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Madhuri

@Madhuri53

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Posted: 13 years ago

#81

BTW congrats for the new thread

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mandymore

@mandymore

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Posted: 13 years ago

#82

Maybe maan singng dis song...

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gururockss

@gururockss

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Posted: 13 years ago

#83

according to me maan will sing this song

as seeing geet in that condition he was also out of breath and was almost dead

and now he know tht geet and the baby oops babies r fine

so he will sing this song out of his joy

as he is happy and relieved

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Madhuri

@Madhuri53

Stunner

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Posted: 13 years ago

#84

Song is awesome

I cant say wh is singing these lines

I still have to read all FF and I started just y'day

Still waiting for the udate

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anyaa

@16anyaa.gurti

Rocker

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Posted: 13 years ago

#85

Haaye!!!!! Lovely Lovely teaser... The song is alws very senti, wud love if maan sings it for his babies n mishty.😳

-LUV Anyaa😳

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maaneet0887

@maaneet0887

Dazzler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#86

am not gonna think it dear or else won't get any sleep tonight and will be unwell becoz of not getting sleep...but am gonna give u this luk now😡

me shouting BEECH RAASTE PE CHOD KAR PAHELI MEIN DAAL KAR TUM MONDAY KO DENA CHAAHTHI HO UPDATE ME KATTI...WIL NOT TALK TO U😡

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Eza_analyst

@Eza_analyst

Voyager

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Posted: 13 years ago

#87

Does maan singing this song ohhh yeah maan its only singing this song heheheh

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neha gupta

@neha5058

Dazzler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#88

hey dear,...
i am new reader of this ff even ur work...
i have read this one from your blog in one go...
it was fab..twisty deewangi...
really you gave so many twists in this ff...
geet became pregnant,
maan knew everything about geet
mohinder is alive...
maan knew about that ycuk creature...
maan has his twin brother
maan has his parents
maan has his baby sis and that too meera
rimi was all scared from geet...
dadi knew everything...
rimi is 3rd fail...lol...
geet became clever like a tigress...
all are fab dear... loving this twisty deewangi but dear one thing is striking my mind... wants to shar with you... i just felt while reading this one...
i won't compare t with muskan's deewangi but as you have continued it from mid of deewangi so just felt to ask ...
maan was a reserved person...so conservative,,,,,man with less words...he took so much time to accept geet in his life but here he accept his bro, his parents, his baby sis in a fraction of second..., according to me, he should take little bit time to adjusting himself in these new found relations... maan never accept anything so easily and here he accept so easily...

another one thing... don't think like i am complaining... i am just giving my POV about this ff... you are fab writer... you have carried this ff very well after that night when geet strip herself and submit herself in maan's arms...

according to me, you are lacking the main flavor of deewangi, their deewangi, the deewangi they had for each other...like their love, their passion, everything they felt for each other, like it lost somewhere...please add that deewangi, that flavor here... it is missing here... do something...
i thing their deewangi lost in twists...

according to me this ff became only twisty.. deewangi has been lost... please please... deewangi flavor add karo...

don't feel bad if i hurt you...then sorry... just wanted to tell you these things...