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Posted: 13 years ago
hiii muski di... 😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 how's the lil angel...πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› after a long wait finally we got ur updates nd dat too wid a bonus update...πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ nd not to miss the mahiii mahiii sajna ve sajna ve ...😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 hayee me fall again in luv wid maneet...πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† kash lyk this song we would hav d season2 of geet still miss their magic a lot...😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 chadoo g... as soon as we hav our puchki nd misti wid us who cares for it...πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ chaloo cmg to update nd sry di for commenting soo late... i had alredy read the parts... nd i was soo shocked wid them...😲 😲 😲 😲 😲 😲 i was hoping puchki to confess his feeling for her but it seems lyk ye puchki kaafi tym legi...πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† muski di kuch karo na plz... its more than 200 parts...(yepiiie we had a double centuary of DA)πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ ye puchki kabhi nahi sudhregi...😑 😑 😑 😑 😑 😑 😑 😑 😑 tumahri shopping ne meri credit card ke band baja di thi...🀒 🀒 🀒 🀒 🀒 🀒 🀒 🀒 tum pechlen teen din main meri saal bhar ki kamyaeen udda chuki ho..nd after dat when misti said entertainment tax.. u see.πŸ’” πŸ’” πŸ’” πŸ’” πŸ’” πŸ’” πŸ’” πŸ’” πŸ’” πŸ’” πŸ’” πŸ’” πŸ’” πŸ’”
i was soo heart broken i feel lyk sm1 pricked my heart wid thousand pins...😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 nd after dat their heart wrenching departure...😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭😭 😭 😭 puchki why can't u live wid her dammn ur job...😑 😑 😑 😑 😑 😑 😑 😑 😑 OMG yash uncle had a mini heart attack...😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭😭 😭 😭 see puchki its all due to u... loved the updates di...⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️⭐️ ⭐️ thanks for the beautiful nd awwsum update tk cr of urself nd baby...πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› loads of luv frm massi...😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 thanks 1nce again for the updates...πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘

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Posted: 13 years ago
Congrats for the cute and sweet little member coming in ur life
tk cr of ur self and the baby update after ur delivery becoz baby is more important
so tk good cr of ur and the baby
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Posted: 13 years ago
Waiting di...
take care f urself
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Posted: 13 years ago
omggg


waiting desperately for puchki ki class by mishti

tum itni rat ko waise kyu jagging

aunty tumko chilaing nahi?
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Posted: 13 years ago

Dhundlae aks

Part 202

For gods sake Geet speak up!!! he roared fearfully
Dev took the phone from her.. Maan dad had a mild heart attack
kaisen huwa yeh sab?
Abhi kuch pata nahi Maan.. drs r stilling checking him.

Daadi ma kanha hain he asked worriedly
Dev ' wo Nt ke saat ghar main hain
Maan ' I will try to come at the earliest he says.
After the call he speaks with his boss in India. After a long discussion he manages to book his ticket for the weekend.

Dr completed the check up with Yash & suggested him bed rest. There was nothing to worry.. it was just simply old age & work stress, nothing really serious.
Maan spoke to Geet after a while. He sounded so broken
Maan ' misti .. I want to speak to dad now
Geet ' he is fine puchki. Dr ne kaha hain nothing to worry. Wo office ka stress thoda jada tha.
Maan ' how can I not worry.. ??
Geet ' technically can't even term as a heart attack
aacha aap yash sir se khud hi baad karlo..
she said as she walked into the ICU
she smiled handing the phone to yash

Maan was really emotional, could barely say a word after hearing his dads voice. That moment he just wanted to be there next to him. He cursed every thing that failed him to do so.
Yash was calm trying to tell him he was fine. Nothing to worry.. infact he was planning to get back to office tomorrow. For which Geet glared at Yash
he made a cute cribbing face agar Geet mane tho
Maan sighed knowing his misti!! her being there was enough.

Next few days was hell for Maan. He just wanted to reach home & see his dad once. Though everything was fine & Geet spoke to him every now & then telling him how things were with yash but still the restlessness was still there. He managed to reach home on saturday. He spend the whole day next to yash.
Maan ' dad aap aur offica nahi jayenge
yash coolly sipped his coffee ' phir office ka kaam kaun sambhalega
Maan ' bro hain na dad. Wo sab sambhal lenge
yash ' Maan its KC!!! he can't manage every thing alone.
Maan ' dad u r not going to office any more bus
yash ' teehk hain tum office join karlo
Maan got up at once not able to say anything
yash ' kyun kya huwa?
Maan kept quiet. He could have argued but with given health condition it didn't seem right.

He felt torn yet again between his dream & his dad.
He dropped his head sadly. Yash was really hurt.
Latter Maan got miserably drunk & went to outhouse. Geet was taken a back to see him like this. He just hugged her. She could feel his heart clutched in pain. Cluster of emotions he couldn't explain. This painful truth.. his career seems to come between everything else he desires for!!! dammit he can't even be their for his dad when he needed him the most.

He dipped himself into her.. words just poured filled with pain not making sense. He spoke openning his heart in bits & pieces. Some she grasped some she couldn't. She knew he was disturbed ever since she came back & now dads health has taken its toll on him. He walked to the bed.. there was nothing she could say .. he just wanted to be with her... so did she. Not even a moment later he was deep into her.. but it was all far too painfully deep. He seemed to thrust into her deeper & deeper, nipping her skin from her neck to her chest, never stopping. She whimpered in pain & pleasure.
Tears rolled down her eyes seeing him in so much pain.. he continued to mumble words against her skin as he nipped them.. he didn't want to stop.. he held her closer.. as he continued to move in faster, the speed increased so much that the bed started to shake & creak, even the lights started to flicker like his pain within. She just clung on to him, exhausted in his passion, his roughness. It all seemed so different.. his this rough side!!!
It was all way too hard for her. She didn't know how to react. The roughness was too much never ending.. with no final thrust.. or buck. Her body shivered waiting for him to relax.. which seemed no where closer. Finally he groaned filling her with himself... she held him close with her shaking hands.. as he panted really hard. Her eyes welled up.. he kissed her catching for his breath
why r u so angry at me she asked helplessly
I .. I .. a.. am sorry he said between the breaths
I am not.. I can never be.. he kissed her bruised lips.
u didn't even talk to me once after I came from NYC
I was angry at myself he accepted regretfully
he cupped her face I don't know.. I am failing in everything. I wanted this dream job.. this everything
all this was I ever dreamt off!!!
but now ' I feel I don't have anything.. when I look into ur eyes.
. he sighs.. dads eyes I feel like a loser...he cribbed the whole night.. holding her close.

Next day before leaving yash again tried to ask Maan.
Maan was way too disturbed to reply sensibly. Especially the scene in the morning haunted him.. made him feel horrible. He was shocked to see mistimia all blue & purple soaked in his passion. Wat was he even thinking pouring out his frustration in that state of mind. Dammit he got drunk & behaved so rough with her. To his misery she behaved as if nothing happened, infact she blushed in his arms like always.

He refused to discuss anything on that matter now. His tone was enough to hurt yash. Which Geet didn't miss. She was not liking her puchki being so selfish.. not caring abt his family. Last night he seemed so worried & again he is being so insensitive, not expressing his inner feeling.
On their way to the airport there was this odd tension.. she finally broke the silence
aap aisen yash sir ko is halat main chodke kaisen
even before she could complete Maan lost him self more with his own state of mind ' kamse kam tum tho mujhe samjho
he screamed
she looked at him in utter shock, blankly for few secs.. & suddenly anger filled with pain
why is it always abt u?
For once can't u think abt others.
she looked away
main yash sir ki baat kar rahi hoon
he closed his eyes knowing he has really gone too far with his temper
he tried to make it up. She didn't give him a chance. She just dropped him at the airport & left from their, without saying anything.
Precap
Yash shocked with Maans temper.
-PREV PART 201 NEXT PART 203-
thanks for the lovely comments & likes
love
muskan
Edited by muskanp - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: aashluvsmaan

omggg


waiting desperately for puchki ki class by mishti

tum itni rat ko waise kyu jagging

aunty tumko chilaing nahi?

mummy coming tomorrow me really excited
not getting sleepπŸ₯±
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Posted: 13 years ago
superb update.
why does puchki just think about himself
hope mishtima will knock some sence in his brain.
take care di.
Edited by J.Rahman - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
hey muskaan di. how are you doing and how is baby
Edited by J.Rahman - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
omg omg omg omg ... muski on line... and mee third unexpectedly ...


wow ...

happy


.
Edited by maansee - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
hi muski ...

how come u r on line this time...


love u ...

how r u ...

how is little one inside...

sab teekh hai na...

how is our little one ...

enjoying your time ...
Edited by maansee - 13 years ago

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