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soumi

@soumimaaneetsou

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Posted: 13 years ago

'kehte hai khuda ne is..
jahan me sabhi k lie..
kisi na kisiko hai banaya
har kisi k lie..

kuch to hai tujhse raabta..kuch to hai tujhse raabta...'

they said god made d couples..

wherv u try..in any ways...at last he wil make u meet to ur soulmate...

is that so?

we spent our life thinking over d person..smtime it seems we hv found it..but is it?

true love...is not always 1st love..not always lov at 1st site..true love is smthing...smthing like...

well lets explore what it is...

thorugh a smal journey..of maan nd..nd his love..or shld i say true love..

HIII...how r u all?

fimaly after a long time..am in geet forum..i mean as an active member..(:))

anywys..enough of my bak bak...d point is..am in a mood todey..to write my mind...as it just come acros an idea...

hope u guys wl lik it...i wl cntinue it if only u want...nd dis time..i wl not left it in d middl lik most of my previous stories...:)

wil post 1st part tmrw..it wl b a shrt stry..max 4-5 parts..:)

love u all... ~~soumi~~

Edited by soumimaaneetsou - 13 years ago

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Shraddha Sinari

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Posted: 13 years ago

Int. Concept waiting 4 next

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soumi

@soumimaaneetsou

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Posted: 13 years ago

part~1

Bright rays of sun lightens the room...it falls on his face..

he tries to open eyes...as soon as he opens it...a shooting pain tears his head...his whole body felt heavy...

'how r you feeling now?'

he heard a female voice...he tries to gather...to understand the surrounding...he tries to focus...only to see a face...then a girl was standing near the bed...

it was enough for him to bring back to reality...he tries to sit back in a jerk...only to feel the sharp pain on his head again...

'god...my head!!'he shouts...

'arehh!!what are u doing...cant you just take rest?...'the girl said anxiously...

'hell...what is she doing here?does she told everything to her parents?...about last ni8?...if yes...then it will be a big problem...what if they told me to leave the house...!!!!oh god...!!!'he thought...

he is maan...maan singh khurana...working in a ITI company from last 2 months...he is new to mumbai...belongs to a small town of Dehradoon...came here for job...after living someday in a mess...he rented this house...his landlord lives in 1st floor...they are good people...affectionate to him as he is living far away from his home...

and here she is...daughter of his landlord...Geet...geet sharma...studying engeniring last year...

maan always maintains his distance from her...truly said he fears her a bit..as according to him...she is a hitlar...always in a mood to shout at you...scold you...giving knowledge to you...

'hey...what are you thinking?...listen here take the tea...mamma made this for you...take it nd you will feel better...'she said...

'hmm?...woh...thanks...par tumhe yeh sab karne ki kya zaroorat thi?...i can make it for myself...'he said to her...

'if you dont want it...then throw it...u dont need to give any xtra charge for it...'she turned her face...ready to leave the room angrily...

'am realy sorry...i didnt mean that...am sory...sory for yesterday also...'he apolozised...

'hmm...why u do thing for which u have to feel sory letter?...do u think you r the only person in d earth who have problems in life?...remember...there r other people also...who's problem is bigger than you...'she told him...and left the room...

after she gone...maan sits on the bed...and sips the tea...his body seems to relax a bit...he tried to think about his life...to the way its heading...

why?...it's hapening to him?...he is new to this town...doesnt know much here...but he thought he knew her...

they were perfect...but she...it didnt took a second for her to crash his heart...to tore it apart...what dis she said?

...yes...that she had "enough of it..." how can she?...

maan and pallavi were in a relation from last two months...she studies in a college near to his office...there he saw her first...nd for him...it was a love at first sight...

they becomes friend...and it didnt took much time to become good friend and then lovers...at least for him...

days were good...he was on cloud nine...but as the days passed...he felt pallavi is somewhere avoiding him...he tries to ignore it at first...but after some time...

'see maan...dont take me wrong...but i dont think we can take it long anymore...we are just not for each other...i think we cant make a pair together...am sorry...but i dont want this relation anymore...'she daid to him one day...

her words tore him apart...he never thought in his wild dream than pallavo can say this to him...he loves him so much...more than his life...how can he live without her?...how?...does his life has any meaning without her?...

days passed...

he was so lost in his sorrow that he cant focus on anything...he tirs to work hard on office...to forget everything...but nothing worked...

he even tried to end his life...but didnt gather the courage...yes...he was afraid...so he backes up...

he starts to drink...come home late at night...

and yesterday...when he came back late at night...drunk...he saw geet...looking him at a astonished manner...

he doesnt remeber anything else...how he comes to his room...what happend then...nothing...now he just hopes that she doesnt tels anything to uncle aunty...or else...god knows what will they think...

after finishing the tea...he somehow prepares a omlet nd toast for himself and having breakfast...he left for office...

'o re manwa tu toh bawra hai...

tu na jaane tu kya sochta hai...

tu na jane tu kya sochta hai baawre...

kiyu dikhaye...sapne tu ...sote jaagte...'

she war standing on the roof...alone...it is raining today...as if nature is also consoles her...

her taears are washed by the rain drops...it becomes a regular routine for her now...to come to the roof at night...where the starts...the moon is there atleast to share her pain...her sorrow...

'why?...why it happened to me?...why i lost my heart to a person to whom i didnt even exist...why?...

i know i will never be able to tell him...that i...i love him...because i know he doesnt...he doesnt even looks at me...then why it happened to me?...'

why i always keeps thinking about him?...why i cant sleep at night?...why i wait for him restlessly when he comes home late?...why?...'

her xams are in a week...but she cant concentrate on study...she got dark cycle on her eyes...due to lack of sleep...her friend says she is studying so hard that she got dark circle...

she smiles sadly...

she remembers about yesterday night...

she was on the balcony...as usual waiting for him...today he is very late...she was anxious for him...

suddenly she heard him open the main door...she runs downward...to find him standing there...

by his look she can say he is drunk...in fact from some days it has become his regular routine...she doesnt know what happened to him...what is bothering him...

he tumbled...she ran to him and hold him...supported him to reach his room...

she made him sit on the bed...and was about to leave the room...when she found a tug on her dupatta...she turns to see he is holding it...

'why?...why it happened to me?...where i went wrong?...where?...'he cried...

she sits beside him...holding his chin...'what hapened maan?evarything is fine in home na?...'she asked hesitatingly...

maan broke down completely...she starts to cry...with hiccups...almost choked...geet took him to the washroom...he vomites everything on the besin...paning...crying...

geet washes his face...wipes it softly...and made him lie on the bed...

'pallavi please...please come back to me..please...i love you so much...please dont leave me...dont...do..'he murmured...

geet wipes his tears...softly said...'she will come back to you...she will maan...'and she left...

guys...how was it????😊hope u will like it...will update next part in afternoon or tomorrow...

plz give me ur cments...😊

love u all...

and yah..i want to say that i took the idea from a story...i loked it so much and reminds me of maaneet...😳😳😉

~~soumi~~😳

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Remya

@Remya_Pillai

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Posted: 13 years ago

wow!gud start..
so maan was deeply in love with pallavi..
and geet with maan!!!
waiting 4 the next part..

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honeygrape

@honeygrape

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Posted: 13 years ago

nice start/...waiting to read more parts

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6n6s6k6i6r6a6n6

@6n6s6k6i6r6a6n6

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Posted: 13 years ago

it is really a fantastic SS...

Maan loves Pallavi but she rejected him...Geet loves him but he don't feel for her...Geet is trying to help him...so painful...

please update next part soon...

thanx for pm...