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khwaishfan

@khwaishfan

Elite

+ 9

Posted: 13 years ago

#121

Hi thanks 4 da pm n beautiful intense emotional update! Geet's inner feelings well portrayed! Geet deserves all the happpiness! She has a fam bt is so alone! she was jealous of Nisha n Meera !Poor Geet! she is happy on the outside bt broken inside! Maan shattered her dreams bt she took everything wid a smile! Geet is so insecure! She has lost hope! Maan must earn her love n trust! Geet wants the house n sells HOPE! She has no choice! HAte Arjun! He is so flirty bt Geet handles him! Maan content n happy! Maan on his way to India n buys lingerie for Geet! Maan wants to move ahead! Bt is Geet ready! Superbly written! Thanks 4 da note as well! Precap is interesting! update soon!

Edited by khwaishfan - 13 years ago

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Tabinda Areeb

@t_areeb

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#122

i hope maan understands her insecurities and what made her buy that house and sell "hope"

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ruark_22

@ruark_22

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#123

Beautiful update!!! She sold the painting!!! I felt sad but i do agree with u that Geet should take time to accept Maan's Love and Maan should have to work hard to get that acceptance!!

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KawaiiGeet

@kawaii_geet

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#124

heya dii..
me back again..
uss tym jaldi mein padha isiliye couldn't write wht i actually wanted to..
but here me back again..😳
re-read the part and trying to put on my thoughts together
tht didn't happen in the prev comment😃

it was really a touching update for me...
she is insecure...and she is right...
she has to be..
maan has taken too long to realise his own feelings..and that "time" has taken a toll on them...
it has healed maan but wounded her as well...
so its none of their own fault!! its just the situations!!!

geet hesitating to ask money from maan..
shows how in-confident she is about their relationship...
being the Mrs MSK..she has all the power and rights yet she cant exert them..
again its not her fault..
n e person in her place would feel the same!!!!!

and HOPE...
dii bike selling wali baat tho theek hain..but HOPE sell ho gayi??😭
really didn't like tht arjun whtever talking like that to geet!!!!!🤢
she is really trying hard to hide her pain..
and am sure she will be broken somewhere wen she realizes wht she had done by selling hope!!
i hope the story turns this way because for me "HOPE" is the only thing that brought them together and will decide their future. she did it lost in the clouds of uncertainty and her desire to get her dream..but i am sure once she realizes wht she has done.. she is going to regret big time!!!

and for maan...he is a very understanding person as u hve portrayed in the entire story till date
but still i feel uncertain about his reaction in the next part!!!!!!

phewww am done!!!!!
really waiting badly for the next part
do cum up real real real soon!!!

Edited by kawaii_geet - 13 years ago

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meravigiliso

@meravigiliso

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#125

😭Indeed a reality check ritzy 😭

Update was quite emotional, touchy and indeed a eyeopener one. Today i again understood the importance of time . How it plays crucial role in our life. Maan realised his emotions but a little late,tym is going to snatch his happiness for a while . He has to do a little more effort to bring back his geet . Selling "hope " is going to bring a major change in der relation . Wanna see maan reaction ...Will he understand geet insecurity ,her emotions or he will back to his own shell . very curious to know 😍

Quite natural reaction from geet . kabhie na kabhie yeh phase aana tha , how much u r strong or positive but somwhere she was in pain ,insecured and hurt by not being receptor of love she deserved . Painful to see her in broken state . 😭

But who is at fault . For me no one , Tym and circumstances had played a dirty role in der life . rishtey kacche dhaage ti tarah hote hai , use pyar, vishwas se sahejana padtha hai . koi bhi rishtey ko itna nahi keechna chahiye ki uski dor nazuk ho jaye ,use sehajne na paaye .kyonki us rishtey mein gaanth pad jati hai . Maan had taken a littile more tym to weave the relation , hope he is going to mend the relation without any knots . Update had put me in introspect mode . 😕

khata na teri hai, khata na meri hai,

Dil ki bandishon ne , itna waqt laga diya,

tere ehsaas dil mein dastak dene tak ,

tere aur mere beech mein faasla bada diya

👏One of the best update of "Vivah" ritzy .👏

Edited by hermoso - 13 years ago

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meravigiliso

@meravigiliso

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#126

Originally posted by: kawaii_geet
heya dii..
me back again..
uss tym jaldi mein padha isiliye couldn't write wht i actually wanted to..
but here me back again..😳
re-read the part and trying to put on my thoughts together
tht didn't happen in the prev comment😃

it was really a touching update for me...
she is insecure...and she is right...
she has to be..
maan has taken too long to realise his own feelings..and that "time" has taken a toll on them...
it has healed maan but wounded her as well...
so its none of their own fault!! its just the situations!!!

geet hesitating to ask money from maan..
shows how in-confident she is about their relationship...
being the Mrs MSK..she has all the power and rights yet she cant exert them..
again its not her fault..
n e person in her place would feel the same!!!!!

and HOPE...
dii bike selling wali baat tho theek hain..but HOPE sell ho gayi??😭
really didn't like tht arjun whtever talking like that to geet!!!!!🤢
she is really trying hard to hide her pain..
and am sure she will be broken somewhere wen she realizes wht she had done by selling hope!!
i hope the story turns this way because for me "HOPE" is the only thing that brought them together and will decide their future. she did it lost in the clouds of uncertainty and her desire to get her dream..but i am sure once she realizes wht she has done.. she is going to regret big time!!!

and for maan...he is a very understanding person as u hve portrayed in the entire story till date
but still i feel uncertain about his reaction in the next part!!!!!!

phewww am done!!!!!
really waiting badly for the next part
do cum up real real real soon!!!

Agree with u ash . wanna see his reaction .

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KawaiiGeet

@kawaii_geet

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#127

Originally posted by: hermoso
Agree with u ash . wanna see his reaction .

even me quite excited
was on call with shruthe di today..
even she is quite touched with the update!!!!!
and almost shares the same thoughts as us

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meravigiliso

@meravigiliso

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#128

Originally posted by: kawaii_geet
oh my god dii...
i am feeling so sad for geet...
she has that insecurity within her...
and she had hid it from the world really well
but can she run away from herself forever???
it was indeed a reality check...even i had forgotten about her sufferings amodst all these masti and maan's realisation!!!!
she is just not able to come in terms with her own feelings...she is somewhr lost...a darkness engulfing her!!!!
ands he sold "hope" for her dreams...that had actually brought her and maan together!!!!!

am kinda scared about the next update...
this was just lovely dii
hope maan doesnt take it the wrong way finding "HOPE" being sold!!!!!
now u hve to update next
u can't make us wait please update the next part faassttt

Touchy ash .

she is just not able to come in terms with her own feelings...she is somewhr lost...a darkness engulfing her!!!!
ands he sold "hope" for her dreams...that had actually brought her and maan together

Indeed painful lines ash . Me cant even able to imagine geet's plight 😭

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KawaiiGeet

@kawaii_geet

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#129

Originally posted by: hermoso
Touchy ash .
she is just not able to come in terms with her own feelings...she is somewhr lost...a darkness engulfing her!!!!
ands he sold "hope" for her dreams...that had actually brought her and maan together

Indeed painful lines ash . Me cant even able to imagine geet's plight 😭