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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesome update.
The emotional outburst much needed one.
This willl help them to sort out the differences and bring closure.
Cont. soon.
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Posted: 13 years ago
loved the update
omg though things turned ugly but this was needed i guess
geet lost her patience and hope and maan's words just infuriated her to the end
waiting for the next eagerly
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Posted: 13 years ago
Hi thanks 4 da pm n intense emotional update! Lovely poem by Piya! Maan returns home n upset nt seeing hope! He has a fear tht he is losing Geet! Geet coems home n says he sold it! Maan angry! Maan n Geet argue! Geet says she bought a house! Sll surprised! Geet needed to speak her heart out n voice her feelings! Dadi surprised! Superbly written! thanks 4 da note! update soon! Loving this FF! Precap is awesum!
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Posted: 13 years ago
Hi,
Guess this is the first time am commenting on ur FF, but have been reading this from beginning and 've followed ur earlier FF too.. Love reading ur stuff... most of the time u are quite realistic ;-).
This part was quite realistic. the argument b/n M&G was quite close to what happens with any married couple.. most of the time we argue assuming stuff that would not even have entered each others head ;-).. here also they don't know wt is going on each others' mind..
The characterisaion of Geet is awesome.. but sometime i wonder "women like this really exist?" so talented, brilliant, intellectual, outgoing, homely.. perfect beyond imagination.. may be you took your writer's libetry over here.. of course in all the FF's Geet is charactised as flawless, but in ur FF the way u emphasised her professional background, artistic abilities, craze for bikes etc just made me wish i was also "programmed" like that..
Great going lady.. keep writing... waiting for the next update..
J
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Posted: 13 years ago

oh al d events r changed drasticaly...

I was scared aftr reading update...

Bt den saw precap n get sum relief...

I m sure when dere mind wil bcum cool n dey think about events den only probs can b solved...

Nyc update...
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesome update...
liked the poem depicting geet's thoughts...
awww maneet unable to understand each other..
feel really bad for them..
hmm waiting for maneet to speak...
continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
aahhh..
Ritzy di...
👏 👏 👏
I absolutely love the way you have written it...
THe emotions you brought out in dis update is heart-wrenchin...
beautifully expressed...!!!

but yet again...
I will say... as I said earlier...
selling of HOPE ws a very big mistake by Geet... n it's completely evident on her behaviour.. selling her prized possession has somewhere snatched the light of HOPE in her heart and mind.. She has somwhere lost her sense n rationality.. SHe's in DARK right now where she sees no light of HOPE...
n dats why she took the word "HONOR" in a negative sense.. when one is engulfed by negativity, they cant see the positivity...
for me.. wen sum1 calls u ur HONOR.. dats mean u r THE PRIDE for that person.. n Geet failed to notice the meaning behind the word..

Maan has jz cum back.. ready to confess his love n suddenly he sees the HOPE of getting Geet lost.. vanished...
It was the one thing that bound him with Geet from the very beginning ... loss of HOPE pushes him into the darkness as well and hence his reaction ws bound to cum...

by the time, he gained his rationality because his emotional turmoil is lesser than Geet, Geet's emotional trauma had burst n she had lost ol capabilities of rational thinking...
because even when she bought the house right now.. yes, it was her dream, but right now it was her source of security as well.. she had it sumwhr in her mind dat if I have to leave, I wnt b a burden on ne1. I HAVE MY HOUSE...
n dis whole preconception proved disastrous..

as I had said... to me.. Geet is losing her rationality in haste..
shes in depression and shes is taking decisions in sucha state n dats making things turn out wrong..

Drowned in the darkness that surrounds
Unable to locate a ray of light
Searching for the HOPE of love
Closed eyes snatch the HOPE..!!
Edited by AbbyluvsMaan - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome update. feel sad for maaneet
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: AbbyluvsMaan

aahhh..

Ritzy di...
👏 👏 👏
I absolutely love the way you have written it...
THe emotions you brought out in dis update is heart-wrenchin...
beautifully expressed...!!!

but yet again...
I will say... as I said earlier...
selling of HOPE ws a very big mistake by Geet... n it's completely evident on her behaviour.. selling her prized possession has somewhere snatched the light of HOPE in her heart and mind.. She has somwhere lost her sense n rationality.. SHe's in DARK right now where she sees no light of HOPE...
n dats why she took the word "HONOR" in a negative sense.. when one is engulfed by negativity, they cant see the positivity...
for me.. wen sum1 calls u ur HONOR.. dats mean u r THE PRIDE for that person.. n Geet failed to notice the meaning behind the word..

Maan has jz cum back.. ready to confess his love n suddenly he sees the HOPE of getting Geet lost.. vanished...
It was the one thing that bound him with Geet from the very beginning ... loss of HOPE pushes him into the darkness as well and hence his reaction ws bound to cum...

by the time, he gained his rationality because his emotional turmoil is lesser than Geet, Geet's emotional trauma had burst n she had lost ol capabilities of rational thinking...
because even when she bought the house right now.. yes, it was her dream, but right now it was her source of security as well.. she had it sumwhr in her mind dat if I have to leave, I wnt b a burden on ne1. I HAVE MY HOUSE...
n dis whole preconception proved disastrous..

as I had said... to me.. Geet is losing her rationality in haste..
shes in depression and shes is taking decisions in sucha state n dats making things turn out wrong..
Clap
Drowned in the darkness that surrounds
Unable to locate a ray of light
Searching for the HOPE of love
Closed eyes snatch the HOPE..!!Clap

loved ur analysis and poem took my breath away .
Edited by hermoso - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Oh no pure surprise ki band baj gai. Geet I loved it answer though u don't know dat maan started liking u. He needs to knw wht u feel. Loved do updt.

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