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PART-16

i woke up with new determination, tomorrow i saw a human not a devil and now i am not scared to face him...

i went and freshen up, with nurse came with medicines really don't want to eat, but then i thought it will me only so i ate it..i was wondering why maan/devil is like this??

only god knows, i was really surprised that he didn't tag along with these nurses as i know he didn't anyone..

but i thought why should i care, i am getting relief from the devil...

i came out of the room, i reached the main gate but i was stopped my stupid guards, i know its that devil order..

i went back to devil's den, truly saying place was real beauty, who thought that it belong to that devil, one of the finest architecture...

my thought drifted, i wanted to talk to papa and mama, i saw landline phone and quickly ran towards it..i picked the phone and started dialing when i heard

"enter the security code.."

"heck.." i said.

no wonder he say that in his house everything happen as per his wish, even the phone is following his order...

i was really hungry, i moved towards the kitchen, when i heard strange murmuring , like someone was singing the song..

"may be some one is really happy like me, because devil is not there.."

i reached the place and saw a girl preparing food..

i reached her and put my hand on shoulder...she turned back to see me, she was scared first, i know she thought that devil was here, but when she saw , she was relieved...

"why are you here?? you should rest, its not good for your health.."

i had so many emotions like happiness, it seems at least someone is human here, but then i was scared, how come one be so caring in this devil den, then i thought she must also be a devil's prey

"ap?"

i said

"i am sameera, sameera maan singh khurana..."


i was totally shocked, devil was married and then also behind me..yuck... was the feeling that time...i saw her seeing me like she was understanding what i am thinking..

"i really pitty you mrs khurana, you should leave him, he is not for you..he is devil...and you.."

"sometimes you don't have choice.."

i wondered what must happen with her, but then i thought of devil, he is worse of devil..chi..after being married he is behind me and what to say...

i look towards her with sympathy..

(NOTE ON PG 89(V IMP) DO CHECK)

...

"mr khurana are you alright"

maan opened his eyes and saw his surrounding ...

"what the hell i am doing here?? who brought me here..."

doctor was going to speak when they heard

"i brought you here.."

maan saw the person...

"what are you doing here, i told you..then also you came.."

"maan"

"why you brought me here, i want my discharge paper.."

"sir you are very weak, you were critical.."

"go hell with critical ,want want my discharge paper.."

"sir but..."

"maan.."

"don't you understand...i am not that weak like you all, i am devil..and devil never feel pain...so move and i want my discharge paper.."

doctor went away with fear...

"what are you doing here?? i am sending you back, i am arranging for your flight.."

"maan listen.."

"apko ussko akela kyun chodha..i hate you for this..."

and went away..

...

next- who is the person??

whom was maan talking to?

geet burst on maan..

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finally geet n sameera face to face...
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