Lust For Revenge - MG FF THREAD 1 - Page 58

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Posted: 12 years ago
MAAN IS SO MUCH IN LOVE WITH HER THAT HE CANT LET HER OUT OF HIS SIGHT

AND HE FINALLY KISSED HER
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Posted: 12 years ago
hey richa u r nt updtng 😭yaar WATING...😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
WAITING DEAR...
whn r u updating...???
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**LUST FOR REVANGE**

PART- 50


MAAN wore hs shirt and comb hs wet hairs bt hs eyes struck only on her acivities. He dressed up fully and went out of d room. Annie com inside.


Annie:gd mg bhabhi?


Geet:gd mg Annie.exam ki prepration ho gai?aaj waise b last hai,hai na?


Annie:ha ho gai.bt i m angry wid u.


Geet shoked:but y?i mean wat i hav done?


Annie(pretending):kal ap shoppng pe gaye and u 4got me.

Geet sit besided hr:aisa kabi ho skta hai?


Geet getup and bring one gift bag frm her wardrobe.


Annie:bhabhi i m only kidding.i dont meant that.


Geet:ha pr meri to 1 hi nanad hai na wo kuch kahe na kahe pr mujhe to yaad hai na.


Annie opnd d bag and saw a pink coloured designer suit. She was realy like d suit.


Annie:wow bhabhi it was so beautiful.


Geet:did u like it?


Annie:bahut.main ise parso Dadi ki b'day party me pehnugi.


Geet:parso dadi ka b'day hai?


Annie:ha or main soch rai hu 1 small party ghar pe hi kr lete hai.kaisa laga idea?


Geet:perfect.lekin maine to gift b nai liya abi tak.


Annie:to koi bat nai.b'day to parso hai na.


Geet:hmm.


Annie:lets go bhabhi.dad waits 4 us on b.fst.


Both come out. Aftr b.fast Geet reached 2 her car. She opens d door and sat on back seat. Driver drove d car. Geet was so much lost in her files. After 1hr she realized that she still running on road and d route was also not familiar.


Geet:alokji where u r moving the car? Hume to office pahunchna hai.


Driver:no mam aaj apko kahi or pahunchna hai.


Geet felt weird,coz voice is not of her driver:who r u and where is alokji?


Driver stop d car:mam he is on leave 2day.


Geet:who r u and y u drove my car?leave my car or i call my husband he will teach u better.


Driver:wo b mera kuch nai bigad skte?coz ap is waqt kafi dur aa chuki hai mere sath.


Geet tryng to open d car but all door r loked by him:thek hai main abi Maan ko bulati hu.


She made a call 2 hm and the tune of his phone start ringing. She get confused. Driver remove his cap and truned 2 her. She put her both palms on hr mouth.she shoked cmpletelynd hr eyes widend.


Geet:Maan ap drivr ki seat pe kya kr rae ho or hum kaha ja rae hai?


Maan:maan kon maan?main to alokji ki jagah pe aaya hu.or apka dusra swal ki hum kaha ja rahe hai to bta du aaj subah meri ekloti saas ne milne ki ichha jatai thi to hum wai ja rhe hai. So ab hum amritsar ja rahe hai.


Geet's heart jumping with both excitement of seeing her parents again aftr such a long time and secondly with Maan's strange but pleasured surprize.


Geet:Maan app ye..hme to office jana tha na?


Maan:ofice to roz jate hai socha aaj sasural ho aaye.


Geet:thank u.(her eyes turn wet due 2 happines)


Maan:o hello is galatfhami me mat rehna ye sab main tumhare liye kar raha hu. Main bahut selfish insan hu jo b krta hu apne liye krta hu.tum jo pura dinn mere gharwalo se apni aav bhagat krwati ho usi ka hissab brabar krne ja raha hu. Ab damaad hone ka kuchh fayda to mujhe b milna chahiye na. To maine socha kyu na aaj jake apni thodi khatirdari karwai jaye.


Geet have no words to said anything.she cant explain what she felt rite now.


Maan:meri car kharab thi isliye tumhari use ki.isi wajhse tume b sath le ja raha hu samjhi tum.ab chup chap aage aake baitho.i m not ur shauffer.


Geet smiled and cm on front seat. Maan again start driving.


Geet saw him and thot:main inhe sach me jaan nai paungi.pehle to meri har baat buri lagti thi.lekin ab kitna badal gaye hai.aaj mere bina kahe hi meri wish puri kar rahe hai wo b apna kaam chhodkar. Dev was rite,Maan was like coconut seems hard and tough frm outside but inside his heart is very soft. He cares 4 evry1 but never shows.


Maan luk at her and thot:Geet main to pathhar hi tha ye softness b tumhari wajha se aayi hai.It was a long journey and due to extreame hotness in weather and sitting continously in a same position Geet felt uneasyness in her body. She felt like vomit. Maan noticed her and park d car on the side of road.


Maan gt tensed:Geet what happend? R u ok?


Geet said nothng but ran outside. She stretched her arm and take d strength of a tree on the bank of the road and do vomit. Maan 2 cm out and rubbed her back gently. His heart sinked seeng her cnditon. Like Geet his legs was also shudering.


Maan:Geet r u ok na?


Geet saw his pain filled eyes:hmm.i m ok.wo is condi.me ye sab to hota hi rehta hai.


Maan:Geet 1 min(he went 2 his car and bring bottle of juice 4 her) Geet ye pee lo u felt better.


Geet saw him in amusement:Maan ye juice?Maan:ha wo subah maine rakha tha.tume or kuchh chahiye to wo b bta do.dadi se puchh k maine sb rakha hai.ab ise pio.hum thodi der yaha fresh air me ruk k firr chalenge.


Geet drank her juice and thot is dis is a reality or her sweet imagination...



SORRY MY SWEETIES FOR UPDATING LATE AND MAKE U WAIT:(BUT TRUST I DONT DO IT INTENSIONALLY...PLS ALWAYS KEEP YOUR TRUST AND SUPPORT WID ME:):)THANX YOU ALL OF YOU...
Edited by richa_kapoor - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
maan is so sweet
at last geet is understanding maan though love is a long way to go
loved maans behaviour
awesum update
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Posted: 12 years ago
Woww he finaliyy realized he luv her...n dont want her to leave him f so many days...
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Posted: 12 years ago
a very cute part
at last maan realized his feelings
continue sooon
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Posted: 12 years ago
loadz of luv n hugs for u richa..
it was a beautiful update...
luvd this dialogue.. "leave my car or i call my husband he will teach u better"

keep updating dear..
n thanks for pm...

n plz make quite long updt next time..n some maaneet moments.plzzz

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Posted: 12 years ago

awesome ff dear read it in one go, just loved it

ur an amazing writer dear

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