New FF maneet: Punarjanam-edited post on 20.12.2013

NEW INDEX IS BELOW

Friends i am editing punarjanmam FF bcoz i found there is a error in old post.
pls support me.

Punarjanmam

Suna suna lamha lamha meree raahe tanha tanha

Aakar mujhe tum tham lo, manjil teree dekhe rasta

Mud ke jara abb dekh lo, aisa milan phir ho na ho

Sab kuchh meraa tum hee toh ho

Bapanah pyar hai aaja, teraa intejar hai aaja

O bapanah pyar hai aaja, teraa intejar hai aaja

Suna suna lamha lamha, meree raahe tanha tanha

Prolog...

The story of real meaning of love...

The story trying to know the strength of the love...

The story which never ends after their death...

The story of even how god will stand with love...

The story which can change anybody from hard to soft...

The story two soles eagerly waiting for even an another life.

The story which remains even after a life to life...

"maan "she whispered silently in his dreams..."i am coming maan...after a many years...ill come to you...i need you as my soul...you are my breath where I can not live without you...is duniya ka koi thakath hame alag nahi karsakthe...i swear bhabhaji hamare sath hain...is bar koi nahi rukh sakthe...wait for me maan..."

Suddenly maan open his eyes...saffron color engulfing his entire room...he saw through window...sun started to raise...he saw the watch..its almost 5:30am...this dream is keep on hunting him from past many years...who is that girl...why I am not able to see her...why she is hunting me...

Its like she is already mingled in my blood...her each word is disturbing me every day...every day I get same dream...but I don't know who is coming to me...is it to call sixth sense...no...the girl she coming in my dream she is not giving me her clear view...nothing is clear...only her voice... sweet voice...its making me...insane...she is waking my inner unknown desire...some unknown pain shadow is following me...

He fisted his palm and hit on wall...still its not hurting him...why...her smile...her voice is just...echoing in my ears ...me my self... I feel like I can end my life with her one smile...her voice but dam it why can't she is not coming in front of me...kash...kash...sirf ek baar muje unse bath karnehain...ek baar sirf ek baar unko dekna chathi hu...kys aisa ho sakthahi kya...khone ho tum...kyu ithna parishan karege muje...har din har rat..kyu pagoli ki tarah mere piche pade hain...what ever you come in front of me...why are giving me this unbearable pain to me...where are you...who are you...

He open the cupboard furiously...there is variety of hot drinks which is assemble neatly...he took on and just open it started to drink without mixing water or soda...finally when he started to loose his conscious last word slipped from his lips..."geet...where are you...your maan waiting for you..."

I don't how you people encourage me for this FF... but I need more support from you all...i found some errors in last postings so again I am editing and reposting it...so pls support me for my effort...

Character sketch:

Maan Singh Khurana 36 years old MD for KC only for name sake...he is a puppet of pummy and dev.

Geet just 18years old sweet girl but she matured and very intelligent girl...came from UK only to take back her love.

Pummy she maan step mother ,but she made maan puppet and whole KC and KM in her hand.

Dev Singh Kurana maan yeleder brother son of pummy ready to do any thing to get maan property.

Dadima she is kept in dark place of KM and hide by everybody...bcoz pummy and dev know once dadima meet maan their secrets will be relieved. So they kept her in dark place where no one can contact her...only she get food and water on time. She is alive bcoz dev and pummy back of hidden treasure which is hided by Maan grand father Ranjith Khurana .

Brij handa: geet brother very good brother he loves geet like his own soul.

Mohinder handa: he is a famous business man in UK no one can beat him business.

Ranu hanada: mother of geet handa. Even she is living in UK she didn't forget to teach Indian culture to her daughter geet handa.

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if you like it pls read it and comment on my FF's

congrts on new ff

awesome

ossum dear
loved it
is it.movie based on edukante premanta dear
i felt like tht
nice start
waiting fr next

oh it is awm as usual..
loved it...
wtng for nxt...
hey how r u???
after long time...
happy to see u bak...take care dear

Hey Varsha... wonderful start to a new and interesting story... I am eager to know more about what is going to happen next...
maan and geet reborn... but in the same families or different? did dev get his punishment for killing maan or did he escape? what about the rest of the family and pummy? plz updates soon...