MG ff - Her Bitter fate Thread 2 link @ Pg 151 - Page 44

Originally posted by: raingurti

Originally posted by: ana56

amazing ff monika dear

i just come to know of it finally i read all the 15 parts

i loved it

plz do continue soon

Part 16

This time maan got irritated. He shouted. KON HAI ..."

"maan " a sweet voice came with soft giggle from behind. He turned back and shocked.

There was a girl standing far facing her back to him. She was covered her face with dupatta.

"itne sham me yaha kon hai " kon hai waha". He went to her but she also started going back.

"suniye , aapne mera naam pukara tha.. suniye" maan was walking fast but that girl now started running. She runs very far and hided in a old abandoned building. Maan reached there following her but could not see as she was hiding herself and it was very dark there.

"suniye..hello..koi hai "

"maan " she again said. Maan went in same direction but no one was there. "kon hai.. "

She giggled again. This time maan saw a yellow dupatta. "geet " he whisper himself as he saw her wearing this dupatta at home. " geet.. tum ho kya .. geeet" he asked.

"ye loh channi ye to mujhe andhere me bhi pahchan gaya .. ab mai kya kru" geet asked channi who was her partner in this revenge game. " geet ..maine pahle hi bola tha mat kar ye sab. Ab agar wo brij veerji ya darji ko bol diya to tere sath meri bhi shamat aa jani hai" channi said in low voice. They were hiding behind a big pillar when they heard some weird sound. It was like someone is beating someone. Both girls went at that direction and got shocked.

Shankar veerji" channi whisper with wide eyes. Both were hell scared. It was dark there so no one could see them. Some goons were beating a man badly. They had swords and another weapons. Geet and channi were holding each other hand in fear. They both were sweating.

Shanker said " brij, kya karna hai iska. "

"maar daalte hai. Kahani khatam " one man said with evil face

"oyee nahi oyee.. marne se kuch nahi hoga. Iske saamne iske gharwalo ko mar tab isse pata chalega brij handa se gaddari karne ka natija." That man (mohanlal) was crying groaning begging for his life but nobody listen

"baandh do isse yahi aur chod do marne ke liye. Kisi ko pata bhi nahi chalega ki iise zameen kha gayi ya aasmaa nigal gaya" brij said and left

Here maan thought it was his illusion that she was geet. So He left

All goons left form there tied mohanlal with thick rope. He was half unconscious when he felt someone is untying him. He opened his eyes and saw geet and channi were there and trying hard to untie him but rope was very thick and tight. So they were having problem untying but finally they succeed. Mohanlal run from there thanking them. Here geet and channi were going to leave when they saw a goon coming to their direction. Hurriedly they hide behind some sacks. That goon came, picked his sword and turned to see mohanlala and shocked to see he was not there. he run toward his gang to inform. Here geet and channi were sweating, breathing heavily came out after seeing him go. They were very scared, very confused what to do, where to go. They totally forgot about maan.

" gee ab kya karenge"channi was crying with fear.

"tu ghabra mat channi, hum..hume yaha se nikalna hoga pahle " she said looking around to be sure nobody is there

Both came out of building anyhow and started running to channi home. But at mid way geet stopped " channi rukk .. meri kitaabe to wahi rah gayi. Tu asa kar tu ghar ja mai kitaabe leke aati hu."

" geet tu pagal ho gayi hai jo waha akeli jaayegi. Ruk mai bhi aati hu."

Nahi channi tu jaa. Mai jaldi aa jaungi. Agar hum dono ko sath kisi ne yaha dekh liya to thik nahi hoga." Saying this geet run back toward building.

"geet sanbhal ke "

"geet nodded and left. She was trying hard to be bold but was hell sacred. She was wandering what if someone sees her at this time in a deserted field. But she had no choice. She reached there and started searching for book. She found it on ground when suddenly she heard weird sound. She started stumbling with fear as it was total dark now. She runs random direction. She had no idea where she going. She was just running, crying and remembering her babji to help her to save her. Somehow she managed to come out. Now she had to reach channi house as soon possible as brij had to come there to pick her. So she started to run faster in darkness. She was very scared and in no sense to think or understand anything. Suddenly she collided with something or someone and because of sudden force she fell down hard.

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ENGLISH VERSION

This time maan got irritated. He shouted. WHO THE HELL IS THERE ..."

"maan " a sweet voice came with soft giggle from behind. He turned back and shocked.

There was a girl standing far facing her back to him. She was covered her face with dupatta.

"who might be there in this late evening " Who is there". He went to her but she also started going back.

"listen...hello..you called me..hello" maan was walking fast but that girl now started running. She runs very far and hided in a old abandoned building. Maan reached there following her but could not see as she was hiding herself and it was very dark there.

"listen..hello.. is someone there "

"maan " she again said. Maan went in same direction but no one was there. "kon hai.. "

She giggled again. This time maan saw a yellow dupatta. "geet " he whisper himself as he saw her wearing this dupatta at home. " geet.. are you there.. geeet" he asked.

"ohh god channi.. he recognised us. Now what we will do" geet asked channi who was her partner in this revenge game. " geet ..i told you before..dont do this. Now if he tells brij veerji.. he will kill me with you for sure" channi said in low voice. They were hiding behind a big pillar when they heard some weird sound. It was like someone is beating someone. Both girls went at that direction and got shocked.

Shankar veerji" channi whisper with wide eyes. Both were hell scared. It was dark there so no one could see them. Some goons were beating a man badly. They had swords and another weapons. Geet and channi were holding each other hand in fear. They both were sweating.

Shanker said " brij ..what to do this bas***d. "

"kill him .. story finish" one man said with evil face

"oyee nahi oyee.. that wouldn't be big punishment. Let kill his all family in front of his bare eyes .. then he will learn what is consequence to cheat brij handa." That man (mohanlal) was crying groaning begging for his life but nobody listen

"tie him and leave here . he will get his punishment as no one will know about him " brij said and left

Here maan thought it was his illusion that she was geet. So He left

All goons left form there tied mohanlal with thick rope. He was half unconscious when he felt someone is untying him. He opened his eyes and saw geet and channi were there and trying hard to untie him but rope was very thick and tight. So they were having problem untying but finally they succeed. Mohanlal run from there thanking them. Here geet and channi were going to leave when they saw a goon coming to their direction. Hurriedly they hide behind some sacks. That goon came, picked his sword and turned to see mohanlala and shocked to see he was not there. he run toward his gang to inform. Here geet and channi were sweating, breathing heavily came out after seeing him go. They were very scared, very confused what to do, where to go. They totally forgot about maan.

"geet..now what will do" channi was crying with fear.

"channi ..you don't be scared.. first we ll have to go out from here " she said looking around to be sure nobody is there

Both came out of building anyhow and started running to channi home. But at mid way geet stopped " channi wait .. seems I left my books there. .do one thing..you go hom i ll have to go there again

" geet..are you gone mad. I wont leave you..wait I am coming with you."

Noo channi you go. I ll be back soon. If anyone see us together it wont be good for us" Saying this geet run back toward building.

"Be careful geet "

Precap :" She got nervous. "mai yaha kaise aayi". 😲😲

Hope I m doing good

I am thanking each n every readers for all likes and comments...

Heyy one more thing. i have started a new FF ---DOR--- ..please once have a look there also if you like

Originally posted by: mel420

not fair I want anotehr update

Originally posted by: mandy15

awesome update dear:)