SS-My Devil-MG(NOTE- pg 101) - Page 6

Created

Last reply

Replies

484

Views

81.5k

Users

84

Likes

2.5k

Frequent Posters

angelwords thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 13 years ago
#51
Part-5
next day
geet heard a rumour that his brother is not wel and maan was not giving him food
she was very scared and fear took her.she forgot that she took oath not to bend infornt of this devil,for now the only thing that mattered his brother.after all a sister can best understand her brother and sister pain..
she marched toward maans door and knocked
she heard
maan-come in
she open the door and saw him lost in file.
he shouted
maan-who the hel is there? speak i dont time
Edited by ishanidhi08 - 13 years ago
angelwords thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 13 years ago
#52
Continued-
geet was able to speak up
maan angrily looked toward the door and found geet and smiled
maan-i think,today is best day of life,geet handa knocked on my door
and moved toward her and hugged her..
while she was feeling digusted..she was going to push him,when she saw pale face of brother.she stoped herself..
maan came of the hug..
geet-mr khurana u have problem with me,than why are you touturing my brother..
maan smriked
maan-his mistake is tht he is my lust's brother and...
Edited by ishanidhi08 - 13 years ago
angelwords thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 13 years ago
#53
Continued-
maan- and any mistake by you,wil be punishment to him and your parents.
geet felt digusted at his word and tear came out..
geet-leave leave them..plz i beg u plz
and went to his feet..
a strong stone also melt when he feel that his love one are in pain..like geet..she was broken.she has none another way than this..
maan-geet i wil padon your brother,if you wil dance for me,as i am getting bored..
she nodded
there was knock on door again
maan-oh pari you are here finaly
and moves..
Edited by ishanidhi08 - 13 years ago
angelwords thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 13 years ago
#54
Continued-
pari-hey maan
and maan came close to her and kissed her..geet felt digusted by the sight..
she was going to leave.when she heard.
maan-geet be ready at night.i wil be waiting for ur dance.now please excuse me and pari..we have important work to do
and geet left while closing the door..
she felt digusted of her own self..
she just wanted to die..
1 hrs passed
geet flustration kept on increasing..she cant take more..
so she took a wine bottle and broke it in the floor..
Edited by ishanidhi08 - 13 years ago
angelwords thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 13 years ago
#55
Continued-
the glas were shattered al over and geet started dancing over it..it seem she was getting some type of relief.rather than pain..she danced and danced..the blood was coming out of her leg..she cared dam about it..
she danced her harshly and finaly stopped when she heard the scream
sam-geeettt
and her eye closed and her body touched the floor
maan also came hearing scream
...
thank you ur lovely
do comment
and tel me abt this one?
Edited by ishanidhi08 - 13 years ago
-BlushaLicious- thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail Commentator Level 2 Thumbnail
Posted: 13 years ago
#56
Awesome Parts !!

OMG Maan Is Sooo Disgusting !! 🤬 !!

Feel Like Slapping Him !! 😡 !!

Poor Geet :(

Gudiyalovesguru thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail Networker 3 Thumbnail
Posted: 13 years ago
#57
nice ff yaar...
i luvd it...
try to give longer parts...
namita25 thumbnail
17th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 13 years ago
#58
arghhh I wanna strangle Maan...
awesomepooja thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail Networker 3 Thumbnail
Posted: 13 years ago
#59
Maan is so cruel...
Poor geet...
monika1992 thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 13 years ago
#60
Maan is so cruel...
Poor geet...

Related Topics

Geet - Hui Sabse Parayee Thumbnail

Posted by: Queen0fDarkness

2 years ago

The Devil in the Dark Thread 2||Chapter 70 pg 24 Updated 26/01

As mentioned in the notes in the other FF threads that I had created the other ID at a time when I wanted to be anonymous and avoid raising...

Expand ▼
Geet - Hui Sabse Parayee Thumbnail

Posted by: Vaidhumom

4 years ago

💗MG SS O RE PIYA #3 - Important note on page 19 dated 26th Jan 2025

WORK IN PROGRESS... . REQUEST YOU TO LIKE AND COMMENT ONCE I ANNOUNCE THIS THREAD IS READY I AM SO GLAD TO REACH TO THIS LEVEL. I CANT EXPRESS...

Expand ▼
Geet - Hui Sabse Parayee Thumbnail

Posted by: Queen0fDarkness

2 years ago

Bound by Honour| Note page 50 Bound by Honour| Note page 50

Prologue “Where are you, Sameera?” I yelled unable to hold myself back. “I’m not coming, Maan”. “It is our wedding day. You know what my...

Expand ▼
Geet - Hui Sabse Parayee Thumbnail

Posted by: priya_21

3 years ago

MG#4 khudrat ka khel- completed/note- pg 36- 14 july25

Concept this is story of simple girl, she want to became a teacher, but her darji beeji fix her marriage in between of studies... . . Destiny...

Expand ▼
Geet - Hui Sabse Parayee Thumbnail

Posted by: tellyme

3 years ago

tellyme's MG World of Dreamzzzz - New Note Pg 83 Jun 29

Hi Buddies, Here is my all FF work compiled. Latest on Top My Forum - Anu's World of Fictions In Progress...

Expand ▼
Top

Stay Connected with IndiaForums!

Be the first to know about the latest news, updates, and exclusive content.

Add to Home Screen!

Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".