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DOSTI YA PYAAR


PART-18

I would like to dedicate this update to birthday gal tamanna di..happy birthday di…I know iam late in updating 😳 sorry but iam doing it today as ur bday gift….😃

@all-iam so sorry for not updating since many days..iam really very with my college these days..😭so plz bear with me




"oh stop it now…listen harika according to me friendship is more valuable than love and this thing just spoils true friendship..how can one deceive other in the name of friendship….me or geet never ever did that…plz don't spoil our friendship with ur crap..if geet would have listened it??what she would have thought…plz stop saying all this non sense again.."maan said n stormed out from there in anger..


Harika who felt offended rushed from there in tears even when aadi n maan's dad tried to stop her…


Dad(st):oh god!!!what he did now…he is such a stupid…I know he loves her n I can see that in his eyes..he was restless to have a glimpse of geet when he was just a day away from her n today he is naming it as friendship..god knows ye baat maan ko sab samaj aayega…he sighed n moved from there…


Here geet who just heard maan's out burst felt that earth slipped down from her feet…her dream seemed to be shattered before she tried it to make it reality..her dream to live her life with maan by her side..to be loved by maan in the same way she loves him..she stood there numb not able to accept the reality that maan thinks her as his best friend…tears which clouded her eyes slipped down finally…


Geet closed her mouth tight n cried her heart out as she recollected.." how can one deceive other in the name of friendship….me or geet never ever did that…plz don't spoil our friendship with ur crap..if geet would have listened it??what she would have thought…"


For once she thought"is she really decieving maan??maan only thinks her as his friend not more than that??how can she think about her friend in that way??"..geet just not able to understand what to do now..her wounds were still paining but not more than the pain she is feeling in her heart…she sobbed silently for more than a hour…


Geet wiped her tears as she is determined on her decision now…"nai…i cant hurt maan by confessing him when he just thinks me as his best friend…I cant loose ur friend ship maan..i cant…i cant see hatred in ur eyes…ha mein maan ko nahi bataungi ki mein…"a tear slipped down again…"but maan I cant stop my heart from loving u…I love u soo much maan but I never let u know about my love…"she sobbed silently…


After few minutes she heard maan's voice coming from living area…she don't know why but she don't want to face maan now..so she closed her eyes pretending to sleep..maan entered her room n found her sleeping peacefully..harika's words some where created disturbance in him…he is feeling restless for some unknown reason..he is not able to see that he too loves her as his thought about friendship had influenced his mind n not allowing to think about her in this way…actually he is not ready to find what he is feeling for geet..


He came to geet n caressed her hair when he found her sleeping…"geet…"he called her in low tone..geet who don't want to face him stayed silent not responding to him..maan tried again but she did the same again..maan sighed thinking she must be in a deep sleep n left the room thinking to return back later….


After an hour or so maan came back with her medicines n woke her up…geet has to face him now also she prepared herself to face the reality.."are u ok now??is it still paining so much"maan asked her handing her medicines…geet nodded in no looking at her lap..maan left surprised to find her silent…"kya huwa??tum teek ho??"maan asked with concern…geet just nodded followed by a mumble…"hmmm"…maan smiled n left the room asking her to rest for sometime..



Days passed like that maan taking care of geet as if she is a kid n geet too started acting normal as if nothing has happened..but she is not the same bubbly geet..she used to smile n talk with maan but her heart is still in pain…geet don't want to show that to maan also she thought to behave normal with maan as she atleast have maan as a friend and she don't want to loose her friend…


Even maan observed her changed behaviour…geet who used to blabber continuosly without any full stop even when she is asked to do... now she is silent all the while n when he asked her something she replied in hmmm..haa…and when there was need to talk her words were just limited.



It's been after 6 weeks of her accident n she can able to walk slowly now..maan n sometimes karan took her to walk n they spent the time with her chitchatting with her…harika just had phone conversations with geet as she doesn't want to face maan after that day's incident…it's not that she was wrong but she just don't want to come there…geet too never asked her the reason behind her sudden disappearance as she don't want harika to know that she heard their convo..if she says then she may ask geet about her feelings..so she kept mum….



Oneday when maaneet are chatting…"geet sach bolo..kya huwa hai tuje??you are not the same chatter box now…you became very silent…jab mein kuch poochtha hoon toh hmm ya haa mein jawab dethi ho..and when u need to say me anything u just say what I ask in limited words..you are not the same geet now…kya baat hai??kuch huwa hai kya??"

Geet left shocked with this question..how can she lie to him now..atonce maan's every word which he uttered that day rang in her ears filling her eyes…she tried hard to surpress her tears while nodding in no…she didn't look at maan but just nodded in no looking at her lap..





"lo phir se…plz geet aise mat raho..i cant see u like this..i want my chulbuli geet back…plz kaho mujse if u have any problem..we are best friends na…cant u share with ur maan"he asked holding her hand in his n making her to face him…

Geet looked at maan still with filled eyes..her tears were threatining to slip down at any time..






Geet(ST):kya kahu maan…kya kahu??i cant even lie to u…iam scared that I may loose myself if I talk to u..if I see ur care for me..i just cant stop myself from saying u that I love u maan….i love u more than anything….isliye mein tumhare aankhon mein dekkar baat nahi kar sakthi…aur tumse jhoot bhi nahi bol sakti..plz maan kuch mat poocho..plz…I cant afford to loose my friend maan..plz don't make me loose my control…geet thought supressing her tears…but finally she was helpless n tears slipped down her cheeks gaining maan's attention…


Maan panicked atonce.."geetu kya huwa??are u ok??why u are crying??did I hurt u??plz tell me na…plz…"maan asked her cupping her face n his face engulfed with worry n fear thinking did she have any problem…


Geet now lost her control but still stopped herself from crying out loud n just nodded in no…but maan is all the while requesting her n geet lost her last wit of control..for her luck she saw rano n mohinder entering her room with fearful faces along with karan…"mama…"geet mumbled in tears..as soon as rano came to her geet hugegd her tightly n cried her heart out..she felt solace in her mom's embrace after going through inner turmoil for 6 six weeks.."mama..i missed u soo much"geet mumbled in her embrace n rano kept caressing her hair.."ro mat meri bacchi..mama agayi hai na…geet ye bata tu kesi hai??aur tumne apni accident ek bhare mein kyun nahi bataya humein…bhagwan ka lakh lakh shukar hai ki meri bacchi sahi salamat hai.."she creid along with geet…

Maan is still confused with geet's behaviour but left her n rano alone thinking she must be missing her mom..

Later after a week geet became normal n rano took her to their home as she is fit n fine now….geet who determined in her mind that she wont let maan or anyone to know her feelings behaved all normal but still she is not the same geet…something is lost in her..when maan asked her about that day's conversation which they left in the middle..geet just escaped saying she was missing her mom..that's it!!..though maan is not satisfied with her answer he shrugged it…


It's very busy day for geet n karan as they were planning a surprise for maan's birthday…they are all set to wish maan to night n waiting for night to arrive…though they have to struggle had to plan chupke chupke but finally did that…


Geet n karan reached college to search for harika..they thought they'll wrap up all tensions between the friends on maan's bday…so they were searching for her in the whole college but she is now here…

It's evening now n still harika is no where…so karan went to pick her up from hostel directly…geet agreed n warned him to come soon for which he agreed…


It's almost 11 now but harika n karan are nowwhere..even their mobiles are switched off…geet felt frustated n helpless as she is not getting what to do now…"oh god!!ab mein kya karu??is stupid karan kaha gayab hogaya…omg!!it's 11:30 now(she looked at her watch)how can I wish maan without him…maan feels very bad if karan wont be there…plz karan plz jaldi aao plz…"she is praying to god to send karan..having left with no other option she along with her gang i.e,aadi,romeo n famliy got ready to wish maan…


The clock stuck 12 n they all wished maan at a time making him jerk from his sleep…"happy birthday maan.."geet shouted loudly n hugged him…maan smiled widely n hugged her back"thanku soo much geetu"…everyone wished maan by hugging him n after receiving wishes from everyone he looked for karan,his best friend who wishes hi first but he is no where.."oh so mr.karan prasad is playing some prank on me…hmm...let me tell u iam not liking it"maan said as he assumed him to plan something…karan,maan geet never celebrated their bday's without each other...whatever may be the situation they never fails to attend n today he is now here…"karan where are u buddy..come out now..masti baad mein karlena..its' party time man"maan said looking for him..geet felt bad n finally said.."wo maan…karan pata nahi kaha chala gaya..iam trying to call him since eveing but…"maan felt very bad for not finding his friend there but shrugged it thinking he might have stuck in trafic or somewhere"hmmm..i guess he is in traffic..wait I'll call him"n maan tried to call him but this time karan disconnected his call..he tried nearly 20 times but the result is same…


"maan..chalo na cut the cake"romeo asked maan…maan whose face turned pale now replied"no I cnt celebrate my bday without karan..let him come..i'll wait"he said n settled in couch..geet started trying to call him but he is disconnecting her call which irked her…


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Posted: 12 years ago

yay me first🥳

upt was superb as usual

poor geet hope maan understand his feelings soon

loved it,...

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Posted: 12 years ago
part 18
nice part...
poor Geet...
now whats wrong with Karan?
cont soon dear...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Really felt bad for geet..
she s breaking within..
but wat happened to karan?
sumthg hapnd to harika?
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why is Karan not picking calls...

what happen to him...

geet is supressing her feelings because she is afraid that if Maan comes to know she loves him...he will hate her and she will loose her friend also...

hope Maan realize that friendship can be progressed into love...

awesome update...

thanx for pm...


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