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Posted: 13 years ago
#71
interesting FF
update soon .. i always love this devil Maan singh Khurana & Angel Geet
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Posted: 13 years ago
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when is the next update waiting
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Posted: 13 years ago
#73
i always love Devil Maan.. but this Maan is doing so mistake by mistake
wht to do.. i dont; knw.. but i always wish Maan & Geet together.. but seeing this person
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Posted: 13 years ago
#74
Wow relIi nyc concept luvd it
Plzz cont soon x
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Posted: 13 years ago
#75
awesome parts dear:)

just read all in one go...

superb:)

GOD!!! maan is worst than monsters...so disgusting...🤬
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Posted: 13 years ago
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😃hey dears, thank you so so much for your support, here is the next part hope u will like it..😃







(credit goes to unknown uploader)





Part-6

maan came out and saw geets lifeless body, he came near her and heard "i hate you, i hate you devil, today you will loose what you desired, today you will loose me, devil will fail, i think this will be a treat to my soul, i will away from your clutch, bye maan". and geet closed her eyes, maan panicked. he said " no geet devil doesn't loose, you will always be here with me, in this hell, i will not let anyone touch you, not even death, you are my, only me." he picked her up and ran to the car. he made her lie down at the back and started driving at the full speed, breaking all the singal, caring a dam about anyone. they reached hospital and took her to the doctor. doctor came running because they knowed maan's warth. they started checking geet. they took her to the ICU. the operation started. maan sat in front of ICU, he was hell angry and flustrated. half an passed, when a nurse came running to him.. she nervously spoke " sir ..sir..voh". Maan angrily spoke " what?". she was scared to death, and said " sir we need blood, o+ve ". maan was blank. he immediately called his worker and said to arrange blood within 5 min or they will be dismissed. they ran for their life. finally geet's mother came to give blood. she cried seeing her daughter state. she gave blood and came out and saw maan. and ran to him and slap him. and said " you bloody devil, you killed my daughter, the girl who used to smile and make other smile, is now struggling for her life, i hate you. i wish that you all go through same pain and hell like geet"

maan voliently hold rano's holder and said " she is my possesion, i can do what ever i want.. speak less. the more you will speak, the more pain your children will get, take her away". rano left. maan was getting restless. he thought " why i am getting restless, i agree she is my lust, but today i feel some other emotion in me..what is it?. no maan what are you thinking, maan you are a devil and devil dont have emotion, and top of all i will not let geet win". he saw doctor coming out. and asked " is she okk?". doctor said " sir she is fighting for her life, she lost lot of blood, though we have gave her blood, but it seems she is not accepting it, if this remains the same then may be she slips in comma". maan angrily said " do anything, i want her alright in 24 hours or count your day and your familys day". and left after saying it..

he went to car and started driving back and said " no geet i will not let you win, you have to suffer with me, do you understand you understand". and went to the hill and started screaming..
"devil cant loose geet".he started to remember when he met her for the first time, she looked adorable.

flashback

maan was driving back from a bussiness meeting, when suddenly his car broke down, driver started to shiver, as he heard maan screaming. but maan stopped as her heard a magical laughter..and started reaching the source. he saw a girl, laughing and talking with a old man and enjoying. he saw her face and was blown off. she was beautiful, her laughter had magic, her eyes were deep. he heard her laughter again.



that time maan decided that she will be his, only his. he wore his goggles and went away.
geet was unknow to the danger which was coming to her and was enjoying her life.

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Edited by ishanidhi08 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#77
Loved the part a lot...
He has no rt to feel anything 4 geet..
He dont deserve geet..if she cums back to life then he s gng to torture her again..
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Posted: 13 years ago
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nyc update. ..

maan don't deserve anyone in his life
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Posted: 13 years ago
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THANX FOR PM AWESOME UPDATE LOVED IT
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Posted: 13 years ago
#80
oh..no Geet is fighting for her life..
Maan has feeling different emotions twds Geet.. awesome.. hope everything will be fine.. to make Maan calm only in hands of Geet..
update soon

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