MY First SS on MG!!! Ajnabi Jo apne he thi

Prologue

Geet Handa
22years old
College student in business in Delhi

Maan Singh khurana
28years old
Business tycoon
Moved to Delhi frm London

Savitri khurana
Maan's grand mother(didima) & mom to maan & his brother Dev

Mrs. & Mr.khurana are dead

Mr.handa business man in Delhi

Prem Handa
Geet's brother
Married to Heer (now pregnant)

Mrs. Handa(Rano) & mrs. Khurana( priya) were best friends since their childhood. None the less like sisters. Priya got married first & Ranowould half the time hangout wit priya's in-laws. Rano was loved by everybody. Later in the years after Maan was born the Khurana moved to London & Rano got busy in her life. Few years later she got the news of priya's dead after her second son( Dev) birth. Both maan & Dev were brought up by their dadima
And their father was busy in his business. When maan was 20 his dad pass away too & at that young age he had to take over the khurana business. Since his childhood he never received love from any of his family as they were all busy, & cause of that he hates the word "LOVE". Even though he loves his brother and dadima but that's something else for him. In 8 years his only aim was to make his business touch skies which he did and today he was the richest n the top youngest business man. Now The khurana's were moving back to India due to dadima's health and for dev's marriage. Dadima and dev went before maan to make arrangements for the wedding and maan was caught up wit all the work he had to do before transferring the whole business to Delhi. Maan promised his dadima to be Delhi on the wedding day. As he promised he was there. He was only there for his brother n his dadima & was not at all interested in all these rituals just like the girl who was sitting on the other side of the hall. As she lifted her head,she was caught by maan's eye. Who was this ajnabi that caught Maan Singh Khurana's attention??

Hope u all like my First Os...
Pls I want to knw if I should continue or not...

And I need suggestion for the title too I was thinking mayb ajnabi Jo apne he thi? Reply if u like it.!!!!!

seems intersting continue soon...😊

nice start

so who was she
will you continue

nice concept.
do pm me when u update.

Thanks for the likes & comments everyone.
If u all like this part then I might turn it into a short story.

Part one

At Dev's wedding, maan was standing at the end of a hall checking his mail on the mobile. He was really tired and was getting irritated by all the girls who were drooling over him. He looked up frm his phone to find Didima to tell her that he was leaving. As he was looking around his eyes caught a girl at the other side of the hall. She was siting alone wit slightly her head facing down, he thought mayb she on her phone too. Rite then she lifted her head, and stood up. He was about to see her but somebody came in the way & he could only see her frm the side. He was mesmerized by her beauty, her body, her look. He thought she looked amazing in light pink net sari she was wearing. He wondered if this girl looked this amazing from the side, how would she look frm the front?? He looked back up frm his thoughts & she was gone. He looked around the whole hall to find her, but couldn't see her any where. He started walking to the other side of the hall when dadima came in the way.She stated scolding him for not being their wit his brother at the wedding rituals & for not attending the guest. He doesn't respond, he was still lost in the ajnabi. Seeing him not respond dadima guess he might b tired and asks him to go home and rest and she leaves. Maan was still lost in his thoughts, he couldn't believe that he was thinking abt a ajnabi girl. As he was walking out to his car he see her again sitting in the car closing the window. His eyes met her brown eyes which spoke volumes. The window closed and went away, but maan was still standing there wondering who this Ajnabi girl is that made maan go crazy??

Hope u all like it. :)

wow.. nice start yaar.. soo the ajnabi girl is geet handa.. hmmm interesting.. cont soon..

Thanks for all the likes & comments!!

Part 2:

Maan was still standing there wondering who this Ajnabi girl is that made him go crazy?? He went to mansion, as he entered he saw the whole mansion decorated wit lots of light. He remembered after the wedding is over all the guests would b in the mansion & would be up the whole nite playing all their stupid games wit dev & naintara. So he decided to move to the outhouse. He calls nakul to take all his stuff to the outhouse & tells him to let dadima know that he has moved into outhouse as he hates the crowd, lights, noises that will b in the mansion. He took all his important file and went to do some work. He went right away to change n freshen up. Came out, called a servant to get him some coffee. He worked for few hours and could hear all the noises frm the mansion. He was really tried so while checking mail on his phone he walked to his room. When he was about to sleep he saw those deep brown eyes and he remembered her again. Who was she was his question?? & fell asleep in her thoughts.

Next morning he got up by a call frm the mansion. It was dadima calling him to have breakfast wit her. He got ready and went to have breakfast. He ate as fast as he could so he leave for office n miss the function. As he was leaving he crashed into a lady who was coming in, & his mobile fell on the floor. He got very angry, & bend down to pick the mobile n so did the lady. They got up, he looked at her wit angry eyes & suddenly his expression changed to being surprised. He bend down to touch her feet & she held him and gave a hug wit her eyes moist. He asked her " how r u massi?"
She said " still same young n beautiful as u left me" they break apart wit her laughing at her statement & maan smiling.

That lady was Rano his maasi, his best friend. A lady who he respected a lot and loved. He shared a different relationship which nobody knew abt, even dadima didn't knw. When his mom passed away dadima was busy wit the new baby Dev n his father in depression kept himself busy in business, it was Rano who was wit Maan even though she wasn't there but she talked to him everyday n as much long as he wanted. Sometime when he was sad she would talk to him for even 10 or more hours straight without caring for her family. He had shared everything wit. When he was 18 he wanted to move to India jst to b wit her but she stopes him saying now he has to care for the family n that's wat he did. After his dad's death he was totally broke but she gave him strength. She send her son Prem as a business man but he was actually there to help maan.
Maan knew nothing abt it until when Prem was going back to India and when maan thanked him; prem said" thank mom ur maasi for this."
Maan was touch witout her being she help him and gave him another good frnd Prem and the respect for her in his eyes grew more.

Before leaving maan asked abt prem & Rano told him that he is busy wit his wife Heer as she is 9 months pregnant and was due in 1-2 weeks. She asked him if he have found a girl for him yet? He was again lost in that ajnabi. He shook his head telling her to enjoy, walked out. She yelled back telling him to come to her house and he jst said hmm.

Precap:
Maan comes to know who the ajnabi is...



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