MG FF-VIVAH - Thread 5 - Page 28

Created

Last reply

Replies

881

Views

218.3k

Users

242

Likes

4k

Frequent Posters

Cyberlife thumbnail
Explorer Thumbnail
Posted: 13 years ago

Ritzy: Kamal kar diya! Maan's outburst, frustration, anger.. .Geet's break down… all so realistically captured.

Although the high tension update was emotionally draining for me as a reader, I think it could have a very cathartic effect on Man and Geet's relationship; Both of them had become so adept at bottling their feelings and thoughts for so long that they needed a shocker (sale of Hope, Geet's purchase of the property..) to force them out of their self-imposed cocoon and express themselves freely – even if it is merely in anger on his part and resignation on hers!!! At least, it is a start … actually a big leap for the ever controlled and balanced Maan; instead of retreating behind his mask , he is actually venting his frustration vocally! When things calm down, hopefully, in the safety of their respective rooms, they will start to mull over the event and begin to get an inkling of the other's perspective.

Eagerly waiting to see how things evolve!

Beautiful and apt poem by Piya - -thanks dear! I read and re-read several times.

Mehek25 thumbnail
15th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 13 years ago
I have no words to express the feelings in my heart after reading this update.

Brought tears to my eyes as I could feel the trauma Geet was going thru...And even Maan's frustration, anger and his outburst were all so well written that i could imagine the whole scenario as if I was watching it...

U have outdone urself with this episode Ritzy...Gr8 going and keep it up dear...

Loved the last verse...khata na teri hai, khata na meri hai,

Dil ki bandishon ne , itna waqt laga diya,

tere ehsaas dil mein dastak dene tak ,

tere aur mere beech mein faasla bada diya


Plz continue soon...

Thanx fro Pm dear...

piya27 thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail Networker 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 13 years ago
Wow dono ka ek dusre se pyaar kya hai
just loved it
evasumi thumbnail
16th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 6
Posted: 13 years ago
well well i had a feeling that Maan is going to blowup as hope was his 1st cxn to Geet but I think they will patch up and start new.. so let's wait for that... honeymoon in the dream house of Geet????
Edited by evasumi - 13 years ago
Tamanna_TJ thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 13 years ago
Awesome update Di...
The poems said it all...
Brilliant poems depicted the while scenario very well...
Just love it...
Both are right at their places...
Just the situation is not right...
Maan is thinking tht he is loosing his love in the way of HOPE...
Geet is already on the verge of or shud I say already loosing her patience of achieving him...
The last poem was awesome, since it showed the exact thing happening in their life...
The previous one is also awesomely written...
Very nicely showing the pain Geet is going thru...
Di plzzz continue soon...
Mujhe inn dono ki dooriyan bardasht nhi hoti...
Continue soon, desperately waiting...
Love u loads, keep writing... :))
sweetysaran thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 13 years ago
loved it...
awesome update...
maan's pain and geet's outburst was shown beautifully...
i wanted geet to speak out her insecurity.. hopefully she did...
nicely written...
interesting precap...
waiting for the next update...

anks_ams thumbnail
17th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail Networker 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 13 years ago
omg such a powerful update!
loved it ..
continue soon...
i'm perfectly okay with ur opinion regarding the story...
so waiting eagerly to read more...
:)
Drashtirocks1 thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 13 years ago
the outburst of emotions from both Maan and Geet were totally justified...

Maan has realized his love for Geet whereas Geet has developed a sense of insecurity and the lost of HOPE from their life has frustrated them to a certain extent

Maan has a fear of losing Geet whereas Geet is preparing her self mentally that maybe one day the burden of responsibilty would be too much for Maan which might result them to part ways

Maan ne jo kuch bhi kaha Geet ko khone k darr se kaha whereas Geet ne jo jawab diye usse uske dil mein chupa hua dard aur takleef saamne aa gaya

For Maan, HOPE was closely related to him and Geet... but she is totally unaware of the fact... and yes he was angry.. coz he has just realized his new found love for her and got back in all excitement to start a new life with all hopes and "HOPE" was missing...

On the other side Geet sold out her first painting to get her dream house... ofcourse it was not easy for her to sell of her first creation... but she did it for her dream and was unaware of its connectivity with Maan.. And when he expressed his anger, it added more pain to the turmoil she was going through thinking over her relation with Maan...

Both of them lost it and that was completely understandable and justified... i totally loved the way you portrayed the whole thing... it was just too good👏

For me this update marked the start of the new era of Maaneet's life 😊

continue soon😊
Edited by drashtirocks1 - 13 years ago
spvd thumbnail
17th Anniversary Thumbnail Trailblazer Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 13 years ago
part 35
awesome...
knew Maan will blow fuse...
poor him...
he should have told her...
poor Geet...
now what?
cont soon dear...
jasraj123 thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 13 years ago
awesome awaiting update
omggg yeh kya hua
they both misunderstand each other😭😭


waiting for next update

Related Topics

Geet - Hui Sabse Parayee Thumbnail

Posted by: priya_21

11 years ago

Priya Fan fiction - Update thread /pg 122- 30 aug

hello friends... am not able do pm regularly... so please my all friend follow this thread... i post the link here... so you get link easily of

Expand ▼
Geet - Hui Sabse Parayee Thumbnail

Posted by: priya_21

2 years ago

thread #2 Kuch Rang pyaar ke ase bhi/pt21/22/23 -pg31/33/34- 28 may

Concept This is story about two strangers which tied in sacred bond and one partner fall in love with another at first sight. Two individuals...

Expand ▼
Geet - Hui Sabse Parayee Thumbnail

Posted by: tammana.m

3 years ago

Maaneet New SS - Dillagi Thread 2 -Part 88 Page 49- 27/5/25

Dillagi Dil ki Lagi Jab Dil kho jata hai kisi aise mein Jo apna na hoke pe apna sa lagge. Jiski ek jhalak ke leye yeh nighein tarpati rahe Or...

Expand ▼
Geet - Hui Sabse Parayee Thumbnail

Posted by: Queen0fDarkness

2 years ago

The Devil in the Dark Thread 2||Chapter 70 pg 24 Updated 26/01

As mentioned in the notes in the other FF threads that I had created the other ID at a time when I wanted to be anonymous and avoid raising...

Expand ▼
Geet - Hui Sabse Parayee Thumbnail

Posted by: tammana.m

3 years ago

Maaneet New SS -Dosti ya Pyaar Thread 2-Part 62 page 40 24/6/25

Prologue Zindagi ke kuch faisle hum lete hai or kuch yeh zindagi humse karvati hai.. kabhi hass ke to kabhi is dil pe pathar rakh kar!! but is...

Expand ▼
Top

Stay Connected with IndiaForums!

Be the first to know about the latest news, updates, and exclusive content.

Add to Home Screen!

Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".