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Posted: 13 years ago
awsm teaser..
wtng for the updt
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Posted: 13 years ago
u always give a teaser bt neva pm it y so??😡

me waiting for update now
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: radha.nandini

u always give a teaser bt neva pm it y so??😡


me waiting for update now

itna gussa?😳 yaar i actually want to know as to how many of u are intrested in the story thats the reason bura mat maano 😆
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: spvd

part 14
awesome...
am liking this pair Geet and Chotu...
so Karthi talks normally only to Geet...
cont soon dear...


yes u r right deepa😆
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: uteem

Awsome blossom update
geet giving bath to chotu nd maan took nt kids to geet


no ur guess is wrong 😉 geet is going to nt kids😆
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PART 15:

As the song ended she swung her duppata in the air and it feel on maan's face veiling him from geet. This dumbo girl looked at the direction where the duppata feel and was shocked. she tried looking at the person's face it was not visible. She started to shout on the top of her lungs


Geet: aaahhh chor chor!!!!! Jumping on the bed


Maan removed her duppata from his face closing his ears that's wen geet saw him


Geet: aap' aap yahan kya kar rahe hai? Aapko mere ghar ka pata kaisne diya?


Maan: geet!!! Stop with ur questionnare agar tumhari nautanki khatm gaya toh kapde pehenke bahar aao mujhe tumse baat karni hai


Geet: aap andar aaye hi kyun?? Kisiki room mein aise bina permission ke nahi aate yeh toh aapko pata hoga na? mujhe laga ki chor hai pata hai main kitni darr gayi thi??


Maan: mujhe kuch sikhane se pehle tum apne ghar ka darwaza band karna seekho. Agar tum aise aadhe kapdon mein darwaaza kholke naachogi toh chor ghar ko lootna chod tumhe lootega, ek aur lafz nahi CHANGE!!! And come to the hall. I want to talk to u


geet left chotu in her room after changing came back to maan who was waiting for her impatiently in the hall for her


geet: toh batayiye aap yaha kaise?


Maan: mujhe tumse ek jaroori baat karni thi karthi ke bare mein


Geet: kya hua use? Who thik toh hai na?


Maan: u do not know how he is?


Geet: last wen he spoke to me, he was fine so I thought that u ppl wanted lil more time to sent him to skul. Seriously I donno anything


Maan: he isn't talking to anyone geet except u. Tumne uska bohut saath diya shayad iss liye. I want a favour from u. I know u wud do it bt still think abt it as I do not know how wud u react listening to me


Geet: agar baat karthi ki hai toh u don't need to request just order me, coz u understand wat he means to me


Maan: I want u to move with both the kids to my farm house for two days so that we can bring back karthi for now he is only responding to u and yes ill be accompaining u aur pata nahi shayad tumhe mere'' geet cut off from speaking


Geet: I told u ill do anything for him so don't worry


Maan: ek aur baat geet chotu ko hum apne saath nahi leja sakthe we will keep our luggage in my farm house and then visit few places is that ok? Chotu ko chod sakti ho do din ke liye?


Geet: its ok house owner ko dedongi kuch din se yehi toh kar rahi hoon


Maan: I cant even say thanks to u


Geet: and u will neva need it either saying this she wincked at maan both of them exchanged a warm smile

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Oh oh..
Oh baby oh baby
Oh baby oh baby
Oh baby oh baby
Oh..


Finally after a long long drive maan, geet along with the children reached farm house. Its his fav place on earth where nobody expect his family and his frnd prem are allowed bt today something has changed or someone has changed?? Or might be situations changed he cudnt believe he is here with geet

Choomantar..
Choomantar..
Choomantar..
Choomantar..


Maan observed geet she is upto something. Karthi came out of the car looking at the surrounding he was greatly relieved. It was early mrng and he was mesmirised by the nature. He glanced at geet, she smiled at him warmly. Soon all of them entered their respective rooms while geet took karthi and got him ready. She changed herself into a knee lenth frock. Maan was in his causuals a tshirt and pant his toned muscles were visible through his tshirt while geet who just entered the hall started to stare at him for the first time eva checking out his perfect body same was with maan he froze in his tracks looking at her as she was complementing with barbie doll with her outfit. All the four started for their tour to delhi.


Choo..mantar ho
Aa ja chal gum ho jaye
Choo..mantar ho
Khud se hi khud kho jaye
Choo..mantar ho
Nazron mein hum na aaye


They reached humayun's tomb where ppl were busy enjoying the place, geet took out the water bottle out of the bag from car. Maan was walking at the front with both the kids. Karthi was all silent, geet paced up with him in no time opening the bottle's cap she empited it compeletly on karthi. That's it he looked at geet with fierece eyes


Geet: lo jaago ab jaago enuf of with ur depression karthi come out''' take this bottle if u want to do the same with me pour it back on me


Karthi hugged geet venting out all his suffocation. Geet consoled him patting him caressing his hair. He came out of the hug and kissed her on her cheek. Both laughed and then he grabbed the bottle from geet. Our princess understood his intentions and she ran chased by karthi. Maan was merely watching both of them. He took out his cam and clicked all those wonderful moments

Dhoonde jahan
Hum bhi na jane
Hum hai kahan
Choole zameen se
Woh aasaman
Chal oh re oh re oh re
Chal oh re oh re
What is wrong?
Let me look

Oh oh..
Oh baby oh baby
Oh baby oh baby
Oh baby oh baby
Oh..


Maan wondered how strong was the bond of geet and kids kabhi kabhi rishte banana mein saalo lag jaate hai par kabhi kabhi ek pal hi kaafi hota hai shaayad issi liye. He neva this new, other side of life where love is abt only giving. He was amazed that just a gesture from geet and karthi was all back. There he goes pouring the water on geet. Phir se shuru chasing this time its geet's time. Krathi was happy for her brother now. Maan now desperately wanted to hold geet, tell her how much he started respecting her

Are you ready for this
Are you ready for this
Woa..Woa..
Are you ready for this
Are you ready for this
Woa..Woa..

Choomantar..

They started to their next place roads of india gate. Now karthi is much much better. Geet tied a black band on his eyes and started singing


Thodi si yaari yaara
Rahon se nibha le
Apne bhi toh kabhi
Apni chala le


Joining geet maan started off


Thodi si yaari yaara
Rahon se nibha le
Apne bhi toh kabhi
Apni chala le


Geet removed the band and ran on the road aimlessly intending to the words


Hum chale kahin
Awara hokar naape zameen


Maan followed geet catching her singing asking karthi to do the craziest things of the world like


Hum dhoondhe kahin
Kuch aisa jo khoya hi nahin


Both the kids matched their pace now all the four ran towards the car heading to an other random place


Choo..mantar ho
Aa ja chal gum ho jaye
Choo..mantar ho
Khud se hi khud kho jaye
Choo..mantar ho
Nazron mein hum na aaye

O Choomantar..

O Choomantar..

All the four climbed onto a wall in a park now watching all the ppl children playing, elders were on walk it was a beautiful evening


Palkon ki daali pe
Joh sapne lage hai
Khwaishon ki garmi se
Woh pakne lage hai


Singing this geet winked at maan and he reapeted them


Palkon ki daali pe
Joh sapne lage hai
Khwaishon ki garmi se
Woh pakne lage hai


Karthi stopped maan at the ice gola stall asking him to buy which was on the road side. He ordered for his fav flavour and started to lick, bite, suck. Geet saw him eating she was with krathi. Both the girls marched towards the boys(Karthi just recovered from fever and this boy is eating barf ka gola). Geet snatched it from his hands and sang


Hmm..ruko zara
Dekhe toh kya
Hai yeh majra


while maan took it from geet gave it back to karthi assuring her that its ok singing


Hmm..sabhi tarah
Khwaishon se hai
Yeh dil bhara


Its almost mid night now they were exhusted to core, bt karthi wanted to eat pani puri so left with no option maan and geet checked out the roads finally they found one


Choo.. mantar ho
Aa ja chal gum ho jaye
Choo.. mantar ho
Khud se hi khud kho jaye
Choo..mantar ho
Nazron mein hum na aaye

Dhoonde jahan
Hum bhi na jane
Hum hai kahan
Choole zameen se
Woh aasaman
Chal oh re oh re oh re
Chal oh re oh re
What is wrong?
Let me look

Oh oh..
Oh baby oh baby
Oh baby
Oh baby oh baby
Come on oh baby
Oh baby oh baby
Oh baby..
Oh..

Wen krathi and geet began eating karthi posed the most wise question of the world

Karthi: geet miss pani puri mein sirf paani kyun daalke khaate hai pepsi kyun nahi? Pepsi puri kaise rahega

Both maan and geet held their heads unable to answer the silly question then looked at each other

Choomantar..
Choomantar..
Choomantar..
Choomantar..

And yes karthi is in his form again so all of them drove back to farm house desperately wanting to land on the beds


PRECAP: hum tum akele (second day at farm house). Cupid gets to work I mean prem and next update after 75 likes coz i got 71likes on my last update

i do not know if this update is long or not bt yes i tried giving a long one hope u did like it and to all my readers i just wanted to say this those who have added me for besharmi ke hadein ull get pms for love revenge too so plz just lemme know if my pms disturb u i am saying this for non readers dont take me wrong and if do disturb pm me after giving part 1 there i got plenty add requests so is the reason for me to say this

yaar silent readers i am again and again asking u to press like button bt u arent doing it na?😭

and yes i am thankful to all my readers for liking my work love u all plz hit a like atleast plz

remya sweety so ur guess was right na😆 maanna padega u have a sharp brain u are the only one who cud guess the precap love u


plz scroll down to wish AASHU on her bday 🤗this update is dedicated to u darls have a great life ahead love u 😳

sorry forgot to attach geet's image



previous part: part 14

next part: part 16

Edited by dreamyharika - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago



Happy birthday to you,
Happy birthday to you,
The number of candles you blew,
And the number a years that flew
All the strength that you drew
And the happiness you knew
All the old things and new
The love you found so true
The dreams you did pursue
Coffee and chocolate fondue
The white hue and morning dew
All these makes you get through
Happy birthday to you
Happy birthday to you
AASHU HAVE A GREAT DAY🤗
Edited by dreamyharika - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Harika 🤗...thank you for the awesome update and PM...the first scene was cute...Geet shouting at Maan...loved the way he made her chup...what he said was so true 😆... never expected Geet to go with Maan...i was thinking he will drop the kids with her...the whole outing and the song in between was so sweet...glad Karthi is almost back to normal...all the credit to Geet ...she is such a sweetheart...lovely dress u choose for her...no wonder Maan was stunned by her beauty...waiting for cupid to strike 😍...plz continue...TC 😊

Edited by --Ratna-- - 13 years ago

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