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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: MonaLovesMaan

No prblm di i understand n i'l wait
thanku so so much for cnverting it in to ff
love u..muaaz
and teaser toh damakedar hai..
I'l be waitng for update

update aur bhi damakedaar hoga jaan updating 😉
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: dreamyharika


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wow!!
Waitng...
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Posted: 12 years ago
typing sweety bus half an hr more!!!!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: maaneetmaahi

Read all the parts in one go. just loved the story. loved the updates. i love your writing in your every stories.
and this is a entirely different concept.
i just loved a dialogue of Geet ' i want to be possessivly urs'

have to read Your 2 more stories.

thanks so much amrutha for ur appreciation!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: punam2712

AM GLAD THAT GEET TOLD MAAN ABOUT HER AND SAMEERA

AND WHAT OS GEET'S CONFUSION NOW

u did not read previous parts punam??
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: zaara2212

sorry sweety just read both the parts 12 & 13 now ...it was lovely

hmmm why is this dev so much into creating confusions... 😡😡

thanks for comment zaara😃
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Posted: 12 years ago

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Edited by dreamyharika - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
PART 14

Geet did not know wat to say she just howled haan main pagal hoon aapke liye ho gayi thi pagal aapke pyar ke liye now just leave me. Maan was not understanding her behavior wat is wrong geet?? aisa kya hai jo tumhe pareshaan kar raha hai???


She did not do anything bt tried to move away this angered maan so much maine kaha tha ull not move y don't u just understand??? Aur yeh kya pagalpan laga rakha hai tumne??? Wat is this tattoo?? Are u out of ur mind?? Jawab do geet!!! he roared near her earlobe making her to jump out in fear. Geet still did not say anything so maan yelled on her open ur mouth geet!!! yeh kya second hand laga rakha tha tumne aur uss ladki ne??


Geet lowered her eyes unable to take maan's wrath and retorted aap pehle decide karlijiye aapka kis sawaal ka jawab mujhe dena hai!!! aur yeh bhi sochiye ki kya mujhe aapse sawaal karne ka haq hai?? aaj tak mujhe lagta tha ki hosh mein na rehke aap mujhe chute hai lekin now?? U are completely in ur senses and still doing the same. Y shud I answer ur questions?? Maan was shocked with wat geet spoke!!! His hold on her loosened automatically, so taking the opportunity geet pushed away maan and removed the saree he just made her wear infront of him and walked into the washroom. She changed into her spaghetti top and a short, came back to the room. Maan was still in the same position, he did not move, wen he found geet in those shorts his blood boiled. He was trying his best to control his anger and this dumbo girl is raising it again. Geet understood that maan is accepting her bt just that not voicing it out, this time she sandwitched him on to the wall. Maan did not get time to react even wen she questioned him looking into his eyes I want to know maan y are u touching me this way?? Aap hosh mein nahi hote hai toh u always do it aaj bhi??Geet moved forward and tried to take his scent in her making sure he wasn't drunk, bt maan has great testing time having her so close. He didn't know y he was touching her either wat will he answer her?? geet continued haan sam aur mere beech mein baatein hui. We had a bet and now that u desire me tell me where do I stand in ur life?? Wat am I to u?? simran aur aapke beech mein kya tha?? U neva said u love me bt still u touch me and u loved simran right?? Toh hui na main second hand??? Toh wat kinda relation u shared?? How far''' geet's voice got chocked wen she felt maan turning her around pinning her slammed his lips on hers, biting them with his teeth carnally like a hungry lion. He scrabbled his tongue into her mouth making her chocked. His hands automatically went inside her top, he ran his hands on her back raising them, tracing the length of her spine till he found her bra hook. He sucked her lips moving his mouth on hers completely. The moment geet found maan's hand on the hook she tried to shove him away wen his hold went even more tighter and he unclasped it. He was not slow, actually raw with oozing passion. He nibbled her lips taking the sweetness of her into his. It was the first kiss for him and her too!!! Maan did not know this pleasure till now. He kissed her breathless. After along time maan left geet and spoke ab sochlo how far I went with simran!!! U can guess with my kiss second hand yaha koi bhi nahi hai geet yeh baat tumhe jaldi pata chal jayegasaying this he held her arm and dragged her harshly towards himself making geet to collide with his chest, holding her tight he fixed the hook and walked away, but something struck him so he came back to her kal!!! 9'o clock in my cabin. U are joining for the internship and walked away. Geet went mad with anger, she just threw the vase on the table yelling I am not coming until u answer me got it??? maan held it and retorted dekhta hoon kaise nahi aaogi aur haan wear a descent salwar other u know wat ill do!!



Geet smiled at his possessiveness and to add fuel she answered him agar main aise hi aajaongi toh tab kya karenge??? She walked towards him seductively wen maan pushed her on the bed hovering her he ran his fingers on her swollen lips and replied


RAPE!!! Matlab jaanti ho na??? wahi hoga kal tumhare saath!!! He declared aur haan yeh mat samajhna ki mai koi warning de raha hoon I am damn true abt that!!! And it wud be better if u change now kal mujhe tumse kaam hai so make sure u don't get late if u don't listen to me then trailor tumne abhi abhi dekha picture kal hoga!!! saying this maan walked away


On the other side sam and dev who were searching for maaneet understood that they left the party.


Sam: I neva thought that geet can actually make maan fall for her dev and I am telling u I just cant loose him this way geet se haarke toh bilkul bhi nahi


Dev: me too sam I want geet at any cost I have a plan all we need to do is trap geet this time. She is anyway insecure abt simran so I know wat to do now!!!

Raat Ka Nasha Abhi

Aankh Se Gaya Nahin...

Tera Nashila Badan

Baahon Ne Chhoda Nahin

Aankhen To Kholi Magar

Sapna Woh Toda Nahin

Haan Wohi Woh Wohi

Saason Pe Rakha Hua Tere Hoton Ka

Sapna Abhi Hai Wahi



i know it was another short update plz sirf ek last baar maaf kardo will give lamba wala next pakka wala promise!!! mona jaan sorry!!


can i raise my bar to 140 likes??? try giving me plz this time



HAPPY BIRTHDAY SWEETY SAMPA LOV U GIRL HAVE A BLAST THIS DAY AND ALSO CONGO FOR TURNING INTO GOLDIE SWEETS HAVE A GREAT LIFE AHEAD







PREVIOUS PART:
PART 13


NEXT PART:

PART 15



Edited by dreamyharika - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
yayyy me first me first!!
as u said it was really a dhamakedar update di..i neva expected that maan would speak out actually geet made him to do..
he indirectly said what he want to..iam so so happy...
ab waiting to to know when he says it directly i.e geet i love u..
ha ha iam like this😲🤣 when maan said he'll rape her if she wont attend office..lol😆
kya dhamki di maan ne👏 she'll defo attend the office now😉
and both kameenis dev n sam😡 planning to trap geet grrr..i'll kill them..
hope geet wont ge trapped..if so it should turn an advantage like bringing maaneet closer😉
waiting for next part di..
thanx for updating..love u🤗


Edited by MonaLovesMaan - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
ne update chalo bhagundi kane chala small part echav nuvvu next naku big prt gavali loved it throughly
Edited by meena.. - 12 years ago

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