MG FF-Twisty Deewangi THD 3 THREAD 4 LINK Pg 141 - Page 10

Originally posted by: neha5058

hey dear,...
i am new reader of this ff even ur work...
i have read this one from your blog in one go...
it was fab..twisty deewangi...
really you gave so many twists in this ff...
geet became pregnant,
maan knew everything about geet
mohinder is alive...
maan knew about that ycuk creature...
maan has his twin brother
maan has his parents
maan has his baby sis and that too meera
rimi was all scared from geet...
dadi knew everything...
rimi is 3rd fail...lol...
geet became clever like a tigress...
all are fab dear... loving this twisty deewangi but dear one thing is striking my mind... wants to shar with you... i just felt while reading this one...
i won't compare t with muskan's deewangi but as you have continued it from mid of deewangi so just felt to ask ...
maan was a reserved person...so conservative,,,,,man with less words...he took so much time to accept geet in his life but here he accept his bro, his parents, his baby sis in a fraction of second..., according to me, he should take little bit time to adjusting himself in these new found relations... maan never accept anything so easily and here he accept so easily...

another one thing... don't think like i am complaining... i am just giving my POV about this ff... you are fab writer... you have carried this ff very well after that night when geet strip herself and submit herself in maan's arms...

according to me, you are lacking the main flavor of deewangi, their deewangi, the deewangi they had for each other...like their love, their passion, everything they felt for each other, like it lost somewhere...please add that deewangi, that flavor here... it is missing here... do something...
i thing their deewangi lost in twists...

according to me this ff became only twisty.. deewangi has been lost... please please... deewangi flavor add karo...

don't feel bad if i hurt you...then sorry... just wanted to tell you these things...

Originally posted by: ruchs

Thank you so much dear for the super awesome and truthful feedback!!😊

Actually what i assumed here was that Maan was so starved for love of his family that he easily accepted these relations, though he still holds grudges against those who wronged him and his family like his Dad' He always craved for his mother's warmth, a brotherly hug, moreover the next update would answer some of it too!!! 😳

As for the Deewangi thing, you are absolutely right!! Me felt it this way too, that's why at some point of time, me felt am not doing Justice to muskan di's Deewangi!! Me will pakka try to improve upon that!! Though it may take me a few updates!! Hope me would be able to justify it in the future updates!!😳

Thak you so much dear for the lovely feedback!! I am utterly grateful to you, your feedback would really help me in improving dear!!😳

A big walllaaa hug and THANK YOU!!!! Hope you keep helping me in future too with your lovely feedback!!😳

finally read d whole ff

sahi mein ekdum correct naam diya hai iss story ka

TWISTED DEEWANGI

seriously story bahut twisted hai but i loving it...

i m also a biggest fan of muski di's DEEWANGI...

waiting for its next update

waiting

Originally posted by: Madhuri53

waiting

Originally posted by: maansee

Originally posted by: ruchs

UPDATING TONIGHT!!!😳

Originally posted by: ruchs

Alley mela baby!! Don't cry!!! Me fulfilling your wish tonight!!!😳

Originally posted by: maansee

thanks