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Downhill

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Posted: 13 years ago

#791

why does everything boil down to sex...😡i find this disgusting and unacceptable when the people involved have not sorted out their issues and have not been honest about their feelings...it looks like it was afterall lust that was termed as love to put it in a polished way...
i am seriously pissed off now...
when i said geet should develop a spine when it comes to maan, i wanted her to make it clear to maan, that she shill stand by him only if he comes clean with his past and takes the cork off his secrets on sasha and other dirty secrets...
how can geet love a man without knowing anything about him...that bloody bas***d is trying to be philosophical whenever she prods him about sasha...if he can accept that he has made mistakes, why not come clean with it and come out in the open with his murky past...he should have known by now that geet is not someone who judges him by his shady past, she will accept him , no matter how much of a crook he had been...so why this mahanta of trying to keep geet away from pain...
all i can say is he is worth falling in love with...to me, anyone who has so much of unwanted baggage with him, is stubborn on not letting his past out which could impact his future, he is not worth sticking by...
and geet using feminine charms is the last straw...what was it with her issuing ultimatums, issuing dos and donts to him, ...he is a bloody seasoned player, when it comes to women...she was supposed to get him come clean about sasha and geet's role in his life and not to do such antics...coz i dont think that fits into the character of any girl who has a clear head and makes decisions after fine combing everything with logic...

i no more feel that even if maan is not guilty and he is very much a man who has been hassled by circumstances, i think i can no more respect him... his behavior is like a sex starved man when u have so many pressing issues to resolve, he doesnt really deserve to be loved...
i am sorry for being so at the end of my patience but this is what i feel about the lead characters as of now...
there was a time when i loved the characters adorable,refreshing and respectful ,inspite of their flaws, now i find them grating on my nerves, with their escapist attitude and refusing to tackle a problem headlong...this seriously is stressing me a lot...

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Downhill

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Posted: 13 years ago

#792

Originally posted by: Cloud9.
You know what Sasha and Maan are perfect couple. Both are perverts. Why don't they get married to each other so that they can quench their thirst for sex. Bloody morons.

exactly my point...why the hell is sex is so overrated...🤢

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Posted: 13 years ago

#793

Reva: Tu stress kyu le rahi hain behna? Thand pa. Look at Maan and learn something. Lessons from Maan: Even if you are in crisis don't think of coming out of it. Instead think of other things like sex. Wow! So cool na?

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Downhill

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Originally posted by: Cloud9.
Reva: Tu stress kyu le rahi hain behna? Thand pa. Look at Maan and learn something. Lessons from Maan: Even if you are in crisis don't think of coming out of it. Instead think of other things like sex. Wow! So cool na?

i am so much rattled by the fact that i am not able to comprehend the characters...but the fact that the characters undergo a 180 degree turnaround and go on vacillating from being strong to helpless, from being men of characters to a person seeking sex like a sex maniac without rhyme and reason, having such grave issues hanging like a noose around the neck...and yet they behave irrationally throwing caution to the wind...i guess i need a long vacation...@ sheesh dont take my rant seriously, but this story was close to me, and now i cant bear to see it making me so stressed out...

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tamannA

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Posted: 13 years ago

#795

it geet angry on maan and maan worried

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Sheesh

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Posted: 13 years ago

#796

Originally posted by: mollycoddle
... i am so much rattled by the fact that i am not able to comprehend the characters...but the fact that the characters undergo a 180 degree turnaround and go on vacillating from being strong to helpless, from being men of characters to a person seeking sex like a sex maniac without rhyme and reason, having such grave issues hanging like a noose around the neck...and yet they behave irrationally throwing caution to the wind...i guess i need a long vacation...@ sheesh dont take my rant seriously, but this story was close to me, and now i cant bear to see it making me so stressed out...

Darling, you can tell me anything...i know what you feel and i feel the same way too.

Even i want to write about strong people and their model actions. Tell people, look guys this is what a lead character means...

..but it is a phase that i had to write...i am not happy writing about it either...but i cant help it...i have to...in fact i cry when writing most of these updates...i myself cant find the reason, probably this is it...the reasons you mentioned...but i have to write it.

i hope now i make sense. 😃 I know i don't.

And I am not trying to manipulate anyone's feelings or thoughts here...

If i were trying to do so would i cry when i writing anything?

They make sense in my head when i am trying to write it, I hope I portray it in a way that makes sense to you too...

And by the way this is the first time I am writing and I try and be bold in my interpretations.

But that is not your problem. I will convey things better I promise...

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Krupa

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Posted: 13 years ago

#797

everything is messed up.one time will feel story is simple but has been twisting here and there to keep reader glued to the story,and some times feels there is no essence to the story at all.

the characters are jumping from one point to other and taking 90-180 degree turns.what is going on some times going out of mind and characters are behaving out of characters,all are villains and all are saints.and we readers in confusion.

as far as my understanding if i put this story in simplest form it is like- Sasha has played big game with khurranas.she is most intelligent embiscious and power and money greedy woman and that's while she has not allowed any staff to come up she was wanted to have control over everything so she has taken Maan in her grip by taking advantage ongoing dadima's sickness,she don't mind marry to her half age men for money and power. initially her father tried to get her marry to Maan by direct proposal but it didn't work out so Sasha has started drama of her fathers sickness and try to win over Maan by crocodile tears and she become successful in it as he was still not ready to handle his business on his own, Dev was good for nothing and Dadi was sick,if he ignore sasha than his competitor can take her and use against him,so he came under threat and started physical relation ship with her he had hide cleverly everything from Dadima.actually he was also Casanova and know how to play game with woman and can take out work from them.

now he was in search of the person who can undermine Sasha and can took over from her by defeating her and he find out Geet is the right person to handle this situation.and secondly he attracted to her physically,so he had kept her to work for him .he was wanted to kill 2 birds with one stone.glass door you had release slowly slowly secret of them by keeping us on guessing game.and ya famine factor is more stronger than other in beginning Geet think he is mahhan Men but slowly his true colour started to unveil .after thinking a lot she realise that famine power is stronger weapon to kneel down any strong man in to her grip and according to him she is the best candidate for that.so now her cherecter has taken 180 degree turn and start to show how imp she is and threatened maan also lers see what is happening after this.

Aage age dekho kya hota hai mere dost picture to abhi baki hai,

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ninand

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Posted: 13 years ago

#798

Hey.. have been meaning to drop a comment here, but since I only have managed to read a handful of chapters here and there , I had been waiting until when I had caught up with it.. but I confess ,thats going to take a while, since I am seriously deficient in time..

I think you must already know yours is a very unique story, but the style of its presentation , i feel is almost as contributing as its content and characters.. I will admit, this 'drama' styled content is always a handicap with me..

also, to get an idea of what you write, I only read Maan and Geet interactions and breezed over the rest ..

I have to tell you- its refreshingly different.. and though it takes a while to get a handle on these characters, I am surprised by how fallible, real, yet engaging and intriguing they are.. I have to commend you on how you have brought geet about.. although I have not read her portions in entirety since her thoughts and interactions with other characters are pivotal to grasping all of her.. but in the last few chapters that I read, the way shes taken a turn towards emerging stronger and rather more insightful than Maan has been a very pleasant surprise..

and the way you have etched Maan , .. a truly imperfect man, who made some really selfish and shabby decisions.. the way you have brought him down from the pedestal Geet was insistent on keeping him on, is brilliant..

His vulnerability to her ,physically ,couldn't have come at a better time or at a better price, and finishes the role-reversal for them so smoothly.. Her integrity and now, her rightful outrage ,have been very sensitively penned..

Your's is an intelligent and a very honest way of writing .. I really enjoyed it, and I hope I can find sometime soon to read it all.. :)

(Your 'bold' interpretations are what give this ff and its characters their essence.. do keep at it :) )

Edited by ninand - 13 years ago

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Downhill

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Posted: 13 years ago

#799

one point i needed to make clear is i have no issue with grey characters or infact a shade deeper than the grey, but what am not able to digest is that the base and the circumstances designed to show how much the characters are vulnerable, prone to mistakes, commit blunders when it comes to assessing people,their imperfections, are very abrupt and jerky spoiling the continuity and consistency of the story and characters...under no circumstances would i want u to tweak the story for reader's sake, but ensure that the story doesnt go for twists and sudden u turn in the character's behavior in an abrupt fashion...lay the base and take it slow, so that we dont feel the pinch to see the characters behaving weirdly all of a sudden...without any prelude...

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sanjh89

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Posted: 13 years ago

#800

CH.21 ...MAAN
CH.23 ...GEET

BOTH R SHOOTNG US DHAAEN DHAAEN...

WHT A POWERPACK UPDATES U R GVNG US!!!!!!!!! KUDOS YAAR...

NT TO FORGT DEV...REALLY LVNG HM...

love

SANJH

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