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Sara Khanna

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Posted: 13 years ago

#451

Haila, Anu phir se name change? Aur miss MARS hi kyu?

Kya update tha. Looks like, geography ke subject mey meri Anu kaafi research kar rahi hai. What a knowledge. Aur teri geography ke upar unki chemistry, wow. What a combo. Geet, my ever-so-naughty girl. Precap was dhassu. Jaldi next part post kar.

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lazy-sleeper

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Posted: 13 years ago

#452

Originally posted by: $ara_$hachi
Haila, Anu phir se name change? Aur miss MARS hi kyu?

Kya update tha. Looks like, geography ke subject mey meri Anu kaafi research kar rahi hai. What a knowledge. Aur teri geography ke upar unki chemistry, wow. What a combo. Geet, my ever-so-naughty girl. Precap was dhassu. Jaldi next part post kar.

Do cont soon and do PM me.

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Haan ji phir se change kiya!!😉 Kyun pasand nahi aaya😛
Ahan Miss mars: he he Mr.Mars-Maan Ms.Mars-Anu got it?😛😃😳
Haan ji aap logon ke liye hi itna homework kar rahi hoon Geography main😆⭐️
Bilkul sahi baat hai Geography + Maaneet Hot chemistry=?????? Guess what😛
Sachi???? Dhassu tha?
Thank you thank you ji👏
Han ji aap ka hukoom saraakhon par😉

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lazy-sleeper

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Posted: 13 years ago

#453

Part 5

PRESENT

He engulfed her passionately in a hug burring his head in the nape of her neck lightly kissing it.
"We will pass this phase too" Maan murmured.
"If our love is strong enough to surpass it" Geet sighed.
"Geet Are you alright with all of this?" Maan was concerned about her now. She looked tensed.
"I hope so Maan!" Geet replied. She was actually scared about the whole half an hour thing.
Maan cupped her face, "Geet Do you love me?"
"More than myself!"
"Then you have to trust me Ms.Venus!" Maan chuckled in order to lighten the atmosphere.
Geet sat upon their already floating bed.
"It all feels so wierd Maan!"Geet was nervous.
"Ms.Venus after all it isnt that wierd." He winked. "We are the future heir and heiress of Mars and Venus" Maan smirked arrogantly.
"Maan!" Geet smacked his arm.
"Maan !! What did uh QV say?" Geet tried to divert her attention.
Maan put up a stern face. He turned serious.
"She said very less time is left. We have to take some measure sooner."
"Less time?"
"Yes. Either we have to fight face to face with this D whoever unnamed or make out within half an hour so that he doesnt get you and doesnt turn powerful" Maan was worried for Geet.
'I know Geet neither you would make out nor would you hand yourself to D. Leave handing yourself I wont let anyone's bad eyes fall on you. This is just to bring out the strong determined Geet I knew on Earth. I will in any cases protect you. That is my promise to you. I...' Maan's thoughts were broken when Dr.R entered the room coughing diverting their attention.
"Guys I hope you are ready" Raj winked inspite of his nervousness.
'You have to guys otherwise he wont spare my...'
"YES WE ARE!!!" Both spoke in unison.
"I am going to leave you for few minutes before you do the err... act!" Raj said.
"Dr.R you dont need to worry" Maan spoke. Though he knew she wont be able to still he didnt know why he assured Dr.R.
"I hope so Prince Mars!" Raj spoke.
Thats when the clouds thundered. Geet shivered. She could feel the negative vibes.
Maan could feel her shivering . He engulfed her in a hug.
"Dont worry Princess everything will be alright!!" Maan said as he now knew what he had to do.
Raj had already left the room.
He closed the door. "D has arrived"

*********************

Past
"Prince Maan Mars Geet doesnt know what potential she has in her. Though we are lucky to have her as our daughter, unfortunately she is now posing threats to all the planets" KV shared his worries with Maan, his would be son-in-law now.
Geet and Maan had already had their Bonding ceremony and were going to be bound physically too in next week.
KV wanted Maan to know why Geet is precious to all. He wanted his daughter to remain protected and Prince Maan Mars was the best suited even though Raj had already asked about this.
"I understand King Uncle. I will try my best!" Maan assured KV and he left.
KV connected his mind to Maan's.
"I hope you will be her Protector!"
"I will" Maan replied as their connection cut off.
*********
Maan entered their most frequently visited place- The hall.
"Are you ready Geet I mean Princess GV? We need to start our practice sessions." Maan spoke huskily.
Geet stared at him.
'Why was his voice like this?' Geet wondered.
"Come on Geet!" Maan had one of those devilish faces when he gets two missions achieved with one go.
"Sordo!!" He called. a person came flying over his surfboard carrying a covered object.
"Prince Maan Mars What is this? We were supposed to do our practing?" Geet asked with a questioning look.
"Just wait and watch Princess!!!"He smirked as Sordo uncovered the object and left.
It was a mirror.
"Geet stand infront of the mirror and close your eyes" Maan said mischieviously.
Geet did as he said. She was already instructed by KV to follow what PMM ordered to have herself powerfully skilled.
As soon as she closed her eyes he snaked his arms around her waist and buried his face in her nape from her back.
Geet squirmed a bit feeling his touch.
"Dont!! Dont dare to open your eyes." Maan rubbed his lips near her earlobe.
"Shoot!" He whispered in her ear.
She started shooting the ice daggers over the mirror as the mirror backtracked and the daggers came returning to her.
They were flying with high speed towards her.
"Feel them. Their collision. Their speed. Their connection. Their interaction" He bit her collarbone.
She hissed at the bite.
"Concentrate Geet " He smirked.
'Flame on' Maan spoke to herself.
He warmed her as she tried to concentrate inspite of his flutterring touches.
He started to pull her inside more warming her.
She smiled enjoying his touches.
The smile became wider as the daggers got alligned in a single line. Maan moved over her other side as she spread her hands wide and Maan tightened his hold.
The daggers finally came and rested on her palms as she gained the energy flying up along with Maan over his surfboard.
"Phew! It worked Geet it worked. " He screamed pulling her into a hug as they kissed rotating speedily.
**********

PRESENT

Maan picked Geet up laying her on the bed.
"Easy Geet!!" He slowly lowered himself over her.
"Maan!" She gasped getting scared.
Maan laid himself over her as Geet squirmed due to the uncomfortable position.
"20 minutes left" Dr. R knocked the door.
Maan moved to her face kissing her lips.
"No!" Geet whispered.
"Yes!!" Maan started removing her accessories.
He kissed her earlobe.
He moved over her face kissing her eyes creating a mental connection between them which he was unaware about.
'Yes Geet You are strong! You can do it' He heard himself say to her mind.
He removed his shirt moving over her again.
"You want or you..." He moved his face closer to hers almost burrying his face in her hair.
"NOOO!!!!I will fight Maan I will! By any means I will save my planet but not by these cowardly means!!" She pushed him with her ice cold hands.
'Thats like my Geet- Strong Determined Princess Geet Venus' He smirked.
"As you wish Geet!!" He spoke as both dressed back themselves.
As soon as 20 mnutes completed Raj barged in.
"I hope you guys did it?" He asked with eagerness.
"Look Dr. R..." Geet said but was cut off by Maan's firm voice.
"Now its none of your business" He snapped. He was already suspicious of Raj's behaviour.
Raj left with a serious face.
As soon as he left, Geet felt a tingle at the back of her mind.
No one noticed but a new Magical Flower Bud arose.
**********
'It is said with each good deed of the Princess a magical bud arises... It not only increases the Princess' strength Her soulmate becomes impossibly strong and powerful untill... she is scarred physically' KV remembered his grandmother's words and laughed in his mind.
"How much you may try Dev or the so called D the Destroyer the unnamed. Being my blood also you cant harm Geet" He thought to himself.
D saw him smirking to himself.
"What's so funny Venus?"Let me see Venus how wont Maan bring Geet out. How much will he hide her and him?" D laughed while his most trusted person stood there grim faced and head hung low.KV smirked at Dev's foolishness.
The only thing he regretted now was the traitor.
"Dev I have already handed my daughter to her protector. Only saddest thing is that the traitor was King Mars ,Maan's father which he isnt still aware about." KV thought.
"And Raj..."
His thoughts were broken as Dev spoke,
"I will get Geet at my feet and become the most powerful and neither you KV nor Maan and nor your daughter can stop me because as soon as I touch her she would DIE!!!!" Dev laughed evilly.
KV smirked " You are forgetting Maan isnt any ordinary Prince..."
He lost his consciousness as another cosmic ray hit him and he went blank.

PRECAP

Present
Preparation of the fight👏
Past
Geet in Maan's dreams or Maan in Geet's dreams.😉

Hope you liked it.
specially Prafulla and faiza . If i dont get for the hard work i did no update then😛
Long comments Dhamki Queens
And Nishu if u post comments like for the last update I wont talk with you Bhootni Samjhi
Mel Please dont become Ms Invisible
Frankie all the best for your exams
Devil sissy I have no earthlings mr LOL😆
@gargi12: Oyyee this time I posted more about Devil. Happy now😛

Pufff Finished finally. Those who already commented please go through whole update and comment again please
A big🤗for all you guys who waited and pressed the like button.

::::::NOTE::::
OMG OMG OMG I am absolutely in love with this I love you I love you Chipmunks!! Guys do watch this😃
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ex1Dc4T1XoE
Okay as for my previous FFs I have posted them. So I am going to restart it and post the parts I had already posted but cant assure you its continuation. so for now just enjoy the parts. Okay clearly no future parts because I want my whole concentration on Mr.Mars and Ms.Venus.
Here's the links:😃
Rough Ishq
A Misunderstanding and KIDNAPPED!
Fate has the best in store for us
I don't know!
Destined to Love
Arrrggghhh I would never attempt live update again. This is so ridiculous with this idiot damned PC shutting off and on every second.
Anyways Press the like button and do comment.
Love
Ms.Mars😃

Edited by Miss.Mars - 13 years ago