Fantasy4-(Maaneet FF)[Completed] - Page 12

Awsome prt...
bullet hit geet n she lost their baby...very emotional n thrilling prt...i will miss fantasy...
u r a superb writer...god bless u..
will b waitng for epi...

Awsome ff..loved it..
Waiting for n epilogue
update

Oh my Gosh Sara.. its awesome.. Maneet love .. i hv no words... last 2 parts were heavy.. painful.. hope new part brings happiness..some romantic & passioante moments of Maneet

EPILOGUE

She sat in front of the mirror, holding her face and sobbing. Her hair ran down in cascades lining her slightly almost unnoticeable swollen face and her eyes were red as tears ran down incessantly.

The door of her bedroom clicked open, and she saw her husband walk in and close the door behind him. As soon as he caught her eyes, she started howling.

He took off his tie and waistcoat lazily, and flung them on the bed. Glancing at his sobbing wife, he said, in a tired voice,"Aaj kya ho gaya Geet?"

Her cries almost deafened her, as he lay back on the bed in a relaxed posture.

'Aapko toh koi parwa hi nahin hain'. Dekho, kitne aaram se pooch rahe hain," she cribbed without getting up from the dressing table.

"It's one of two things. Either kuch khana hain, ya phir, the usual," he said, with a yawn, and turned over on the bed lazily.

"Maan, I'm ugly," she said, with a hiccup.

"Yup, just as I guessed. The usual," he muttered and then, turned around.

Geet got up from the chair, with her almost 9 month pregnant and bloated stomach and held it with one hand, as she fixed her dupatta and made her way carefully to the bed where her husband lay. She sat down carefully, and said, her eyes trickling tears, "Maan, main completely shapeless ho gayii hoon. You're never going to want me again. I know. Aunty dikhti hoon main. And you're still so'." He trailed away, as Maan finally started paying attention to her words.

"And, I'm still so?" he asked eagerly, as Geet glared at him.

"You know the rest!" she snapped angrily, and said, "Maan, what if I stay like this always? What if I never lose this weight? What if?"

"Geet! Kitna bolti ho tum!I don't want my son to talk continuously like you. He should be more sober like me," he said, with a chuckle, knowing that this would divert Geet.

"Baare aaye'main aapne bete ko boring nahin banne dungi," she said, in a determined voice, when Maan sat up and grabbed her wrist.

"Main boring hoon?" he said angrily, when Geet started howling again.

Maan let go of her wrist quickly, thinking that he had hurt her. He touched her bloated stomach lightly, only to feel a sharp movement.

His eyes shone as he said, "Geet, he just kicked."

Geet rolled her eyes, and said,"That's what he does the whole day and night. Yehi kaam hain shayed iss ko'.battameese kahika'"

"Mere bete ko battameese kaha?" he bit out angrily, when Geet said, "Sirf wohi nahin'usska baap bhi'"

"GEET!!!!" he warned.

"Saach boliyen na Maan, do you want me anymore?" she asked, sadly, looking down at her heavy stomach.

"You have NO idea of the things I have planned for us once he is born," he said, with a smirk, causing Geet to blush.

"I didn't mean that," she said shyly, when Maan retorted, "Didn't you?"

*****

It was after two weeks and 9 hours in labour, that Geet gave birth to the first heir of the Khurana Family. The boy looked like Maan though he had exact eyes like Geet.

It was two months after his birth that Geet made her way to her bedroom after feeding her son and making sure that he was fast asleep with Daadima.

As soon as she entered the room, Maan closed the door, double locked it and pinned her down on the wall.

His smirk said everything, as he murmured, "So, my darling wife, are you ready for me?"

Geet didn't get a chance to register anything, before he picked her up in his arms and carried her off to bed.

And, thus, the never ending night began.

----THE END----

Hence, the end of Fantasy.😭 I hope you guys enjoyed this journey of almost a year as much as I did. This was my first FF and it garnered so much love and support from you all that I was able to open FOUR threads. Thank you so much.😳 I will never forget the love you all gave me for my amateur writing and I will always cherish Fantasy

And, on the bright side, since this is over, A Sudden Change Of Heart is going to start soon. I'll PM you guys.😃

So, for the last time ever on this thread,😭 hit the like button and comment of my Fantasy.

I love you all

Sarzah

AWWW SOO CUTE EPILOGUE LOVED IT

awww 😳
it was such a cutesy cutesy dreamy epilogue 😳
maan, geet n a happy ending 😳 😊
thoroughly enjoyed the entire journey of fantasy 😳 🤗
will miss it terribly though ..!!

awesome lovely epilogue

Beautiful Epilogue Sarzah.
Their never ending nokh jok :D
Battameeze roffflll.
Loved it.
Will miss this FF.
Thanks for this awesome FF :)
*hugz*

Awesum update..
Thanks 4 givin d happy ending..
Loved it..