MG SS Mr.Mars & Ms.Venus THREAD 1 - Page 14

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wow the craziest concept
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Originally posted by: PariNain

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Will update soon:)
May be by tomorrow sissy!!
umm having my dinner now may be after that!!
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This update is for my devil Sissy Roopali and My dear dear Mel!!





PART 2
Present:

He had arrived.

Both were scared. "Who was the he?" Both spoke simultaneously.

"Drink the liquid!!" A voice echoed.
"What is their problem with this voice echoing?" Geet spoke irritatingly. Maan chuckled at her tantrums.
"What?" Geet spoke again glaring at him which immediately shut Maan up. They both drank the liquid.
"Why am I feeling dizzy?" Geet's head was throbbing with the liquid consumption.

"Because I am feeling the same too!" Maan's head was throbbing too.

Both could feel the hormonal changes and chemical reactions taking place inside them. Maan's body started turning silvery and bluish while Geet's yellow and reddish.
A band appeared on their wrists which bore their initials 'M' and 'G' respectively.
"Maan?" Geet was scared and in pain with the changes. The changes were paining all over her body.
"Yes..!!" Maan's answer was uncertain too. He himself was suffering from the same kind of treatment.
"I am scared Maan!" She spoke with tears brimming in her eyes.
Maan could never see his love ,his jaan in tears. He engulfed her in a tight hug.
"Love! Don't worry I am with you. Your Maan is with you." He spoke while Geet burried her face more into his chest.
Both were beginning to realize the seriousness of their situation. They didn't know what would happen the very next moment with them. They were utterly scared dreading for their death the very next moment. Last wish before they got separated was to confess their love for each other.
'I know Maan you don't love me but today let me confess my feelings. Its my last wish.' Geet thought.
'I have behaved no better than garbage with her. I almost trashed her feelings that day. And My Jaan deserves nothing but the best. I must apologize. That's the last thing I can do before our last moment together.' Maan thought guiltily.
But Geet spoke first.
"Maan I am sorry if I ever did truly hurt you. That day I just felt like confessing my feelings. I don't know why. May be because that was the last day of our survival. Last day of being together. Sound and Happy. Here we don't even know what is going to happen the very next moment!" She sobbed.
"Geet! Jaan Don't cry please. That is the last thing I want. " He never realized he could be the cause of her tears. She could be this remorseful.
"I cant help it Maan. I just cant stop myself. I am so sorry. So sorry."
"No Geet! It is not your fault. Infact it was the surprise for you." He winked though fear of death was still visible in his eyes. He bent down on his knees as he parted from their hug. He was amazed his knees never laid on the ground still floating in air while Geet sat on the bed wimping.
*****

"I am sorry to interrupt you! Dr. R here!"
"Dr R?" Both spoke surprised.
' So he was the He!' Geet thought though Maan was bit skeptical.
"Look guys I have to cut it short since we need to start the preparation now. Target TWO WEEKS. Mission Destroy D. Yes your planets are in danger and only you guys can save them."
"WE?" Both screamed.
"Please don't scream!!"
"PLANETS? DANGER? Do we look like fools?" Maan spoke this time.
"Thats the problem. You earthlings never believe us. Though it isnt exactly earthlings in your case. Geet you are from Venus and Maan you are from Mars. You were changed to earthlings to save your lives! Phew!" He spoke in one breath.
"WHAT?" They again screamed as R closed his ears.
"But first the most difficult task!!" R spoke blushing with apprehension.
**********
Past:
"Prince Mars! I want you to take Geet to Mars . Out of Venus. Out of His reach soon." King Venus spoke in urgency.
"Why?" Maan was surprised
"He wont leave her. He will kill her. He has started the hunt. He will take up his possession" KV spoke up in fear.
"King Uncle? What happened? You are hiding something from me?" Maan enquired. He was now getting worried for Geet.
'What if something happened to her/ How will I survive? NOOO I will never let this happen. Never Ever.' Maan was worried.
"Its D the..."
"Destroyer!! But why is he behind Geet ?"
"Because she is the only one who can make him the conquerer. The most powerful. And the end of us. She will be the end of us"
"What? How is that even possible?"
"Damn It. Why don't you get it Prince? She will be the death of us if allowed free anymore. He will take her away. Why do you think she is glowing these days? The numerous attempts on her life. Why do you think it is happening?"
"He is arriving! People want her to die. That's why Meera said her that. So she will be alone. But she is forgetting and so do people that they have to cross the fire named MAAN MARS to harm My Geet!!"
***********
"She will be the end of us" Only those words echoed in her mind.
'How could People think so? How could KV think like that ? And Maaan...' She trailed off at the thought.
Her anger and frustration was touching the peak levels.
"HOW COULD THEY?"
She freezed the whole hall.
'How can I be the end of them?'
She started shooting daggers of ice in all directions.
'Mating with anyone except Maan?'
She stopped with force and skidded off the floor.
'Impossible! Rather I would accept death!!'
She started rotating herself in high speed breaking all the limits all records in her anger. She rotated over the area causing craters to form on the floor as ice balls started moving out of her rotating form. She started feeling dizzy and loss of her energy was taking a toll on her body. The balls instead started firing in her way from all directions.
Geet got scared. She tried ducking few balls but they seemed to gain power with her each touch. She couldn't handle anymore. She cocooned herself curving into a foetal position trying to form the force field. Her efforts went in vain.
The balls were inching her way as if they were meant to be the sole purpose to destroy her.
She closed her eyes accepting her end. Only one name escaped her lips "Maan!"
She became unconscious.
He kissed her again on her lips.
"Damn it Geet. Revive Revive your breath!" Maan screamed again kissing her.
She started coughing and sneezing heavily. He rubbed her nude body as they both lied naked covered with the silky duvets.
Precap:
"What do you think of yourself? SUPERWOMAN? Answer me! Geet!"
"Your end!" She sobbed.
He pinched her buds. "Say it again Baby!" He spoke huskily. She gasped as she got the hint of his intentions.
Uffo both naked! Wonder what our Pervert Maan is thinking.😆😉Guess guess what is the MOST DIFFicult task!😛😳
Gosh!! I am really very happy with all those comments. Thank you guys thanks a lot.
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Hope you enjoyed this part
Love
Ananya



Edited by MG2011AA - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Me the stalker!!😉

Edit…

Hmm now everything seems much more clear!!😉

They were in earthling set up because of life threat!!

The first few moments when that potion thing was going around, me got so scared!!

Haaye loved the Maaneet romance!!😳

Their feelings and dialogues were so sweet when they felt they are dying!!😳

Now who is this Mr. D???

The last part made me blush!!😳

Haaye Naughty Precap!!!😉

Lovely update dear!!😳

Simply awesome!!👏
Edited by ruchs - 13 years ago
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chi chi ananya what kind of precap is that chi chi young lady BEHAVE or mel can't read how will I read with closed eyes goes I can't read that with open eyes😆
and I still want a milky bar😭

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