka jaadu will work on her Maan
Geet said that lighten the mood, but Maan took it the other way Pammi' s words flashed in her mind. He even didn' t notice that she said my maan.Whitout giving it a second thought Maan stormed on Romeo. He punched him right on his face again.He start hitting him like a mad man.Geet got scared she try to stop maan, but he was unstoppable.She grabbed his hand.
G:Please Maan stop what if something happens to him
M:And what about my mom Geet jho apni zindagi ke lihye lahrhi hai huh. You don' t seem to have a problem with that.
G:NO Maan it' s nothing like that sachi Maan I do care about Pammi
Maan texted someone.
Before Maan could react on what Geet said the police came.
M:take him away
G:Maan no please don' t do this Maan please
Maan got another call he put it on his bluetooth and stepped into his car.Leaving a crying Geet behind.Maan was driving harshly he fellt his entire world had crashed down the ones he trusted had deceived them in their own way.
o sanam o sanam
kash hota agar
tum nibha jaate yeh
zindagi ka safar
hum bhi tanha na rehte
yuhin umar bhar
tum saath hote agar
tum saath hote agar
After crying for a while Geet stood up. She went into the hospital. She knew to get Romeo back she first needed to get Pammi back so Maan would get relaxed.She made the discharge papers and went to take Pammi.
G:Mom let' s go
Maan came from behind.
M:Geet the driver is downstairs go with him
G:Matlab
M:Matlab toh saaf hai Geet go downstairs
G:Maan I wil help you
Maan gave a sarcastic smile.
M:No thank you Geet. You have already helped me enough, I don' t need more help.
G:Maan I know your angry on Romeo but please
M:Geet do your husband one favour and do as I say once without arguing
Geet nodded and went downstairs. Pammi smirked.
P:Maan beta geet still here
M:Shall we go
P:Haan beta magar Geet
M:Don' t test my patient mom
Pammi was confused with Maan' s behaviour.Like a lifeless body Maan took Pammi to the car.Maan took Pammi to her room and told the servants to take care of Pammi. He went to his room to grabbed his track suit.Geet came from behind and hugged him.
G:Maan are you angry on your wify
Maan jerked her hands away and turned around. He gave a sarcastic laugh.
M;Wify geet humsafar ka matlab jaan thi ho. It means having trust on each other.
G:Matlab Maan I trust you
Maan smirked
M:forget it you will never understand
Having said that he walked away leaving a hurt and confused Geet behind. She could see pain in his eyes. She knew he was hurt but about what was it that she was talking to Romeo.She needed to talk to him. maan went to his gym and started excersing like a mad man.
itni mujhe hai khabar
tanha bikhar jaaonga
teri tamanna liye
mai kuch bhi kar jaonga
kaash humko bana lete tum humsafar
tum saath hote agar
tum saath hote agar
Flashes of a Geet' s fearing face. Her convo with Romeo. Something burned inside him.
apne labon ki hassi
ai kaash dedoon tujhe
Saari khushi dedoon tujhe
ghum apna de de mujhe
kaash hoti tumhein apne pyaar pe yakeen
tum saath hote agar
tum sath hoge agar

After having tortured himself in gym Maan headed to the kitchen. He saw Geet making food for Pammi. He knew it was only to please him and his anger.

M:What are you doing Geet
G:Maan aap neh gym kar liya
M:That wasn' t the answer to my question
G:Maan I was making soup for Pammi
M:Kyu
G:What do you mean Maan. I didn' t understand
M:Why are you doing this natak yeh drama kis liye Geet
G:Maan yeh drama nahi hai I care for your mom
M:Really so now you also lie to me
G:Nahi Maan aisa nahi hai
M:Agar aisa nahi hai Geet. Then why did you tell Romeo that what he did was right. The only thing you where scared off was my reaction.

Geet gasped out loud. He heard everything.

G:Maan woh
M:I never thought my Geet could be that heartless. But maybe you are not my Geet anymore.
G:Nahi Maan don' t say that
M:Phir kya kahu Geet
G:Maan you don' t understand
M:Yeh toh problem hai Geet you think I never understand
Having said that he walked away.He went to his study and started working in the hope you would forget todays happenings.He was the entire day working in his study.
o sanam o sanam
kash hota agar
tum nibha jaate yeh
zindagi ka safar
hum bhi tanha na rehte
yuhin umar bhar
tum saath hote agar
tum saath hote agar

Geet knew he hadden' t eaten anything. She walked towards his study with a plate of his fav pasta.She put a hand on his shoulder.Maan jerked her hand away.

G:Maan I am sorry
M:Kis liye Geet
G:For taking Romeo' s side.Woh he shouldn' t go so far. But Maan wo kya kartha your mom burned my hand and he lost it. Maan he cares a lot about me na. Please Maan forgive him, woh itna bura nahi hai. Your mom is not as sweet as she looks
M:Forgive him who are you, what did you do to my geet.DAHMIT KOON HOW TUM KAHA HAI MERI GEET
Maan shook Geet.Tears made there way out of Geet' s eyes.
G:Maaan
She tried to touch his face
M:Don' t dare touching me Geet. Don' t you dare.
G:Maan please don' t say that. Tum neh kaha tah na the meaning of being a true humsafar is having trust on each other. Then trust me Maan aap ki mom is a horrible women. maan she burned my hand she che
M:BAS GEET AGAR MY MOM IS BAD WHAT ABOUT YOU HUH TUM NEH KYA KIYA SHE BURNED YOU ARM AND YOU YOU MADE HER HOSPITILIAZE THIS IS YOU GOODNESS.
G:Maan she cheated on your dad, she
M:DAHMIT THAT' S NOT YOUR PROBLEM THAT' S BETWEEN MY PARENTS AND ME WHO ARE YOU TO PUNISH HER
G:Maan ain' t I a part of the family
M:ARE YOU REALLY HOW BY LETTING A OUTSIGHTER HURT MY MOTHER BY NOT TRUSTING YOU OWN HUSBAND.MEINE KAHA TAH NA DON' T BE SCARED I WILL TAKE CARE OF YOU PHIR, KAHA TAH NA HAVE TRUST ON ME.AND YOU KEPT LYING TO ME KEPT TELLING ME MAAN I CARE FOR YOUR MOTHER CHI GEET CHI
G:Maan I am sorry I
M:YEH HAI MERI KISMAT GEET MY MOTHER IS POISING MY MIND SO I GET A DIVORCE AND HURTING THE ONE I LOVE THE MOST.AUR MERI BIWI SHE TRUSTS EVERYONE EXCEPT HER OWN HUSBAND.TUM MERI GEET NAHI HO. YOU CAN' T BE MY GEET.
Maan completly broke down he couldn' t take it anymore knowing about his mother' s truth and his wife' s heartless behaviour.How could his mother marry his dad for money and try to hurt the love of his life and how could his wife support Romeo. Where were his feelings in all this.
M:YOU KNOW GEET WHAT I WENT TREW WHEN I SAW HOT PASTA BEING TROWED ON MY MOTHER SHE FAINTED IN MY ARMS. SHE ALMOST DIED GEET SHE ALMOST DIED.AND WHAT DID YOU DO GEET WHEN I NEEDED YOU THE MOST YOU WHERE TELLING ROMEO YOU WILL HANDLE MY ANGER . HAAN SHE WAS AND IS WRONG GEET BUT WHO IS THIS ROMEO TO PUNISH HER ANSWER ME GEET ANSWER ME.
Precap:How does Maan know the entire truth whom did he call that night.
Edited by mel420 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
TIA 😆😆
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TIA FIRST AGAIN
BALLE BALLE SHAVA SHAVA

poor romeo

pta nhi kitni maar khayega maanu se
my maanu is so upset
and i cant help him😡
hate u geet u hurt y maan na...
i happy ki romeo teach her a good lesson bt sara kuj ulta ho gya
c na my maanu is so hurt...
bt omg maan knows everything how when ???😲😲
khair chodo main thing is my maanu is hurt..😭😭
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dont worry maanu tia hai na
😆😉
😉
devil huh



Edited by tiakashyap - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
why are you laughing you see my sad story as a comedy ap mera kya hoga
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesome update
Loved it
maan already knw the truth..how??
waiting for geet's ans.
continue soon
thankx for pm
😊
Edited by Gcs-girl - 13 years ago

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