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Posted: 13 years ago
Liked it ! Wat happen after that ? Continue soon !
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ohh lovely flashback...then everything went fine then how it breaks...ohh i cant wait...
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Posted: 13 years ago
Beautiful update...
Geet s confused about maan's behaviour..
wat he wants from her???even he s unaware of it...
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Posted: 13 years ago
hey guys.. m bk again
50 pgs done n 100 like on an updt..
sound grt..
here's d nxt part..
c ya tom..
ps the past is gonna b out soon!!


CHAPTER 19

Maan

As we entered hoshiarpur evry1 s demenour changed!! Bauji seemed 2 4gt his illness n seemed more alert even waving at a few ppl.. after all mohinder handa still had d respect of d ppl of hoshiarpur!! Geet was out of her trance n a smile on her face, probably remembering her childhood days!! Maahi on d oder hand seemed sad.. guess she was expecting smthng else

As we entered d grand entrance of d handa haveli..

"maa.. we r gonna stay here?"

"yes dear..n u wil luv it here.."

Though geet answered maahi, her voice lacked d conviction..

"it luks like a dump!!" maahi exclaimed..

'twas hard to disagree wid her.. Even frm d last tym I hd seen it.. der was a horrible transformation of d haveli.. d plants were overgrown almost covering d entrance.. d lawn too looked unkept..!! It needed more thn just a few thngs!!

"it was a beautiful place wen ur mother was young.. nd it can b.. wid d ryt attitude!!" bauji added

N not to mention a few crores.. I thot!! hw much bauji was in love wid his inheritance.. n he nvr gave On it.. who'd know better thn me..

But I dint want maahi to think of it tht way..

"maahi.. it's a part of ur heritage from ur mother's family n u its only heir.. so u shud b proud of it!! I added..

"unless u n mom hv another kid!!" maahi countered..

Oh dis gal never gave up.. bt ryt nw I dint want to again restart d whole issue n create a scene.. already geet seemed to b uncomfortable n I dint want to add to it..

Luckily we had reached d mansion n atleast it seemed fyn.. it was two storey grand building.. built in d nineteenth century.. a legacy of d handas!! The care takers welcmd us..

In order to break d sudden awkwardness.. I tried to change d topic.. I asked maahi to help me unload d luggage while geet helped bauji settle in!! finally as we finished, i was exhausted bth wid d luggage n maahi's questions.. I realized she was very observant, inquisitive n a confident kid!!

"did u n mom cm here often?"

I remembered hw we used 2 land up here almost evry month as geet used 2 worry abt bauji as he dint keep well esp aftr our marriage n tht he was staying here alone bothered her a lot.. it used 2 b a break fm our schedules n we njoyd our tym here inspite of d fact tht bauji n me were only formally cordial!!

"yeah.. often.." I finally answered as I realized maahi was waiting 4 one..

"nanu doesn't like u ryt nor u him?"

"I guess u shud ask him!"

"but u know d reason na? is it bcoz of me?"

Her question shook me.. I hadn't realized tht all dese circumstances were affecting her too.. or probably previously I was nvr bothered.. bt nw aftr knowing her my heart had accepted a fact tht whtever happened btwn me n geet, maahi was innocent..

I closed my eyes trying to think of an answer

"its nt your fault.. its just me I guess!!"

"sorry??"

"I mean bauji nevr considered me worth ur mother.. n probably I wasn't too.."

"thts weird.. I don't know abt him.. but I like u!!"

Well her approval made me feel so much better.. she had inherited her mother's innocence n charm!!

"so wer did u n maa meet d first tym?"

"tht's enuf maahi.. lets get sm work done.." it was geet's voice which interrupted us.. her eye met mine n from her expression I cud guess she'd heard d question n was probably remembering dose beautiful memories too.. just as I was!!

"yes maahi.. lets help ur mother.. ders a lot 2 b done!!"

Geet

After settling bauji in, I had cm out to help maan n maahi wen I heard maahi questioning maan.. n heard him tk all d blame on himself.. I stood thr numb wid d pain in his voice.. n for once I felt probably he too missed our 2gethrness!! Bt wen maahi questioned him abt our first meeting..i knew I had to interrupt.. it brought bk dose memories n remembering dem now wud just mk d situatn more vulnerable for me thn it already was..

As we settled in.. maahi was impressed wid d grandeur of d place.. it lacked maintenance bt still its royalty shone thru.. I cud imagine bauji attachment to dis place n his desire to get it bk 2 its original state bt sadly I cud nvr work out dt type of finances!!

While I was busy setting up d room.. I realized maan was nt thr.. did he just leave without telling us? Without saying a good-bye to me?!!!!!!!!!!

I suddenly felt so restless n even angry.. hw cud he just leave us like tht.. agreed he had already done more thn he shud hv.. bt still..

Bt then he appeared talkin on d phone n felt my whole body relax.. though I wanted 2 really shout at him bt..

"ummm. Geet.. I guess we shud arrange for lunch!! its quite late n bauji cud rest aftr tht"


He seemed to b trying 2 avoid ny questions from me.. I wondered whose call it was.. den suddenly I realized it cud b sameera.. I fought hard dose tears trying to escape my eyes..


Nt wanting to say anything.. I just nodded n left to prepare lunch!!

Edited by nats0101 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
wow... another update...

that was awesome... i really loved the convo between Maan and Maahi... and loved the way Maan took all blames on self... and Geet just understanding the undisclosed pain in his voice...

beautiful emotions... eagerly waiting for tomorrow
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Posted: 13 years ago
sorry for the late reply but awesome updates dear and ch 19 is too gud...cont soon dear👏
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wow lovely update...in this confusion the only heart which was breaking and losing her innocence is maahi...im feeling for her...wat hapen in the past...oh...i cant wait...
Edited by Desigirls12 - 13 years ago
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lovely update...in all this confusion, one heart is breaking and losing her innocence.that is maahi...i love the update...wat hapen in past that made three hearts to suffer...waiting
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Posted: 13 years ago
I like the way the story is moving...

Would like to see more of exactly what Geet has told Maahi about Maan and her...

She's a 10yr old kid and an age of 10 is not quite ignorant to stuff... if she doesnt know much then what has she been thinking about him all these years, how come she still has the idea that Geet and Maan might have another kid...

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