New FF maneet: Punarjanam-edited post on 20.12.2013 - Page 26

Part- 8

Today she is here bcoz of adi….she ran to intensive care….…..her eyes roamed once again her surroundings…its too calm only she can here patents pain full mummers….everybody with their families….but with my maan….she rushed inside…..duty nurse try to stop her…adi stopped her…with special permission she enter maan room…..her heart sank looking at her maan…he is surrounded no of tubes and medical equipments….he is breathing with the help of machines…he is alive only bcoz of these machines …..there is no movements …only monitor is proving that he is breathing. The pin drop silence scaring….she can hear only the beep sound from monitor…her eyes filled with tear…the fear gathered in her heart…is she loose him again…? Bhabhaji….

The pain just prickled her heart….for what she waited all these days….her eyes roamed once again all his body….its a very difficult to digest her. She thought when she came to him his open arms will welcome her…he showered her by his love…but what happened…..she never expected something will reverse in this way.she expected one but destiny written different. Her pain about to burst, she control her hiccups closing her mouth by fingers. She saw him directly before eighteen years…now she had a lot of hope on him…lot of wishes gathered in her heat but finally what happened….everything shattered at last minute. What really bhabhaji written in my faith…her eyes are filling as the tears rolling down on her round cheeks. As she remember she didn't cried even once in her life…handa family treated like a prince…whatever who can rub what her bhabhaji written in her destiny….no one can stop her by baring these pain. "bhabahji please mera madat karo…she prayed her bhabhaji continuously. Her silent pain can squeeze anybody.

Is the way I should survive all my life. first I left him now again he is ready to leave me. Oh bhabhaji…her eyes went on top of ceiling ….tears rolled looking blank roof….

How much dreams she gathered from her child wood ….how much she craved for him…she lived in his memories…she breath in his memories…..everyday….starts from maan and ends with maan….her each daily activities go with maan…agreed he is not with her physically…but he is always alive in her heart…..did I should live same thing in rest of all my life…oh god…unknown fear gathered already in her mind. She is becoming cold…..she is becoming blank…she is losing her sense….adi kept his hand on her shoulder….."madam…."don't know at what time he entered intensive care.

She turned back…she cried mutely without sounding…holding her mouth by her finger…."madam…everything will be fine….only god has to save him….." she is trembling…..as she got heavy cold….she buried her face in her palms…don't know how much she broken…the pain is not leaving her….

"maan…."very first time she called him after some time…..no he is not responding…lying like a dead body….suddenly she went furious…don't know with whom she is anger…."maan anke kolo……"she felt so much helpless…."maan pls don't leave me alone…I know why you are doing this to me last time I left you na…so this time you are doing same to me….no maan pls …pls don't leave me alone…."she is crying like a small kid….adi kept quite….he know some how she should throw out her pain or else don't know what happen…."maan pls open your eyes….open your eyes….."she is almost begging…..her hands cupped his face….leaning on him she whispered in his ear…."maan…may geet hu…anke kolo…sirf ek bar…..muje deko…apki geet…maan ki geet…."again and again she whispered no response…..now again her pain turn to anger….

"you idiot….can't you here me…how dare you to denial me…you stupid…your geet is here and you are simply sleeping here…"she cursed her self…." Ya common open your eyes…just look at me…once at least once call me….pls maan…"she shivered….she touched her lips on his forehead .finally she dropped her self at ground crying bitterly…

Adi really felt bad…he is not sure of geet Intension …but he know she is very much close to maan…adi surprised looking her expression. his eyes widened when maan fingers moved slightly….."madam….."he called her happily.

Even geet noticed ….now some hope gathered in her mind…and finally a small smile appeared in her lips…..

"geet…pls don't leave me…."eighth wonder happened in geet life…..he is remember geet in his subconscious state….geet rubbed her tears hurriedly and stood next to him…..

She pattered his cheeks "ha maan….your geet is next to you open your eyes….maan…maan…"no again he lost his conscious.

Adi ran to call doctors…immediately they came inside…..yes its true….second by second maan nearing to his death….how to save him…geet stood like a doll…..she is observing everything from out side of the door…..what all they are doing him to keep alive…there giving electric shock to bring back him…..his body is jumping from the bed…

Each time geet felt that her death is nearing to her .Geet couldn't see him in that condition …..she sat on the floor…..praying her bahabaji….finally doctor given the update that his health become normal…but still he is not in out of danger….

Suddenly geet came in sense….she remembered her mom words….yes I should go to there….i should go to that temple …may be ill get my maan only by praying with god…….don't know what trust gathered in her …she stood at one jerk…."adi book air tickets to chennai…" yes …when human become so much helpless …he search many ways to come out from his problem…each small window visible like a doors. Same thing even she done…..now she assured that only god can help her…..

Before moving from there once again she turn back….."good bye maan I return only when you recover….this is not only question of my love…this is the question of god also….aaj tak maine kisi ko bura nahi kiya….jane anjane may be nahi kiya….may be dekthi hu…agar maine punarjanam lekar tumhe milne keliye ayatha jarroor bhagavan mera madath karana padega…warna ..koi be insane un par vishvas nahi rakega…agar kuch gadbad hogaya tho may kabhi vapas nahi avunghi aur mere mungh kisi ko nahi dikadungi….yetho mera vada hain….bhabhaji aap par mera maan ka zamedar chodkar chall rah hu…patha nahi kya hota "

Before going once again she went inside…..she touched her sole by lips….she moved towards the entrance. Already cab ready is to take her to airport. " adi be careful …" she sat in the car leaning back….almost thirty two hours….she didn't sleep…she didn't eat….her own requirements already dead front of maan…now her soul can satisfy only by his presence.

Geet reached srirangam temple….temple is so huge… its constructed more then hundred and twenty acres….she is taken bath in cavery river and went to visit inside like normal devote…she is a princes of handas… she is s daughter of millenear but what happened today she is standing front of god begging for her sole. Is the faith play with human bees…everything is there but needed…..

Her tears rolled on her cheeks…."bhagvan …why you are testing me so much…if you decided that I shouldn't get maan why you make me to reborn…..why you left me with all the memories…kis guna keliye ye saza…bas karo bhagvan…I don't have strength…"her silent prayer shows how much pain she is in…her dreams shattered at the end of the day…..she is becoming mad….she sat on the entrance of the temple.

The tiredness not leave her to be same…after four days means ninety six hours…..she permitted her eyelids to close….don't till what time she slept…when she is wake heavy sun rise hitting her eyes….some one old saint standing next to her….

"bte khone tum…why you are sleeping here…"his face is glowing bright….there is unknown attraction is visible in his face…. Geet just went under his magic….she thrown all are pain by tears….he caressed her forehead….he placed his hand some time on her head…geet felt some unknown feeling in her….she felt secure and little currage gathered in her heart. This sensation given her lot of strength….she touched his feet….

"bte…take this ask him to ware this tawiz…everything will be alright…."he handover tawiz with black thread to her hand….."go to vaithanatheshwaren temple at chidabaram….you get answers for your many questions….."geet nodded her head……and she kept tawiz in her handbag…once she turn back but she didn't find that same saint again…for a while its confused her whether it's a dream….but inside the bag which she hided that tawiz confirmed her its not a dream…..some hope gathered in her mind….yes bhagvanji who were we to decide about our human bees life….you are the master decide everything, anything about us now I confirmed you will never make me to lost any thing in my life…enough this is enough…..now her eyes filled withtears not by pain…with joy…

Precap: same….geet in srirangam and vaithanatheshwaran temple at tamil nadu.

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Originally posted by: tiakashyap

it was nice bt
its part 5
i have already read it
ye toh purana wala fir post kar diya
new chahiye
chal chal now get back to work again n give me a new part