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Posted: 13 years ago
#31
Nice part dear...liked it so much...cont soon...👍🏼😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
#32
nteresting...continue soon..😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
#33
love the story

and mahi too..she is true copy of geet and maan

do continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
#34
Congratulation for new FF
awesome, brilliant parts
loved them
loved mahi
she is so cute
maaneet separated for 10yrs but y what happen in past
hmmm
sameera hate her , he he
poor geet
continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
#35
thnx guys
for all ur love n support
ur like n comments r really motivating!!

i m writing a ff for d first tym
plus m nt tht grt wid d comp.. so plz ny of u who s already written one plz help me out..

for d time being plz bkmrk d link..
once i get comfy wid d system.. i ll pm regularly
n answer all comments too

i ll updt d link on fb.. so u can catch up wid it der
heres d link

plz ignore d mistakes
n lemme know wer i can improve
dis isnt a long ff.. max 30-35 parts

heres d nxt part.. njoy it

CHAPTER 5

As promised geet was bk in a few minutes.. she d changed into a simple bt pretty baby pink Patiala suit.. tht did bring bk memories of our initial days.. her simplicity was wht attracted me.. nd her beautiful hazel eyes expreseed d deepest n innermost feelings of her heart.. infact I had alwaz prided myself on being able 2 read her eyes.. which spoke volumes abt her heart coz vocally she d nvr manage 2 voice her feelings!!

But tht was b4 evrythng changed.. I wonder whther I read her wrong or tht I nvr really managed it ryt..

Maahi came ovr 2 geet

"maa. Dad n I just made a dream house!!"

" dad.. maan u accepted maahi as ur daughter!!"

"damn it geet.. u know its nt gonna happen.."

"maa did u know dad s architect too n he designed d dome stadium too?"

"yes beta.. he s awesm at his work.. but sweety now go n complete ur homework.. '

"but maa.."

"maahi.. he has cm here 2 talk 2 me.."

"ok.. "

"wud u like sm coffee?" geet s musical voice broke my thots.. her voice was no less seductive.. her voice started his day n her moans ended his nyts..

Stop it maan.. I chided myself.. I was here for a purpose..

"yup.. I cud do wid one n so cud u.. though I must confess.. black coffee n u!!!"

"well.. tastes change wid time.."

"who knows tht better than me.." I added bitterly.. I was supposed 2 b hers 4evr.. bt tht had changed..

Geets silence hurt me despite evrythng.. I still wanted her 2 tell me I was wrong.. bt tht dint happen.. as she walked into d kitchen.. n I followed her

It was deja vu.. it was on days like dese wen geet wud b in d kitchen.. n I d cm fm behind n hug her, kiss her.. n leave d food behind coz we d nvr be able 2 keep our hands off each odr.. n..

My cell buzzed 2 get me out of my trance.. it was sameera.. I walked out n attended d call.. she was angry at me btw en I told her tht I was abt 2 talk 2 geet.. she calmed a bit bt told me 2 hurry up for d dinner

I hv 2 get done wid dis..

She gave me my cup of coffee..n twas perfect as ever.. bt wht caught my eyes was her troubled n stressed out appearance..

"umm.. so hw long have u been waiting?"

"Quite sm tym nw.. rememner we had an appointment at 5"

" we really are strangers.. 2 need appointments" d sarcasm evident in her voice..

I stayed quite.. nt wanting 2 answer tht

"well u know y m here"

"r u planning 2 accept maahi"

"geet.. u know tht aint happening.. infact I want 2 end all dis chaos..

Maahi enterd just in tym " maa will v b havin dinner 2gthr? Hw abt pasta"

"maahi sweety.. we ll talk abt it later.."

" but maa.. "

" just do as ur mom says.." I added not able 2 bear thngs getting outta my ctrl..

" don't u interfere between me n my mom.. u womanizer!!"

"maahi.."

Shocked as I was.. it was geet who scolded maahi..

" apologize ryt nw.. wer r ur manners?"

"no mom.. dts wht everybody at school calls him.. they say he doesn't care for us thts y he has so many girl frdz.."

N den she burst out into tears..

Geet took her to her room to pacify her.. while I walked arnd restlessly in d hall..

Maahi words echoing in my head.. as much as I hated d entire situatn.. I nvr wanted dem hurt!!

Arnd an hr hr later geet walked.. n was surprised 2 c maan still der

" u r still here.. oh sorry we r yet 2 talk?!!"

"damn it geet.. hw is maahi..?"

"exhausted n sleepy"

" I m sorry.. I thot she knew.."

"knew wht.."

"tht I m .. nt her father.."

"but u r.."

"geet.. we r done wid dis.. its nt gonna change nythng.. forget it.. I guess today just isn't ryt 2 talk abt nythng.. u shud rest"

"u still haven't lost ur charm.. hv u"

"oh no need 2 flatter me geet.. u know ur effect on me.. ur beauty had its own charm.. thts y I cudnt trust u.. knowing u d find sm1 else 2 add a lil excitement 2 our marriage"



Edited by nats0101 - 13 years ago
rubykatariya thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
#36
nice ff i read it in 1 go
its total different concept
loveit
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Posted: 13 years ago
#37
i want to kick maan he is so rude with his baby doll and lady love
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Posted: 13 years ago
#38
Awesome concept.. Sounds different... Update soon.. Wanna read wht happens next?
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Posted: 13 years ago
#39
Nice one... continue soon cant see maneeet seprated for long... kya kare maneet ka jadu hi kuch aisa hai ...thnx fr the pm...😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
#40
pls update the next part soon. Sounds very interesting.
Can't see maan n Geet in pain..

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