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Posted: 12 years ago

NOTE: FRIENDS IN THIS PART THERE WILL BE A LIFT SCENE, ACTUALLY I PLANNED IT IN EARLIER, UPDATE BUT ONE OF MY FRIEND HAS INCLUDED THE LIFT SCENE IN HER UPDATE IN HER EARLIER UPDATE SO I DELETED MY PART AT THAT TIME , NOW I INCLUDING THIS PART NOW ,

This part is necessary

IAM SORRY IF I HURT ANY ONE FEELINGS

SORRY




PART-39


Chup '''.chup bilkul chup ( my fav dialogue )

You eat calmly or I know how to make you eat

Geet calmly started to take her sandwich

Cribbing to her babji

SHE DID UNDERSTOOD WHY HE IS BEHAVING LIKE THIS

Why he is taking care of her, he believes me ,

He did not believed in that letters, ,

Why he doing like this , she want s to ask him

But she could not get that courage to ask him

What to ask him , if he tell something, can she bear that

If he does not believe in that letters, why he not taking her to his home

She is so lost in her thoughts

She did not hear that maan was calling her

Geet'.geet'.geet

Hmmm

Geet stop your daydreaming , I do not have full day for you

I have to go saying that he immediately was going towards his car

Geet quietly followed him and sat in the front seat

Both were quite thought out the journey

She wants to ask about dadima but how to ask him, if he get angry on this,does dadima knows that she is pregnant

But before, that they reached their destination

Maan' vo'.

Maan did not heard her murmuring

Seeing geet getting down, he quickly reversed the car and went away

geet saw the car going back

ravan '

he did no let me finish my words

at least I would have asked how dadima is

okay chado''

kal puchulungi

next day when geet went to the office, she did a mental note that whe will going to ask maan about dadima , she saw lift was about to close the door

she immeditaly rushed towards the lift to go inside before it going to close

she entered so fast that she tripped her legs and was about fall

at the same time she saw the protective hands around her stomach holding her from not falling

maan'..a slight whisper escaped from her mouth

maan made her to stand properly ,

vo sir'''..

she stopped suddenly seeing maan eyes fuming with anger

geet do you have any sense what you are doing'.

Do you think you are a pt usha running like this

Vo sir I want to enter into life before it going to close'

So I just walking fast'.

You are walking or running , it not looking like walking , you are running as if you you are on marathon

Vo' she could not complete her words'..seeing maan angry glance'.

She presses the LIFT button in order to avoid the topic'.suddenly lift light went away'.. lift did a jerk and suddenly stopped in th middle. Seeing this geet quietly sat in one corner of the lift

Geet''.geet' maan immediately switched on his mobile to locate the geeet,

Ha sir '.

Tum tehko ho'

Ha sir bilkul'..

With the slight light flashing from his mobile he saw geet on the coner of the lift sitting comfortably keeping her back rest

Geet 'you are not afraid of dark

No sir' why should i

Vasie 'bhi app idhar haito kisskekliya darna hai

Maan immediately presses the alarm in the lift and wa wating for someone to open the life

Sir' vo

Kya hai geet

Geet took some courage .. and asked maan

Sir vo dadima kaise hai

Kyo' why you are asking that question now'

You did not think about her when you left the house'.

Vo'

Geet I did not asked you leave the house, then why you left the house

Sir' I thought you believed those letters

Geet did I told you that I believed those nahi na'.

But you did not tell any thing, I thought you believed in those letter so

Then how could think about your self and leave the place '.

Geet could feel his anger in his voice



She was happy that maan did not believed in that letters

She thanked the stars for helping her in '

Achahua ki lift was stopped atleast I could talk to maan and cleared my doubts

She saw maan was standing keeping back to her

She quietly stood up and came near to him

Sorry maan' iam sorry .. that I left the house

Sorry'.

He suddenly turned back and held geet hands

Sorry'

Geet with your sorry ' it will not change'..

You know what happened after you left

Dadima got attack, by god grace, we could able save her

Dadima ' ab dadima kaise hai

There is no need of your concern geet

Geet felt shiver with his cold behavior

Tears are flowing from her almond eyes

It soon turned into hiccups,..

Maan heard geet crying, but did not care to look at her nor try to pacify her

But soon the hiccups turned into breathlessness

Her breathe became very short , she not able to breath now, her face was becoming very pale

Maan heard the hiccups and came near her and saw her position

He understood what happened

He immediately made her lay down and took the duppata which was covering. so that she may not feel suffocation because of no air

But ..her breath was becoming very short now

He immediately tried to press the alarm again

He heard the voices of security guard '

Sir we are are tying to open the lift , but it will take little time

Be fast

I want the lift to be open in 5 min

He came near geet , he saw her

She is not able breath..now because of suffocation he immediately tried took her sandels and try to rub her feet



pre cape: can you guess guys




friends i am going to update the next update in new thread... 😉
please give your comments and likes



Edited by rsusmita - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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yipeee me first

its actually first time

awsome update

diii


loved it

i am actually loving this dominance of maan

waiting for there sweet moments

Edited by suhaaana - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Kissie wissie???

liked the staight forward talk...😳
Edited by aashluvsmaan - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
still 5 min dear... coloring , and updating th pictures
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Posted: 12 years ago
Oyee...open new thread dear...

its already 148...

hum sapm karke khatam karte hai..tum new thread kholo🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago
jaldi bol...spam karu ke nahi😎
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Posted: 12 years ago
u alredy updated😔

hading change karo...its 30
Edited by aashluvsmaan - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: aashluvsmaan

u alredy updated😔


hading change karo...its 30


i will change it dear .. i am little bit confusion master please bear me
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: rsusmita


i will change it dear .. i am little bit confusion master please bear me

and it wud be better if u give pg no in heading too😃

makes it easier to read na..

like this "Forced Marraige..part39/pg 147 4/10"

if u give page no its alwas better😃
rsusmita thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: aashluvsmaan

and it wud be better if u give pg no in heading too😃


makes it easier to read na..

like this "Forced Marraige..part39/pg 147 4/10"

if u give page no its alwas better😃


from the next time on wards i will try to do like this
now tell me how is the update 😉

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