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meravigiliso

@meravigiliso

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Posted: 13 years ago

#151

Originally posted by: Cyberlife

Ritzy:

OMG, OMG,OMG! I was too choked up with emotion to read the heart wrenching update in one go. The irony of their situation is just too painfully poignant ' just as hope is taking root in his heart, she is losing her steadfast hope and faith that their relationship will ever progress beyond the platonic friendship they currently share.

I was so saddened on reading that bit about the sale of her cherished painting ' that is what gave her the strength to fight against all odds. Parting with it was a powerful symbol of the emotionally fragile state she is in right now.

She is so depressed ! The love of such a warm hearted, loving, giving generous person needs to be reciprocated with equal intensity. My only hope at this point is that Maan will tune into her POV right away; he will understand her pain completely and do everything to woo her and win her trust. Please, please, please, humaari pyaarisi Geetu to itna dard math do. Maan! Kuch karo -- you have to get back that painting for her; you have to restore her faith in this marital relationship and convince her that it is not a compromise on your part -- that you truly, madly, insanely love her and will go to the ends of the earth for her love and realize her dreams for her. .

loved ur POV

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Water

@Water.

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Posted: 13 years ago

#152

It was a lovely update darling.

Cannot wait to read more of it.

Cannot wait...

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maaneet5

@maaneet5

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Posted: 13 years ago

#153

hey di osum update

well geet being individual wants to buy her dream house lekin Hope ko bejdi oh no precap me maan ka reaction isi ko leke hoga shayed next thing is maan ka badti hui intezaar use kya kya kareed wa rahi he these lines are really osum

He just imagined her petite form and picked up what he wanted. He was still worried about her reaction but then he knew that now he had to take steady but bold steps towards moving this relationship forward.

waiting for next maan will get back hope back for her and scold her defenitely

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samirah

@samirah_amjad

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Posted: 13 years ago

#154

lovely update...oh no.geet sold hope...but iam sure maan will bring back hope...]

update sooon

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muna talukder

@MunaMeet22

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Posted: 13 years ago

#155

di..m falling love with this ff..
awesome..

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aisha_1998

@aisha_1998

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#156

excellent update !

I loved it !
Pls update next part soon :)

Cant wait to know maans reaction wen he finds HOPE missing :P
plus geet's as well wen she cums to kno maan luvs her <3

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Ruchita

@shruthiruchs

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Posted: 13 years ago

#157

i think di ur POV is truly correct...

if we think 4m geet's POV ur perfectly crrect...👍🏼

geet ki insecurities toh sahi hai... but hope ki maan unhe dur kar paye...

finally geet ko apni dream toh mil gayi... but kya ye kimat zaruri thi... kya hope ko dene ki zaroorat..???

hope ki aage se ye arjun koi problems create na kare...

maan kya kya karne laga hai yaar...

me too fingers crossed 4 d precap...

maan's REACTION...

gussa na ho...

😕😆

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kirti98

@kirti98

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Posted: 13 years ago

#158

Nicely written. Loved the way story is moving.

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MsMovielover

@MsMovielover

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#159

Great update.. But not happy that she sold hope I'm sure maan is not going to like that

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neha gupta

@neha5058

Dazzler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#160

hello di,
how are you?
well first time commenting here bec i am new reader of your work...
i have read " TILL DEATH DO US PART" and it was truly so magical... loved it a lot...
i had 10 parts daily of that ff and it was amazing... beyond my words...
and then i have read VIVAH... you know vivah movie is one of my fav movies... really i fell in love with this ff... read all 34 parts .. few after saving in my lappy and few parts through my cell...
it was fantastic... what to say...
maan was feeling aloof, lonely without poonam, became a hard core shell after her death...
it was really a painful moment... i am glad that you started after that scene... the movie was amazing and hats off to you... you have carried this ff after that scene, was mindblowing...
the introduction i mean the starting of this story was truly shocking for me... people were shouting RAGE RAGE RAGE... awesome...rahul was as sweet as he was in ur other ff... loved his char a lot...and the song, how you described geet and maan's was truly magical...
the way maan agreed for this marriage and geet fall for him with his one glimpse... that was really magical...and the wedding and their convo.. geet's reaction was truly right... her dreams shattered on her wedding night... "HOPE" really hope for their relationship...
she was indeed a great painter... maan fall for her slowly-2 because of her sweet nature with her family, she spent her morning time, evening coffee with him, she shared everything with him though not fully...
the distance made him realize that he loved her... and me really happy that he freed poonam from himself... and he was really happy for confessing his love... lol what gift he bought for her...
but me little scared for his reaction... how will he react when he won't found HOPE on the wall...?
but geet didn't do anything wrong... the farmhouse was her dream her POV was right... HOPE was her last hope...
thanks a lot di for giving such an awesome ff... me truly loved it...
after describing lots of things still me feeling speechless...lol...there are lots of things which i didn't mention here like the relationship between geet & vicky and her sweet, matured yet childish nature...like maan's X-RATED DREAM...
next time pm me too...sending u buddy req... add me too...