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Posted: 12 years ago
iam so sorry for late reply..i really held up with my college...iam cutting my sleeping hours to update my own works so not getting time to reply...anyways coming to update should i say that it is awessome everytime...ofcourse it was beyond awesome u know why??becoz it is filled only n only with my maan😆😉and his investigation to find his jaan...
wah maan wah god gave u master mind yar plz share ur brain with me na..hey dear plz send this maan to me i'll ask him to share his brain with me so that mona also become master minded like maan😆
omg kitni chalaki se daadi ke room se info gather ki maan ne...he is all ready in her apartment before her..and geet madam is again running from him just like he is some monster...😡 geet y u r missing him yar..itna hot banda kisi ko asaani se nahi milta chance maro yar...😆
just kidding ha..poor babay again caught by maan..ab kya karega maan..will he run behind her??
well u are the only one who can answer...cont soon...
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Part-55


Geet as usual packed her bags and went out for her clg...without waiting for Maan and Annie to be back and do breakfast with.Today she didn't feel like talking with anyone,nither having sumthing to eat.She sat on the car and stared at the moving trees,lost in her thoughts,lost in her explainations.

What the hell she did wrong to deserve this exilation towards her family!Was a 2 year old that much of a liability??Does having a mute kid brings that much of shame and disrespect to a family that she had to be so ruthlessly given away to an orphanage??

The car haulted to her clg's front gate and broke her chains of thoughts,She bade goodbye to driver kaka and went to her clg campus...she was almost one n a half hour early...so she sat on the campus's green field and again let herself flow away with her thoughts.


Meanwhile...

'bhaiya bhaiya...uff...slow down a lil bit..'Annie shouted panting. Maan smiled and lessen his pace of jogging.Annie reached him and panted,'Good morning bhai'

'good morning Nini...'

'Bhaiya aapse baat karni thi...uff lets just sit down a lil,can't talk with all those pantings!'

'I have only 1 round left,let me finish it till then u sit on bench n get normal'

'okie dokie'She sat on the nearby bench and tried to control her breaths,Meanwhile Maan increased his pace and gave his last round in 5 min.Annie started to look around...and think how to tell things to maan.

Maan jogged back to her and took out his water bottle and poured it on himself..wiping it with his towel.'Bol kya hua abb...whom u wanna complain now?'n chuckled.

'Uff...aap bhi na?humesha mujhe taang karte ho!'Annie huffed.

Maan chuckled more,'FYI,that was a complain also.'

'Uff!I dun wanna fun now,me came her to disscuss something very serious with u,I've actually came her for that.'

'I'm not Going back to Mansion' Maan's smile stopped and he got up and started leaving.Annie jumped up and started to walk with him,'Plz bhaiya aap aisa matt bolo na?Dekho ye hamara ghar hain we siblings have the right to be with each other!ye haq to humse matt chino!'

'What did u just say?U think Geet's taking me away from u n vicky?' Maan was fuming.

Annie got scared but she said,'Mera matlab woh nehi tha..She is a very naive girl and she would never do that as she knows the meaning of family.Per bhai ye sab karke ur depriving her of the feeling of a family.She deserves to be in a family,have a good time with vicky n me,play with our dog in the garden,have ashirwad of dadima...'

hearing the word dadima he clenched his jaw and started to leave again and that made annie angry,she stormed towards him n pulled him to her harshly.'aap aise mu nehi pher saqte humse...hum sabse...we have our rights on u too...not just geet.Aur aapko dadi ke pair pakadke pare rehna chaiye cuz Dadi is the one who chose geet for u...If she didn't introduce u with geet that way then u could have never noticed geet...u think Dadi k tarika galat the...?agar dadi usse KM pe nehi le aate na...toh Geet ko na jane kya hota uska aur U would have been married to that bitch Sameera!!!'

Annie was screaming her heart out,maan was stoned.He words hit him hard.

'aapka emotions hamesha imbalanced hain...if u love someone u love extremely!And when u hate someone u hate with ur life???Y the hell is that!!y ur so imbalanced in ur emotions...aap geet se pyaar karte karte hum logo ko bhul gaye...i'm not blaming her..never.But think about it too she needs space for herself too...She loves u bhai i can see it in her eyes...abb usse kuch space do let her know about her feelings towards u and come to u this time'

'aap ghar aa jao bhai hum aap ko bauhot miss karte hain...dadi aapke liye har roz rote hain...vicky bhi aarahe hain next week.Hum sab ek sath ho rahe hain after a long time...humesha k liye...plz bhai...wapas aa jao...geet ko bhi chance do to be a khurrana bahu...not just Mrs.Khurrana.Bhai i just hope u understand what ur here by staying away.'

saying this Annie walked away but maan was still rooted.She was right..I was always so pushy.So dominating,never thought what other ppl wanted because no one ever couldn't pointed out any flaws in my plans,But in personal life i'm a mess.she was right...dadi met me with her...she's right...i was wrong...i was wrong...

He went back to his room,but she couldn't find geet,he started to look for her in every rooms n suddenly stopped seeing a note glued in cupboard,'Going to clg,will have breakfast in food court' He took the note and realized she needs some place now...to make their bond strong. He went to washroom, took bath,dressed up and had breakfast with annie,and dropped her in a mall and went to KC.


Meanwhile...

Geet doesn't know how long she was staring at a beautiful small white flower on the grass...she jumped with a sudden male voice coming from just beside her,

'Beautiful...isn't it?'

she jerked to see Raj sitting next to her with his bag...he looked like he has been sitting for quite a long time...she got scared and uncomfy and abruptly got up taking her bag but Raj too got up saying,'ok ok i'm sorry...i didn't mean to startle u...i just wanted to apologize for scaring u that day with seat topic...I actually didn't want to scare u but u were scared already...so u got scared scared...n i wanted to unscare u but...'He himself got confused what he's saying to he scratched his head n made a 'oh damn' face.

Geet looked at him with a hidden smile,when he saw that he started laughing too.

"Hello,I'm Raj."

"I'm Geet."


They get along in the next hour and after the class till her car's arrival,Raj didn't introduce her to his gang,She too was kind of thankful that he didn't.She didn't want any unwanted attention or headaches.

Geet's car reached and geet looked @ that direction n looked back @ Raj,giving him her beautiful smile.
Edited by .MoNsTeR.MuShI. - 11 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

you are really doing a awesome job...

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Posted: 12 years ago
hi
got Pm
marking it
will read it soon
loved part 1
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Posted: 12 years ago
loved ur ff...it is interesting
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Posted: 12 years ago
will start with this one too very soon

thanks for pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome ff continue soon thanks for the pm!
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Posted: 12 years ago

THX 4 PM...

I JUST START READING...

IT SEEMS INTERESTING STORY...

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