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Maaneet099

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Posted: 12 years ago

#41

Originally posted by: KittuPratzz

happy ending aithe enti...madhyalo motham edipinchav 😭 awww...riya 😭

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KittuPratzz

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Posted: 12 years ago

#42

Originally posted by: Maaneet099

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abhaaa sorry enduku 😡🤗 chala chalaaa bavundi. touchy!!! 😊

detailed explanation ivana?? naa thots..naa conclusions..na pov?

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Maaneet099

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Posted: 12 years ago

#43

Originally posted by: KittuPratzz

abhaaa sorry enduku 😡🤗 chala chalaaa bavundi. touchy!!! 😊

detailed explanation ivana?? naa thots..naa conclusions..na pov?

aaww thanks soo much!

@bold: ee doubt enthuku. of course i would love to know what you felt reading it. this one is very special for me so i want to know what you think too 😃

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KittuPratzz

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Posted: 12 years ago

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"Wahhh!"

The loud shrill of the baby echoed through the empty corridor of the hospital. He immediately stood up from the bench to run to the source of sound only to meet the doctor walking out.

"Doctor?" he asked hesitantly.

"Congratulations Mr. Khurana, it's a girl," the doctor announced, smiling.

His chest swelled in pride at her announcement but the next second a frown creased his forehead, "Geet?" he asked his question laced with worry.

Good start...wailing of new born child...the happiness enfolding the couple...the bundle of joy in their arms..the most cherished moment...everything is just perfect!!!

The apprehensiveness of maan to take their baby...the fear whether he could handle the baby or he will end up hurting her? hmm awww those are common fears among parents splly Fathers..

even my dad was scared ...he rarely took me in his arms...bcoz i was a fragile one...and under weight 😛😆 so he never dared to take risk .

hmm next installment...hmm the way Riya happily chirped and came to hug her father was an awe moment 😳 ...

When maan got angry for interrupting him in his meeting...apude anipinchindi..something is wrong...y wudnt he recognize the voice? and the harsh treatment 😭😭😭 maammmaaa 😭 i literally cried...thank god...staff evaru choodale...or else.. 😲 *shakes head* Vammmooo!!

the way he shouted , shoved her...the words he spit...😡😡 idiot kahin ka...

i dont want to talk abt this...lekunte..inkaaa kopam vastundi.

Riya , cutiee baby was happily blabbering about her ordeals...and this mahaan purushhh 🤢 grrr

and i concluded...veediki pakka Amnesia problem lantidi undi emo ani.

but is it needed to speak in a brash way?? she is still s kid...she wont be able to take those harsh words...when she was/is and will be the apple of eye!! 😳

but i cannot blame maan here bcoz he is still in the impression that Women are just useless creatures.

but still it doesnt imply that Kid shud brunt ur anger 😡

will continue in a while...

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Maaneet099

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Posted: 12 years ago

#45

@Kittu... thank you darling. i am already loving every bit of your comment... i shall reply once you are totally done with it. and of course no hurries :D

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KittuPratzz

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Posted: 12 years ago

#46

Originally posted by: Maaneet099
@Kittu... thank you darling. i am already loving every bit of your comment... i shall reply once you are totally done with it. and of course no hurries :D

abhaaa la kaadu..panakam lo pudaka laaga...my boss pakana unadu..if i go on commenting...he will be agitated..anduke.

Sure..ill club whole comment and then i will reply 😛

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Maaneet099

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Originally posted by: KittuPratzz

abhaaa la kaadu..panakam lo pudaka laaga...my boss pakana unadu..if i go on commenting...he will be agitated..anduke.

Sure..ill club whole comment and then i will reply 😛

haha no problem Kittu. do it at your free time. 😊

abhi me shleepy... catch ya tomorrow 😃🤗

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-lakshmi-

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Posted: 12 years ago

#48

i had difficulty in reading the last parts of the story as my eyes were clouded with unstopping tears, though am reading this story for the second time... no words to tell how much touching ur story was...

cant we have a continued part of a happy life maan with his mishty and princess??

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KittuPratzz

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Posted: 12 years ago

#49

hmm im BACK 😃😆

lol...okay...u knw naaku sakhi story gurthukuvachindi..while reading this os. dont ask me why...

that accident which happened on road...and geet not lifting any calls...emo aa cinema la anipinchindi...last varaku..riya and maan pain oka vaipu..geet missing in each frame...and no body knws her whereabouts...adhi oka avaipu...last varaku geet ki emaindaaa ane suspense...

u knw nenu pakka adhi geet anukuna aa accident lo hurt aindi geet ee...but NO...ahaaan...u proved me wrong 😃

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Maaneet099

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Posted: 12 years ago

#50

Originally posted by: KittuPratzz
hmm im BACK 😃😆

lol...okay...u knw naaku sakhi story gurthukuvachindi..while reading this os. dont ask me why...

that accident which happened on road...and geet not lifting any calls...emo aa cinema la anipinchindi...last varaku..riya and maan pain oka vaipu..geet missing in each frame...and no body knws her whereabouts...adhi oka avaipu...last varaku geet ki emaindaaa ane suspense...

u knw nenu pakka adhi geet anukuna aa accident lo hurt aindi geet ee...but NO...ahaaan...u proved me wrong 😃

woohooo! 😃

oh really? lol that's my fav couple story 😉

this story was actually meant like a "what if situation" memory loss track was going on when i had this concept in mind. i was thinking what if Maan had a child by then and had gotten into an accident. by the time i actually began writing i wanted to incorporate father daughter concept for father's day and it took me months to complete so it was on time for father's day 🤣