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Posted: 12 years ago

Thank u so much for liking the previous update and commenting. Here is the next part...Enjoy!!!

-Unforgettable Memories Part 37-

Meanwhile Maan goes to the gym to do Thi-Chi and during his thi-chi session the only word was lingering in his ears were Sameera words when she had said "Dad I will abort this baby, I don't want to keep it" he punches in the air as her voice echoed in ear, "I will abort this baby" he kick his legs in the air, "I don't want this baby" Maan screams as he jump up and breaks the ice into two pieces, "Khushi meri hai sirf meri use mujh se koi nahi chein sakta, koi bhi nahi" saying that he breaks another ice brick, "Khushi doesn't need anyone else except me, nor I need another women in my life" saying that he moves and breaks the wood, this time he cuts his hand, "Khushi ke liye main hi kafi hoon use nahi Ma ki zarorat hai, aur nahi mujhe koi humsafar ki" with that saying he punch on another ice, he screams in anger and pain as the cut burn with the cold water, but that didn't affect him as much Sameera word did, in anger he didn't knew what he was doing he lit fires on either side of stick and plays with it. after a while of his workout when he felt little calmer he went back to his room and changed then he went in Khushi room and stood at the door admiring her as she slept peacefully, she looked just like an angel, yet the fear was still evident on her face, fear of Geet leaving her. He went and sat next to her creasing her hair. Khushi turn facing him and cuddle in close to him, Maan slips in next to her and holds her close to him, the thought of not having her in his life shook him from inside and out and tears rolled down his eyes and soon he dose of to sleep holding Khushi close to him____
Geet was in her room still thinking about Maan word, sleep never came to her it was like someone almost took her life out of her, just the thought of not having Khushi made her shiver... Geet lay cuddle on her bed holding Khushi pic, after a while she heard the sound of her door being open and as she looked up to see who it was, her heart ached in pain seeing Khushi standing there with puffy swollen red eyes. Geet kept the pic away and went and took Khushi in her arm and brought her to the bed, she made her lay and slipped next to her. "Mama no go, Khushi want Mama" Khushi said hugging her tightly as once again tears rolled down her eyes wetting Geet clothes, Geet just kissed her forehead and then putted her back to sleep.

Meanwhile Maan was getting restless as he no longer felt Khushi warmth. He felt her fading away from him, he tried holding her hand but it only slipped out of his hand each time he tried and he was left alone in darkness, and then she finally slither from him falling deep into dimness where he couldn't fine her, she was now here to be seen as he rummage around for her like a mad person but still she was nowhere to be seen, he shouted for her hopping hearing her Dada voice she wound come out from anywhere and like always she would come and will hide herself in his arm, but she never did and, "Khushiii" Maan said as he woke up from his dream, he looked at his side and when he didn't find Khushi he started sweating badly and he ran out looking for Khushi in Geet room knowing she will be only found there. He finally took a sigh relief seeing his life cuddle up to Geet sleeping now peacefully, feeling the person warmth she was carving, now how was he to make her understand that Geet is not her mother, then how could she stay with them forever, for the first time he felt so helpless seeing his Jaan crying for her mother, for the first time he was regretting to bring this little angel in this world without a mother. Feeling helplessly he walked away from there to his room, where his thought went back to Sameera, who came in his life as a friend but left being the mother of his child, who never wanted nor cared for the little life that breathed in her womb.

Maan (thinking) Past:

Just like other night, it was another night where Maan had to attend another business Party, luckily this time Dev and NT was with him, so he could just come back after making his presence in the party. but guess that was not what was planned for him by Baba Ji. That night India's one of the most rising model was also present their too. and to his luck she was the daughter of the client he just sign the contract with.
Dev- bro looks like no chance for u to sneak out of this party today.
"why is that so" NT asked and Dev points at the model that was coming toward them
NT- OMG she is Sameera Bajaj, what is she doing here
Maan- daughter of MR.Vishav Bajab
NT- Veer ji kyun mazak kar rahe ho, kahan ye aur kaha uska bap bilkul chuwa lagta hai, saying this Dev and NT starts laughing.
Maan gives both of them a glare, which was enough to shut them up, then Maan was about to move from their but before he could Mr. Vishav and Sameera came to them
MR.Bajaj- Hello Mr. Khurana
Maan- Hello and shook hand with him
Mr.Bajab- Meet my daughter Sameera
Sameera- Heloo MR. Khurana and extended her hand toward him
Maan- Hi and shook hand with her. Dev and NT stood their controlling their laugh seeing Maan face. Maan looks at them giving a look of ur gone and then says to Sameera "Meet my brother Dev and his wife NT"
Sameera- Hi, what are you guys doing here, I...I mean no drinks no dance.
Maan- actually we were about to lea
Sameear- leave, Mr. Khurana abhi tu party start bhi nahi huwi aur aap jane ki baat kar rahe hai,
To add a little specie and after a long time Dev got chance to bug his bro so he also says "haan bahi abhi tu party start bhi nahi huwi aur aap use end karne ki baat kar rahe hain, let's go and have some fun" Maan gave him a glare and looked at NT to shut him up before he kills him with his bare hand but NT just looked away giving a look of like she doesn't know what is going on.
Sameera- See Mr. Khurana Mr. Dev is also agreeing with me. saying this she holds Maan hand and take him to the bar.
NT- Dev you're gone today,
Dev- no i am not
NT- yes you are, ek bar ghar chalo phir deakh na Veer ji tumhara kya karte hai" saying this she also leave to the bar Dev follows her saying "Bolna na wo kuch nahi karenge"
NT order a soft drinks for both of them and as they drank their soft drink they looked at Maan, who was giving them both a killing look, NT gulped and said "aaj tu paka band bajne wali hai" then the song started and they all went on the dance floor, Sameera forced Maan to dance with her, he couldn't say no as all the cameras were on them so he just went along with her to dance. as the party came to an end they all bid bye to each other and left, soon as Maan dev and NT sat in the car Dev started whistling saying "wah bahi kya dance kari hai aap ne, aap tu chaye gay ho aap...muah...muah" Maan gives him a glare but that didn't stopped Dev from teasing him...as Dev continued to tease him he just kept quite knowing his brother they will never leave the chance to tease him when they rarely gets it. And that was the start of Maan and Sameera friendship.

Maan and Sameera were now mostly seen together often in parties, they were always on the magazine front pages, and with time they both became a good friend.

Precap: more on Sameera

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Edited by Mariam94 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
nice update
maan is in so much pain..
he cant even think in dreams somthing happening to khushi
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Posted: 12 years ago
Note:
Hey guys I was thinking to work on one story at a time as it will be easier for me to write and focus on one story and give u guys quick updates, So I was thinking to put Unforgettable Memories on a hold for now and work on writing the update for DHDAJS, plus I have the middle parts of how Maaneet Geet married I just have to write 4-5 update on the family holiday and after its maaneet wedding. SO if u all agree then I would like to concentrate on one story at a time as with me not taking stress issue I am having hard time going back and forth in writing both the stories.
Plz tell me what u all like me to do, focus on one sotry and then the other or wirte both and give the updates when I can, which will be late like its been.
Plz do reply to this Note.
Mariam
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Posted: 12 years ago
lovely update
i hope geet stys for khusi 😭
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Mariam94

Note:
Hey guys I was thinking to work on one story at a time as it will be easier for me to write and focus on one story and give u guys quick updates, So I was thinking to put Unforgettable Memories on a hold for now and work on writing the update for DHDAJS, plus I have the middle parts of how Maaneet Geet married I just have to write 4-5 update on the family holiday and after its maaneet wedding. SO if u all agree then I would like to concentrate on one story at a time as with me not taking stress issue I am having hard time going back and forth in writing both the stories.
Plz tell me what u all like me to do, focus on one sotry and then the other or wirte both and give the updates when I can, which will be late like its been.
Plz do reply to this Note.
Mariam

mariam
u r a wonderful writer .i like to read um and dhdajs but its sad to see that u r not updating them regularly .hope u will decide what is good for ur writings .i want both together plz...
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Posted: 12 years ago
please dont put this ff on hold
this is my most favorite dear
everyday i check this ff for updates
plz try to update regularly this ff
missing this
nice update
thanx for the pm dear
cont soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
both r my fav... so i want both of them... loved da update. hope geet stays for kushi
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Posted: 12 years ago
Lovely part dear
Maan feeling insecure about khushi
Hope geet could do something for khushi's happyness
Now his past is going to reveal
Cont soon
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Mariam94

Note:
Hey guys I was thinking to work on one story at a time as it will be easier for me to write and focus on one story and give u guys quick updates, So I was thinking to put Unforgettable Memories on a hold for now and work on writing the update for DHDAJS, plus I have the middle parts of how Maaneet Geet married I just have to write 4-5 update on the family holiday and after its maaneet wedding. SO if u all agree then I would like to concentrate on one story at a time as with me not taking stress issue I am having hard time going back and forth in writing both the stories.
Plz tell me what u all like me to do, focus on one sotry and then the other or wirte both and give the updates when I can, which will be late like its been.
Plz do reply to this Note.
Mariam

I am ok with it
Take care of your health
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome, nice part
pls continue soon

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