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Posted: 12 years ago



Mah Didu's(umme) First editing...Love u Didu..❤️


Part-9

Rohan : ab tum sexy pataka ho toh tume ussi naam se bhulogi naah

Geet : tume bolne se kuch faida nai. u call me sexy pataka only

Rohan: Acha yeh batau, tum muje kisse milwana chahti thi..

Geet : Yeah..Here u know some of my frends'aur mere list main 4 people joined ..but among them one is very special to me'actually u know him..i mean uske bare main kahi nah Kahi sunna hoga..Unka naam hai MAAN SINGH KHURANA

Rohan : Whattt'??? Wat did u say just now

Geet : tumne kya sune ki bimari hai kya'jab bhi kuch bolu 2 tyms again puchte ho

{ Maan's back is still facing towards Rohan n he is as usual engrossed in his calls'n U may think Manu hai nah she can find out rohan but right now she went sumwhere else with virat gunjan sam n indira}

Rohan : Arey, bol kya bola tunne pehle

Geet : Maan singh Khurana se milana chahtihu tumhe..Mere new Dost..

Rohan : kya

Geet : Main phirse nai repeat karungi

Rohan : tu sach keh rahi hai

Geet : han baba

Rohan : (happily) kahan hai Bhai

Geet: kaun bhai

Rohan: Maan bhai..

Geet: maan tere bhai'kaise u didn't say me.pehle pinch me

Rohan(pinches her): kaha hai bata

Geet(still stunned or say shock)poined her finger towards maan

Rohan shouts Maan Bhai..

Maan was stunned to hear this Voice,he cuts d call n turns n see his younger brother Rohan standing there'Rohan n maan walks n give a big Brotherly hug to eachother

Rohan : I missed u so much Bhai

Maan: I too missed u'Kaisa hai tu

Rohan : Main thik hu.. aap kaise ho..n Choti kahan hai

{Guys Rohan sirf geet rishi indira n samrat ko janta hai}

Maan : Me too fine'Who Manu..she is with Virat Right now

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Rohan : Yeh virat koun hai'.in a stirn voice

Maan : Ohhoo'Possessive bhai of manvi'chill man..

Virat'he is Partner Of manvi in all mischief things

Rohan : Bhai..aisa kuch hi nai hai'

Rishi Meets rohan n hugs him..

Rishi : so how was London trip..

Rohan : it was doing rishi bhai..how u n bhabhi

Rishi: I am doing well n even ur bhabhi'

Rohan: ohhh'Geet..geet

She doesn't give any response'so Rohan shakes her'

Geet : wats ur name'full nam..*In shock still*

Rohan: mera pura naam hai..Rohan.Rohan khurana

[ Rohan khurana. Adopted son of khurana family but is more than his own family member.. he never felt that he was adopted..He never Wanted to reveal anyone tat he belongs to d KHURANA's as he wanted to make his name without the tag of khurana..Very few people know abt Rohan belongs to khurana kaandan'

*me: In CS, Have not mentioned it abt rohan as according to the story..Hope no confusion*

He wanted to be like his big bhai n dadi who have always Made khurana's proud n no.1 n now he can say everyone tat he is ROHAN KHURANA]

Geet:Yaar Main tuje shock dene wali thu'MSK se milwa kar'but I myself got shock tat ur younger brother of him'Waise y didn't u say us abt dis b4..Says Geet in a breathe

Rohan: Take it Easy Sexy girl'

Geet : answer me

Rohan : I wanted to be like my role model wo is my maan bhai..so I never revealed abt my true identity'But Now I can say EM ROHAN KHURANA

By the way u were about to meet me with ur sumone special..who's dat

Geet : Ohhh'Sshhh..she takes rohan aside from Maan n says Mera Eddy teddy..mera cutie sa dost..tu apne bhai ko mat batana ki I love him'

Rohan : Waattt he shouts

Geet : dheere se.Koi sunn lega

Rohan : ok so tat sumone special to u is my bhai

Geet : yeah

Rohan : ooo Someone is in love huh'So ur my bhabhi..Geet Bhabhi

Geet(blushes) : not still

Both laughs'seeing them laughing Rishi n maan were confused

Rishi : Wats going on man..Thoda humse bhi share kar lo so tat even we will also join in ur laughing therapy

Geet: Sorryy bhai jaan'Hum na bata sakte'Personal hai..Kyu rohan n winks at him

Rohan : jii hann

Meanwhile Indira , samrat , Gunjan , Virat , Manu comes there

Manu sees rohan n literally starts running towards him shouting Bhai bhai..

Rohan hears tat n sees his Choti running..He open his arms to embrace his angel ..His choti

Manu just falls in his arms..n Rohan rotates her on the air n den bring her on the land'n kisses her forehead..n manu kisses his cheeks

Manu : I misses you sooo sooo much bhai..Misse u Misse u

Rohan : awww Choti'Take a breathe

Manu breathes Normallyy n again hugs him n sayd I missed u soo much bhai

Rohan : I missed u more than u choti'

Manu takes out herself from the hug n says Bhai I wanna make u meet wid sumone

Rohan : Kaun

Manu takes rohan towards geet n says ye hai geet'

Rohan : isse toh main janta hu'Choti

Manu : Kaise

Rohan : badi lambi kahani hai..Ghar jaake bolta hu

Manu : okiee n den takes towards virat

Manu : yeh hai Virat..My partner'Sirf mischief's main n yeh ushki sis Gunjan.

Rohan says hello to both n dey two also do d same

Rohan : hey sam..How u doing'

Samrat (sam) : good dude..how u doing'wen did u cum india back

Rohan : me to cool man..Just abhi landing ki aur dekh tumse milne aa gaya

Geet : jhoota' I called him here otherwise he wouldn't be here at this moment

Sam : wohi main sojhu'Ki rohan seedha kaise ho gaya

Rohan : geet kyu jhoot bol rahi ho..<Maine tumhe call kia naki tumne muje

Geet : so wat'I called u here bas

Maan : Chup bilkul Chup..Kyu bache jaise ladd rahe ho'

Geet : par

Maan : bola nah Chup bilkul chup..Rohan tumhare luggage kaha hai..

Rohan : bhai..wo taxi main

Maan : okie'den maan calls out for driver n says him chote sahib ke bags ghar main rakh do aur dadi maa ko keh dena ki hum bahar gaye hai

Rohan : nai bhai'<Muje Dadi ko surprise dena hai'

Maan : chalo thik hai..toh ye luggage abh ke liye Out house main rakh dena samjhe

Driver : ji sahib


Precap :

Maan : ye b tum hi decide karlo jab ki tumne hi plan banaya BINA MUJSE PUCHE

Geet : Har baat Par gussa hona ya mana karna aapki aadat hai naah...Sadu sahi naam rakha hai maine..

Rohan : Geet ye sawal ka jawab mujse pucho,,Bachpan se janta hu unko...

Sorryyy for d delay...N thankuuu tat u all Understood me n gave me liitlle Time...

But now me Good Mood...My all Probs sort out..thanxx 4 ur wishes...

Exam still hai..Plzzz pray for me...

Next update jaldi dena ka try karti hu...

If u wanna give any suggesstions ur most welcome...Do Like n Comment Plzzz

Edited by vanshi_maaneet - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
nice update
so rihan is rohan khurana
younger brother of maan
first when u introduced rohan
i thought he would be in love with geet
but rohan toh yahan maaneet ko mil wayega
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Posted: 12 years ago
nice part
bhai behan aur friends ki mulakat hogayi
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Posted: 12 years ago
part 9
awesome part dear...
cont soon...
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Posted: 12 years ago
cute update..
loved rohan's carefree nature..
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Posted: 12 years ago
very cute update..geet close fren of maan's brother..awsome yaar..pls cont soon..
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Posted: 12 years ago
maine kaha tha rohan jarur maan ka bhai nikelega
nd rohan jaan gaya that geet loves maan
chalo ab dekhte h kya hota h
waiting for next
it was awesome part
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Posted: 12 years ago
so rohan ko surprise dene gayi thi aur khudhi surpised ho gayi...its really lovely...so geet loves maan...whn she will confess her love fr maan...

superb n wonderful update...

loved it very much...

thank u very much fr d lovely update...

eagerly waiting fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...

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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome update sooo maan and rohan are brothers...next update jaldi dena plz
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Posted: 12 years ago
DHINKAAA CHIKAAA
👏
mast updte vanshu

hmmm zada der late ka achha fruit mila😆😆
vt a shock yr
rohan is maan's bro.. vaaahhh
aftr my xams its only ur story's updt m reading... phew!!!!!!!!!!!
achha lga read kr k..
ab nxt jldi dena..😊
waiting...

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