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madhavi

@aniramg

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Posted: 12 years ago

#411

Originally posted by: geetsrir.maan
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hi i am a silent reader of ur ff .i like ur story concept.but right now i am not able to read ur ff on my mobile beacause of 'member only'.it is humble request to u to please allow ur ffs for all readers so they can enjoy ur beautiful maaneet stories. please...

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maaneet0887

@maaneet0887

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#412

Originally posted by: aniramg

hi i am a silent reader of ur ff .i like ur story concept.but right now i am not able to read ur ff on my mobile beacause of 'member only'.it is humble request to u to please allow ur ffs for all readers so they can enjoy ur beautiful maaneet stories. please...

Ok dear but will take off till u read it but tell me when r u gonna read it becoz my co-writer has been told like this only and her works were copied so am fearing to give the access..do let me know when r u gonna read it..becoz after that once again am gonna lock it once again...😊

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Sonia KN

@Sonia.KN

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#413

Great update dear.Its really awesome

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Deepa

@spvd

Trailblazer

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#414

part 43
nice part………..
so the leap has happened………..
poor Geet……………
why did she leave before Maan came?
and that Simran is really so disgusting………..
what did she tell about Geet to the family and made them hate her?
and Prachi's dad is also so low……………
cheap man………………….
cont soon dear…………………..

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Tyro

@Tyro

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#415

seems like geet has changed a lot...

waiting for maan to meet her...

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Ash1991

@Ash1991

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#416

amazing update...

waiting fr maneet to meet...

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soni4eva

@soni4eva

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#417

Wondaful update urghh h8 simran
Plzz cont soon x

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kiran_rati

@kiran_rati

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#418

update and pm me too

cont soon

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maaneet0887

@maaneet0887

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#419

TEASER

Geet stood scared clutching the one year old son of Ridhima called Arka seeing the bunch of men holding the long clubs.One of the men came forward to beat Geet's head with the club and Geet closed her eyes squeezing the baby inside her embrace and it was the fraction of second that the man raised his club to beat her on her head...but was stopped by someone and Geet heard that someone has been kicked.

Geet immediately opened her one almond eyes to see who was it when she was cocooned inside the strong arms which was so warm that she felt it was Maan.Geet's heart rejoiced feeling the warmth while she was released immediately and she heard someone beating the men with closed eyes and Geet dint wanted to open her eyes as she dont wanted the tight hug to be from Maan.Geet had consoled herself that Maan have to be with Simran but her heart craved for that hug once again.

So many thought swooped inside her mind..and some were sad thought while some were happy thoughts and she was so eager to see the face of the man who hugged her.When Geet opened her almond eyes then she saw that someone was getting rid of those bunches of men from Geet.Geet came forward stretching her arm and kept it on the man's shoulder who had saved her from those men.When Geet kept her palm on his shoulder then he turned instantly and Geet's eyes widened with shock and disappointment and tears poured down from those almond eyes due to disappointment...

Well how was the teaser...😉Do let me know and will update it tomorrow or day after tomorrow as am busy searching for my job and u have to bare me like this only till i get the job..uske baad u will surely get regular updates...😊

Edited by geetsrir.maan - 12 years ago