Pyar Ki ManZil..Part 12 in Page 82 - Page 27

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Posted: 12 years ago



aajkal tere mere pyaar ke charche har zabaan par ...sabko maalum hai aur sabko khabar ho gayi...

Everybody knows in their friend circle to Maan's siblings that Geet loves Maan but Maan don't know whose feelings whether he loves her or not is very important...

interesting update...

thanx for pm...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome update
liked a lot
sorry for the late reply, had exams
continue soon
waiting
HAPPY NEW YEAR😊
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Posted: 12 years ago

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4 pming me dear...😃
u done a really dear...👏👏
4 ur hard work...⭐️
...
sach a update...😳
last but not the list

a Very Happy New Year..





lov,❤️
Tama


NOTE: SORRY FOR THIS TOO SHORT COMMENT AS MY NET IS IT"S CRTICAL CONDITIONAM..don't know when it'll be fixed & also MY EXAM..

NOTE: SOMEONE ASKED ME WHOM FAN I AM...THAT ANS IS ONLY SUMIT KUMKUM & HUSSAIN JUHI..NONE OTHER ANY OF RESENT ON TV..




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Posted: 12 years ago
loved the update dear
sorry for the late reply

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Posted: 12 years ago
add me to ur pm list
plz pm me too when u update this ff
loved this ff
beautiful
cont soon dear
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Posted: 12 years ago





😉Updating Soon😉


For now teaser se kaam chala lo..😆


Teaser:


My mind always telling me to let you go
But my heart is always sayin "I Luv u"
This heart really rules my mind
And tat is why I can't stop Dis feeling inside


The moment I think about you
I go to another world
A world where you love me too
And where I can never be hurt

The truth is I don't know what to say
My mind goes completely blank
I have never in my life lost my way
But my heart with your love simply sank



*music* Muje mein tu..Tu hi tu basa...Naino mein.,Jaise khwaab sa hai *music*





Update by next week Pakka
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Posted: 12 years ago
Updating soon😉

abhi teaser se kaam chala lo :

The moment I think about you
I go to another world
A world where you love me too
And where I can never be hurt

The truth is I don't know what to say
My mind goes completely blank
I have never in my life lost my way
But my heart with your love simply sank

My mind always telling me to let you go
But my heart is always sayin "I Luv u"
This heart really rules my mind
And tat is why I can't stop Dis feeling inside

*music*Mujh mein tu..Tu hi tu Basa...Naino mein Jaise khwaab sa *music*


Update by next week pakka

love ya
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: tamanna1391

teaser waiting eagerly




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Em really sorry I couldn't update...my dumb idiot pc went out..wrong :/
Hope u vil understand
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Posted: 12 years ago



Thankyu n Em really sorry I couldn't update...my dumb idiot pc went out..wrong :/
Hope u vil understand
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Posted: 12 years ago

PART -10

DRIVER : jii saab n goes away..

Geet: So aage ka kya plan hai.??

Maan : ab jab tumne hi yeh plan banaya hai toh'.

Geet: aap kaunse janam ka badla le rahe ho. Jab dekho gussa nose main chada rehta hai'sadu ho aap han SADU

Maan : mein sadu hut oh tum tum chipkali ho'

Geet: ewww mein koi chipkali vipkali nai'

Maan : han nah tum toh khud ko salim ki anarkali samjhti ho

Geet : *whispers : salim ki anarkali ka toh pata nai BUT Maan ki geet jarur hu *

*Aloud* mein Geet handa hi thik hu

Maan : main bhi Maan Singh khurana se thik hu

Indira (indu) *in her style* :ab tum dono chup karoge'n chalo lets play truth n dare..

Manu : By the way we know each other well but still lets play so tatwe can know each other's secrets as well n winks ;)

Rohan : yeahh..lets play even I wanna spill out some secret out says while looking at geet in return she gives a deadly glare without anyone noticing..

..

All sit in a round conference types..sitting arrangements were like Maan rohan sam manu indu gunjan geet virat rishi

They spin up the bottle which ends up between Rishi n manu

Manu : bhai truth..dare or Double dare ( frends many of u will not know wat double dare is So its like the questioner would give two dare and among those both u have to choose one )

Rishi : ofcoure dare

Manu : ok so *she thinks for a while n saw someone n a idea popped in * okk so ur dare is bhai see that a girl you have to propose her n kiss her n came

Indu : what..?? are u out of ur mind manu

Manu : bhabs 'lets have fun'lets c does ur husband's charm still works or not

Rishi : ok I accept d dare..

All howls for him while maan says Go rishi Go to ehich he got a angry glare n maan made a what-did'i-do expression

Rishi composed himself n started t take his legs in a tiny steps n went to her

Rishi : hey beautiful lady..

Lady : ohh hiee

Rishi : *forwards his hand* rishi handa

Lady *forwards her hand* Zara khan

Rishi takes zara's hand n kisses to which she smiles with a slight blush

Rishi goes on his knees

Zara : ye aap kya kar rahe ho..

Rishi : Jab se dekha inn jhil mil si aankho ko

Mann karta hai ki innni main dooba rahu

Tumhari hassi ek sangeet ki tarah hai..

Tumahri hassi'tumhari ankhe'yumhari zulfe

Haayee maar denge hume kissi din

Zara here is blushing hardly n indu fuming In anger n other enjoying

Tariff karu kya uski jisne tumhe banaya Zara oh zara

Ban gaya main pagal tumhari inn aadon se..

Dil kare poori zindagi tumhe apni bahon mein rakhu

Zara was abt to response but rishi cont.

Tumhare ye red lips haayye mann kare abhi ke abhi in lips ko chum lu apne lips he..thats it..

Zara made rishi get up n forcefully sealed her lips with his making It has a aggressive kiss'this was most unexpected by rishi..all here were watching them open mouth n indu is fuming in anger n sees zara as if got a chance she would kill her alive

Indu goes there n forced zara to come outfrom the kiss and made rishi stand back of her so tat zara doesn't put an eye again on her hubby

Indu : u miss whatever just stay away from him

Zara : excuse me..who th hell are you to stop me..i can do anything to my rishi

Indu : ohh miss dreamy wait a sec wend is MY rishi became ur rishi

Zara : wat do u mean

Indu : Indira Rishi handa I hope u understood

Zara: den y did he propose me

Indu : it was a dare given to him which he completed so now u can leave

Zara : Wat

Indu : yeahh..now just get hell out of here u B**ch

Zara angrily glared at both n stomped her foot n went away

All burst into laughing while indu took rishi's lips to erase the naam mu nishan of zara's lips

Rishi : haayee meri Possesive billi..n both walks

Maan : Maza aaya

Rishi : dude dangerous girl yaar she was

They spin up the bottles which ends between virat n rohan

Virat: dude. Truth or dare or double dare

Rohan: well In small age I have learnt to say truth always

Virat : ok. Say a secret about geet which no one knows

Geet: hello why am I the target

Manu: bcoz we love to..

Rohan : hmmm geet ki ek baat hai..

Geet : no ways u gonna spill out

Rohan: sirf ek hi toh hai

Manu : ab bol hi do..

Rohan : ok listen'
once me n get went to mall n there were group of boys n one among them came on knees to which geet assumed tat he is flirting rather say proposing so without listening him just slapped him n said u have Rights to propose or flirt me bcoz I vil give all rights to my prince charming only. The boy felt insulted n shocked so I asked him wat ur abt to do. Guess wat he said.. "he said tat he was giving madam's bracelet which was fallen down " n tat moment geet was shocked n ashamed of hr act n said sorry n ran away n I was there standing there laughing like maniac soon accompanied by the group of boys'

All were shocked mainly maan as he felt like geet just slapped the boy bcoz he was in knees n upon all her assumptions.

Samrat : tune sachi use mara kya..??

Geet : han mara meine says while giving a angry glare to rohan to which he shows baby face

N they spin d bottle again n it ends up between rohan n geet to which deadly smirks

Rohan : so sexy pataka'??

Geet : eddy teddy Geet Handa Always Choose DARE

Rohan : fine' den assume tat maan bhai is ur dreamboy n propose him.

Just as he ended it..all were shocked m geet was giving a deadly glare which meant will u c later soon'

Maan : wat the hell..why me..? n tat too dis chipkali.hell no.

For once geet felt hurted but soon answered him in same tone as him : well even em not so interested in u Mr. SADU

Rohan : don't b spoil sport . Geet n maan bhai its just a dare'It's a game not in real..

Maan n geet in unison : ok n both smiles

Geet takes maan hands in with her shivering hands to which both felt strangely better'

Geet :


The moment I think about you
I go to another world
A world where you love me too
And where I can never be hurt

The truth is I don't know what to say
My mind goes completely blank
I have never in my life lost my way
But my heart with your love simply sank

My mind always telling me to let you go
But my heart is always sayin "I Luv u"
This heart really rules my mind
And tat is why I can't stop Dis feeling inside

For moment both lost in world of their dreamland . each n every word geet spoked oozed her love her loyalty n truth which felt a sweet song tho the listeners mainly maan

Precap : *music*ab Tumhi ho..kyuki Tum HI ho or Muh mein tu hi tu basee naino mein...*music*

Geet Night in Maan's House😳


Hello..I am Sorry But its short word to say...i know..But its 2 month after giving teaser i know..I actualy Got busy in vacations n den My pc Went Wrong as usual n den My results came n admission n all.. BTW I got 82% in my 10th boards😊 So count this update as a treat...
i vil try to Regular😉


Plzz hit LIKE N COMMENT...
feel Free to complain n advice😊


Lots of Love

Vanshi

Edited by vanshi_maaneet - 12 years ago

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