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Posted: 12 years ago
Part 17:





Maan nodded in yes and told "yes I am angry on you for calling me maanji. No ji please geet. Call me maan". Geet nodded in a no. "Maanji, lets go I think you are angry". Geet closed her eyes "I mean you are hungry". Maan rolled his eyes and smiled at his own idea how to take out that irritating JI.

They both got into the car and drove to geet's house. Maan stopped the car and told "geet go and change, I will be waiting". "Maanji, is it necessary to change. I have no problem we will go. Pls I am hungry" told geet making a sad face. "Oh oh my dear lazy queen, you have to go and change. Ok?? Fast" told maan. Geet made a face and left from there. When she entered her room she saw a packet on the bed. She went towards her bed and opened the packet. There is some note in the packet with a beautiful saree.

Dear geet,

This is a small gift from me.. did you like the saree. Sorry yaar if you didn't for the first time I shopped something. And I imagined you in this saree and bought it for you. Be ready fast.

Your maan.

Geet caressed the saree and smiled. For the first time someone gifted her and she loved it. Why don't she when it s gifted from her maanJI. She took the shower and got ready in the beautiful black color saree. She wore the diamond necklace and ear rings which brought by maan.

(imagine geet in this saree)

She looked herself in the mirror and smiled to herself. She is feeling shy to go out, but thinking maan is waiting for her she has gone out. When she reached the hall, she saw maan all ready in this white see through transparent shirt and jeans. She smiled at him shyly and maan is lost in her beautiful yet innocent face.

Maan moved towards her automatically and geet downcasted her eye lids. Maan held her chin and made her look at him. Maan is lost in her eyes which is showing love for him yet some fear. But not to worry soon that fear will be replaced with love.

"Did you like my guft geet?" Asked maan. Geet nodded for an yes. Maan smiled and asked "shall we go?" Geet again nodded. Words are not coming out of her mouth. Maan held geet's hand and went towards car. Maan drove to a farm house which is a half hour journey from geet's place. Maan got down of the car came to Geet's side opened the door, extended his hand. Geet took it happily and got down.

She is wearing saree after a long time, she is having difficulty in walking. Maan saw her and scooped geet in his arms. Geet gasped seeing his sudden move. Maan smiled and took her in. The room is dark, geet clutched maan's shirt tight, she is afraid of dark. Maan made her stand on her feet and switched on the lights.

Geet is shocked and surprised seeing the hall decorated beautifully. There are so many pics of geet's childhood. Some with her mama, papa and some with meer. She looked at each and every photo lovingly. She missed her childhood. Seeing her mama and papa's pic tears rolled down. She caressed and kissed that pic. When she went ahead she saw their marriage photos. Her smile broadened. She then looked at maan, who is staring at her lovingly.

"Did you like this geet?" Asked maan. "Maanji, I loved all these. Thanku very much. I miss mama and papa very much maanji. I don't know maanji I never thought I will meet you all again. You, meer, jijaji and our muskaan. I am feeling lucky today maanji" told geet. Maan hugged her from back and told "we are lucky to have you geet. Never think you are alone. Whatever happened in your life we cant change. But the persons who are responsible for your pain will suffer geet". Maan is getting angry but he controlled and asked "lunch??"

Geet nodded and they both headed towards the pool where maan has arranged lunch for both of them. There is a table and a chairs for two persons. There are so many dishes on the table. Maan made geet sit on the chair. Geet saw the food and smiled widely, all are her favorite items. Pasta, Aloo paratha, palak panner, pani puri, pizza and many more.



Maan sat opposite to geet and filled geet's plate. Maan too served himself, geet was about to eat maan stopped her. Maan took a piece of paratha dipped in the palak paneer and fed her. Geet shied and took a bite from him. She too did the same. They both enjoyed the food. Maan saw geet is smiling whole heartedly and sighed in relief. Finally he made her smile and there is pain in her eyes. His first plan in making geet happy is success. Maan don't want geet to go in her past again. What she suffered is enough not any more.

They both completed their lunch, geet is cleaning the table. Maan held her wrist and asked her for a dance. Geet nodded and a soft yet romantic music is played in the background. They danced for sometime looking at each others eyes. Geet felt at peace being in his arms. Its like the safest place for her. The music ended, maan took geet into the farm house and showed her. geet loved each and every thing. Maan saw that geet is tired but she didn't tell anything. He took her to their bed room and made her sleep on the bed. He kissed her forehead and told you are looking tired geet. Rest for some time.

Geet nodded and closed her eyes holding maan's hand. When maan was about to get up, he felt a grip on his hand. He smiled and settled beside geet hugging her. Geet snuggled close to him and slept peacefully. After some time maan too fell asleep.

After an hour maan got up and looked at geet who is still sleeping. He pecked her forehead and kept looking at her lovingly. I love you geet murmured maan. Few days back he was angry on geet for leaving him and muskaan. He thought geet didn't love him and left. His main reason for gathering information about her was to take revenge but everything changed. He got geet's diary and came to know about her life. He never expected geet suffered so much. After he promised himself not to give pain to geet in her life.

Geet opened her eyes and tried to get up. But maan's hold on her waist is tight. She looked at maan who is staring at her lovingly. "Maanji' we should leave now, its getting late". But maan tightened his grip on her waist. Geet looked at him confusingly. "I will leave you only on one condition. Call me maan".

Geet looked at him with wide eyes and nodded in a no. ok then I wont leave you told maan. We will be like this forever and I don't have any problem. Geet looked at maan with sad face. you have other option too geet told maan. Geet looked at him curiously. Kiss me then I will leave you.

Precap: what will geet do?



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Edited by chinni10 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
wooo awesome...
evn i loved his surprise...
awee geet is getting wat she deserves...
wat a condition maan...tooo good...
i think dono hoga...,
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome update di
it was sweet yet romantic date..
ha ha maan ne kya condition rakha..loll i want both options to happen😉
let's see what geet will do..
i wish she stop calling him maanJI 😆 aisa lagtha hai maan koi old men ho😆
cont soon di
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Posted: 12 years ago
Romantic Maan😳 so Geet, Maan ya kiss😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome...
Use ji nikalne me itna awkwark lag rha he how will she kiss him... Abhi k liye ji hi nikal sakta he...kiss will come in second stage...update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
very sweet maaneet moments..maan is getting very naughty..pls cont soon...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Nice part..Geet will call him Maan now.
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Posted: 12 years ago
wow!that was lovely surprise..
Loved naughty mood of maan..
superb update..
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Posted: 12 years ago
Cute update...
What Geet will do now 😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
superb yaar
i just finsihed reading all the pasts and must sya they are just superb
the story is awesome
now i want to know why geet left maan

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