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Posted: 12 years ago
**LUST FOR REVANGE**

PART - 48


BOTH cm out of d shop.


Maan:tumari shppng ho gai?


Geet nodded yes:now we have 2 reach office.


Maan:ya rite bt frst i pay d bills.


Geet:wat bills?


Maan:the bill of dese dresses u shopped.


Geet:but i have paid 4 dem all.


Maan(shocked):what? How?


Geet showed hr credit card 2 him:papa ne ye isiliye to dia tha ki jab mujhe zarurat ho main ise use kr lu.

Maan:bt y u used dis?i mean i brought u here 4 shoppng,so its my responsibility to paid ur all bills.


Geet:so wats wrong if i paid?


Maan hold his head nd thot:uff ye aisi kyu hai?


Geet poked on hs arm:Maan wat happened?apka sar dukh raha hai?


Maan:ha ab jao or gadi me baitho main abi aata hu.


Geet:pr aap kaha ja rhe hai?yaha mall me konsi medi.milegi?


Maan:mil jayegi u go nd wait 4 me.


Geet wnt frm dere. Maan came aftr 15 mins.and drove d car out of parking.


Geet:apne medi.le li?


Maan:hmm.(she cnvienced nd nt ask anythng more) Geet lunch time to ho gaya hai to yai kuchh kha lete hai.kya khaogi?


Geet:nothng i m f9 nd dont need nythng.office hi chaliye.


Maan thot nd moved his car 2 anothr directon nd stop d car in front of golgappa stall. Geet surprized nd saw him amusmnt.


Maan:jao kha lo.


Geet:magar apko...


Maan cuts hr in btwen:i know tum or kuch khao na khao lekin inhe mana nai karogi.


Geet:main sach me jao?


Maan smiled nd nodded yes. Geet ran frm car hurridly nd explore her fav golgappas. Maan 2cm out nd saw hr. She looks vry funny,while eating coz d faces she made, tasting sour nd sweet taste of it. Maan enjoying seeing hr childish behaviour.


Maan thot:Adi ws rite she is so innocent.bilkul bachhi hai.kon khaega ki ye khud maa banne wali hai.


Maan cm near her. Geet 4gt all abot his anger and offerd him in hr excitemnt.her mouth was full of golgoppa nd she still talked 2 hm.


Geet:aap khaoge?


Maan:no.


Geet:lekin Adi bhaiya ne to kha liye the us dinn.


Maan suspeciously:Adi?(she nodded yes)no way.


Geet:ap Sasha se puchh lo.pehle wo mana kr rahe the,pr bad me to humse b zada kha lie the or fir unka pet kharab ho gaya tha.


Maan:Adi ne ye bakwas cheez khai or tabiyat kharab kr li.


Geet giggled:nai actully he wnts 2 show off in frnt of Pinky,dat he cn do anythng.to unme competiton shuru ho gaya.uske baad to 2ruke hi nai or firr dono ki tabiyat bigad gai.lekin 1 taste krne se kuchh nai hoga.


Maan scared hearing abot Adi,bt 4 hr happiness he tuk 1. As he eat it his eyes widened. His mouth burns as it was vry spicy 4 him.


Maan:ahhh hu hu...wat is dis Geet?kitni mirchi hai isme.


Geet scared seeing hs conditn:i m soo sorry sir,mujhe nai pta tha ap bilkul b theekha nai kha pate.(hiccups started 2 hm also)ab main kya karu?


Geet ran 2car nd brot water bottle fr hm:ye pani pee lijiye apko aram milega.She really felt bad 4 hm nd rubbed his bak gentlly 2 gv hm relief. He drank whole bottle.now he feels awsome nt 4 water but seeing concern and care 4 hm in hr eyes nd by d massage whch she gave 2 hm on hs bak wid hr soft hands.


Maan thot:wow is golgappe ne to kmal kr diya.i must eat 2 3 more.


He still act as he is nt feelng well.He pretent of coughing 2.Geet tnsd mor.



Geet:i m soo sorry Maan mujhe nai pta tha apki tabiyat itni bigad jayegi(hr eyes was just little far away 4m wetting)Maan chaliye hm abi doc k pas chalte hai.


Now he dnt wnt 2 made hr cry.


Maan:its ok Geet ab main thek hu.


Geet:u r not liyng na?


Maan:no i m ok realy

Geet still felt guilty.Maan paid nd both went 2 office. Remaning day pas normly.In midnight Maan is wrkng on hs laptop.he half laid on bed.Geet ws in washrum. Wen she cm out,she found Maan's cell is ringing conti.she sat on bed.


Geet:Maan apka call ap le kyu nai rahe hai?


Maan:coz i dont wnt 2 talk 2 her.


Geet luk at d screen.it was frm Ayesha.


Geet:Maan dis frm is Ayeshaji.


Maan:i know dats y i m avoiding dis.if u r so much intrested den pick up nd gossip wid hr.i dnt mind.


Geet:Maan pls koi zaruri bat b to ho skti hai.pls ans d cal.


Maan lukd hr wid hs intense eyes:Geet soch lo tumare kehne pe ye call le rha hu.agr Ayesha ne mujhse koi b demnd ki to wo tume puri krni pdegi.(she cnt get wat he meant exactly)bolo pura krogi to hi main ye call lunga.


Geet thot wat she demnd in mid nite so its all f9:ok. App lelo.wo jo kahengi main pura karungi.


Maan:sure.promise?


Geet:promise.ap ans kar lo.


Maan ans d call.Ayesha complaints y he avoid hr. Maan explain dat phone ws on silent.


Ayesha enquired:Maan r u tryng 2 avoid me?


Maan:actuly i m busy coz business is my frst priority and u know dat.


Ayesha cnvinced:ok clam down.u do ur work bt first gv me a gud nite kiss.


Maan smirkd.he knew dat she definately demnds 4 kiss. He slipped near Geet wid phone in hs hand. Geet ws busy in reading a book. Maan instantly kissed on Geet's cheek. To which'muuuahhh' sound send 2 hr. Geet's eyes widend wid shok.


Maan:gd nyt Ayesha.


Maan cuts d call nd Geet look at him wid fear nd shocked mixed expressions..
Edited by richa_kapoor - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Haiii...last wala kiss kitnaaa cute tha...i toh fultoo luv...And bechara maan never tried spicy golgappas and d reward he got-awesome.Loved d update(Arre i didnt realise dat i'm 1st one 2 cmnt. 1st time in my life,yippee)
Edited by sweetsampa39 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
cute update...
wah Maan ne kisse dedi Geet ko☺️
pls yaar tum dt aur pg no. lika karo when you update😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
wow awesooome upd.
loved it superb...fab...
cont.soon...
tfd pm...
t.c.
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome, nice part
loved it
maaneet moments r nice, lovely
loved it
ayesha ne phir call kya
huh demanding kiss from maan huh
but maan kissed geet
awww so cute
loved it
continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
part 48
nice part...
the kiss was so cute...
hope Geet doesnt get scared of this...
cont soon dear...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Beautiful FF.loved the concept
Maan's revenge slowly turned into love. 😳
Loved the all the parts awesome 👏
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Posted: 12 years ago
wow... a kiss.. hmm.. ayesha kbhi to kam ayi
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Posted: 12 years ago
suvh a nice update dear...
maan ko us lady ne bahut achha advice diya...self experience is the best one...
toh maan ne geet ko shopping ke liye legaya coz he is observing her so much...tabhi toh use ye bhi pata chala ke her clothes are becoming tight...
waiting for the next part eagerly...update soon...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Lovely and cute episode...haayee...👏

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