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Prerna

@prerna1

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Posted: 13 years ago

#111

great part dear
waiting for maan reaction
plz continue soon

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luvu4ever143

@luvu4ever143

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Posted: 13 years ago

#112

Awesum update..
Luved it..
Jus started readin ur dis ff..
I jus luv d concept..
Geet sold her HOPE 4 her dream house..
Waitin to knw maan's reaction..
Continue soon..

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janvi

@janu_2006

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#113

Hey

gr8 part..

cont.sooon

thanks for pm dear..

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Saru

@smallville

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#114

Uh oh I hope they dnt fight !!!
Awesome update !!!!!!!!

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Divya Nair (aka Piya)

@piya-

Trailblazer

+ 10

Posted: 13 years ago

#115

This was not a simple update Di for me it was one of the major chapters of this FF

Maam realized his true love for Geet but alas these few days of separation laid the foundation of insecurity in Geet's mind

She is sure about the perfect nature of Maan, a genuine man with a golden heart and a great friend but today her heart desires for her love her husband

She is scared that even if Maan accepts her as his wife he may do it just as a responsibility and not due to LOVE slowly her HOPE has started diminishing

She wants a house which she could claim as her own kaash Maan ne kuch din pehle apne jasbatho ko samaj liya hotha toh shayad Geet uss dor ko bhechne ki sochthi bhi nahi jis dor ne unhe pehli baar bandha

HOPE is not a painting Di it is an integral part of this FF

In the first half of this story this painting gave Geet the strength that maybe oneday she will get the love of Maan

Geet sold that painting and this shows how badly her dreams have been shattered

When Maan will come to know about this I am sure he will realize her hidden pain

This act of Geet will make him realize that She has lost the HOPE of getting his love

I am sure one day Maan will surely purchase this painting back but right now his challenge is how does he make Geet realize the depth of his feelings

Geet will accept him and give him all the rights but if he has actually realized his true love for his angel then he will once again ignite a HOPE in her mind that will erase all her insecurities and will convince her that he has accepted her due to his LOVE and not due to his responsibility

"Aapko chaha humne par hum aapke dil mein jagah bana na sake

Aapko puja humne par aapke mann k mandir ki chaukat hum landh na sake

Jaante the hum k aapki khushboo hum apni ruh mein samet na sakenge

Par UMEED toh thi k shayad aapke kadmo ki dhool kuch pal humari parchayi ko mehkayenge

Issi umeed ne humse ye gunah karwadiya

Na jaane kab iss dil ne aapki dhadkano ki mauj ko apna liya

Ab meri umeed khwaishe bun chuki hai

Bechani bankar humari saaso mein karwate le rahi hai

Naadan dil ki gustaki toh dekhiye aapko paane ki tamanna liye baitha hai ye

Sheeshe ke rishto ko pyar ke bharosemannd dor se bandhne chala hai ye

Najane hawa ne aaj kaunsa rukh apna liya

Sachayi ke aaine se humara rubaru karwadiya

Jaan chuke hai hum nahi hum aapke dil mein

Sapne dekhe the jo, wo toh jal gaye guzre hue palo mein

Nahi aap bewafa par humari wafao ki kashish dhundli padh chuki hai

Aapke intezaar mein biti hui har raat katra katra bankar humare palko se bheh chuki hai

Jis rishte ki thi aas ussi rishte se darr lagta hai

HUMSAFAR banne ki thi UMEED hume par FARZ KI LATAKTI HUI TALWAAR humari ruh ko janjor detha hai

Nahi jee sakthe ab hum iss kashmash mein

chod di humne UMEED ki wo har gali

Aapko paana shayad nahi humari kismat mein

Bun chuke hai hum bina khusboowali ek murjaayi hui si kali"

Di this is a poem from my side as this is what I felt would be Geet's POV after reading ur update

Pata nahi I just couldn't stop myself from penning this down😳

Sorry to trouble u with my stupid poem

continue soon

love u loads

urs Piggy (Piya)

Edited by piya- - 13 years ago

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swetha10

@swetha10

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Posted: 13 years ago

#116

Awesome update..

awww poor geet somewhere lost hope tht maan would luv her back..

hmm she sold her fav painting...

wonder how maan would react..

continue soon

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Alamelu

@Alamelu

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#117

loved it...but am now nervous...what would maan's reaction be to geet's first selling hope and then buying the property ...hope he understands her and her feeligns...hope he does open up to her please i want to see her happy

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dumas

@dumas

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#118

poor khushi she has accepted maan will never love her so she sold hope to buy the farm house so when he and she separated she won't be a burden on any one can't wait for maan reaction loved the update poor geet thanks for the pm

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-lakshmi-

@-lakshmi-

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#119

last part which was maans pov, i felt so happy reading that he had accepted his feeling towards geet ...

and in this part am feeling so sad for geet at the same time... her feeling of rejection, her feeling of insecurity, her feeling to be no one to be loved, her feeling of guilty when seeing others loved... i am feeling sooo sad for her... again ritzy dil chura liya wonderful expression of feelings

when she had thought of raising 20 lak through her paintings i was praying here to keep the "HOPE" safe!!! her feeling to have at least a home for herself had made her take this decision to part with so precious...

i really want maan to work hard for getting her... making her realise that he is in love and not just an adjustment will not be easy i think...

i really wished u hadnt stopped it over there... cant wait to know his reaction... plzz continue soon