**FLAMES OF DESIRE** MG FF #4 IMP NOTE on page 151 - Page 56

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: khushi1022



my bro is going back to banglor 2mrw so whole day wil b bzy wid him
isliye online ane ka chance hi ni

oh ok..
pr ye update to kre
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Appy


i knw she'll be a bit late pr aaj to pakka kr degi..
i think so..😕
waise tm kl kyo nai padh paogi???😲



my bro is going back to banglore 2mrw
so sara din unke sath bzy rhungi so no chance to cum online n read d update
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: khushi1022



my bro is going back to banglore 2mrw
so sara din unke sath bzy rhungi so no chance to cum online n read d update

replied in last page dear..
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Appy


oh ok..
pr ye update to kre



hehehe...
U guys keep on waitng
me off to bed wil read it on monday tb tk to pakka update kr degi

bye tke care

gud nyt
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: khushi1022



hehehe...
U guys keep on waitng
me off to bed wil read it on monday tb tk to pakka update kr degi

bye tke care

gud nyt

bye..
gudnite dear..😃
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: mahimaneet

baby mai update kar rahi hu na

or offline ho gai
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Posted: 13 years ago
thank u so much for all the likes and comments...loved it😊
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Posted: 13 years ago

FLAMES OF DESIRE

PART-26
(pls dont throw jootis n chappals at me after reading this)
n also sorry for being late as IF was not allowing me put pics...so sorry khushi, ameenaforeva, urme,maan-ki-jaan, mkc123, priya291188, smallville n appy to keep u waiting...

"maan chodiye mujhe" she cried hitting his chest with her small fist...as he dangerously took hold of her hands pinning them above her head...

"I am fed up of you geet" he gritted his teeth...making her look at him with pain...she trembled and pushed him more vigruously...as she knew he is hell angry and will be harsh on her...she was in panic state...and started crying loudly, asking him to leave her...but maan was in his trance, a state where he forgot that however he tries to hurt her...but at the end he would be the one regretting...and this time a big one...

Suddenly geet screamed loudly...as his nails digged right into her flesh, letting the blood ooze out of it...he still pressed himself closer, holding her hands firm above her head...and slammed his rough lips on her's...she frozed on the spot, feeling his rough ones...didnt know what to do, as the panic took over her sanity...she gave up fighting, wobbled feeling helpless as he started devouring her lips...assaulting it, showing his manly power...her tears where continously flowing, as she blinked her eyes letting them flow...her vision was getting blurred, still she kept looking at his face, trying to understand his anger...
She whimpered loudly as he bit her lower lip, seeking entry for his tongue...as soon as he entered her mouth, he scooped her in his arms...snacking his arms on her back, glueing her completely to his firm body...leaving no gap even for air to invade between them...her hands came down...lifelessly hanging on the side of her body...geet felt him tilting his head, as he probed deep inside her mouth, touching her inner throat with his tongue...sucking her mouth thoroughly, carnally licking every nook and corner...making her breathless...

"kyu mujhe itna gussa dilati ho" he complained in her mouth...as he hugged her tightly, still not leaving her lips...nibbling on it harshly...wanting her to react...

But geet was numb...she didnt had any energy left in her to even protest, as responding to his kiss was long lost desire now...how could she respond to his brutal kiss...

"respond me damit" he screamed leaving her lips...looking at her pale face...he caressed her cheeks, pushing her messy hair behind...again kissing her harshly...
He was raged to satisfy his unknown ego...he himself didnt knew what he was proving by doing this...he kept nibling on her plum, bruised lips...sucking and licking it madly...

"i am tired of you geet...tumhe sambhalte sambhalte mai thak gaya hu..." he broke away from her lips...leaning their foreheads together...breathing heavily...then saw her tears stricken face...he leaned in, kissing her tears away...

"shadi ke baad kaise sambhalunga tumhe" he cried feeling guilty, helpless for not able to control his anger...he instantly hugged her, showing his submission...trying to sooth her soul which he himself hurted badly...

"I wont marry you" maan heard her speak in a low trembling voice...he looked at her surprised, yet stunned with her words...

"kya kaha tumne" he pulled out of the hug and looked at her face, still holding her around her waist...getting this chance, geet pushed him away gathering her remaining strength...

"I said I wont marry you" she meekly said still looking down...then looked here and there searching for her duppatta...her fresh tears started flowing through her hazels, not able to bear maan's hatred...she clumsily started searching for her duppatta, hiding her torso with her hands...her tears blurred her vision, as she time to time wiped them away...hurrying to get her duppatta and leave from there, before maan hurts her again...

Maan felt insulted with her denial to marry him at this stage...the litle bit of guilt he felt washed away...as pure rage took over his mental ability again...he walked towards her like a possessed man...yes he was addicted to her...and he always belived that she belonged him and only him...and now her denial provoked the beast in side him...as soon as he reached her weak shivering form...he grabbed her arms harshly, pulling her close to his body...

"dare you say that again" he spit those words on her face...as there gaze met...maan hated to see her hazel which earlier only spoke her innocence and love for him, but now only hurt and hatred replaced those emotions...

"I wont marry you" she said it again, challenging his ego...with this he harshly pushed her to the wall...as geet screamed with the pain she felt with the impact...

"you have no right to deny me geet...you only belong to me" he spoke with sheer anger...as geet closed her eyes feeling his heated breath on her face...but she knew she has to fight back somehow...she tried pushing him away...feeling disgusted with the way he was insulting her...

"you hate me...why will I marry you" she whimpered in his arms, trying to pray off his hands from her body...

"I don't hate you jaan" he cupped her face in his palms...trying to make her understand...

But it was too late for an apology...geet for the first time didn't liked his touch on her body...she was angry with him, for using her as he wants..."jab chaha pyar tab kar liya, aur jab chaha tab gussa ho gaye...aur jab chaha, jaha chaha waha, apni jarurate puri karli chu ke"....yes now she felt he everytime lusted her...and now also didn't wanted to let her go becoz of his anger...as his anger never showed any sign of his love or helplessness to make her understand his side...

Geet was in her reveries, when she felt his lips pecking her lightly, bringing her out of her trance...she looked at him with blank face as he hugged her passionately...trying to show his love over his anger...he caressed her back, nuzzling his face in the crook of her neck...

"leave me" she spoke sternly...but it didn't reach his ears, as he was way to drowned in the pool of emotions...he kissed her ears, sucking her earlobe, nibbling on it...as his hands went to her lower back...caressing sensuously the flesh just above her buttocks...he pressed her tightly down, glueing there lower body dangerously close...making her feel his thrombing manhood poking near her abdomen...she took a sharp gasp, astonished with his audacity...as he grinded himself, feeling her every nerve getting alive under his touch...

"I love you jaan" she heard him whisper huskily, as his tongue probed her ears...giving her goosebumps all over her body...she hated the way her body reacted to his assault...she knew she was very much aroused for him...but the insult she went through from the time he dragged her here, got very deep rooted in her brain...

"I said don't touch me" she said pushing him harshly, as he fumbled on his steps back...

He looked at her in shock, seeing her this side for the very first time...as he belived that she can never get angry on him to a level of hatred...but now he was perplexed seeing the amount of hatred ozzing out of those innocent hazels...

"I know you hate me...and you will always hurt me for no reason...I will never marry you...I hate the way you touch me and get away with your needs...you only lust me I know" she broked down crying madly...hiding her face in her palm...not able to face this reality...

Suddenly she felt herself being carried away...she opened her eyes meeting his blank face...she got scared with his intentions as he placed her on his bed...she moved back fearing him, as he leaned on her climbing on the bed...he pulled her feet, making her lie down, as he hovered over her dangerously looking at her face...making her close her eyes fearing the consequences now...

"do you really think I lust you????" he spoke letting his breath fall on her lips...waiting for her answer...but geet didn't dared to answer him again, or even look at his face...

"I will show you what lust is" he uttered licking her lips with the tip of his toungue...making her shierk with fear...

"you think I satisfy my needs by touching you????" he grabbed her one of her breast in his palm, and squeezed it harshly...as she bit her lips subsiding the painfull moan...but he didn't stopped, taking the bud in between his two fingers he pinched it roughly over her kurti...as she arched her back, giving an unknown response to this brutal yet pleasurable assault...

"you think I hate you????" he kissed her lips, taking them in his mouth...smooching her passionately...then took her lower lips in between his lips, and started nibbling on it...feeling her sweetness...he was not in a hurry, just kissed her sensuously trying to prove his point...her pulm bruised lips where tasting unbelivablely honey sweet...as he urged to taste it more and more...he probed her mouth easily, as geet gave up fighting, and even responding...but could not help herself as her body betrayed her showing her arousal...he toyyed his tongue with her, twisting them...playing it erotically, by taking her tongue in his mouth and sucking on it thoroughly...his hands involuntarily roamed on her breast. caressing and squeezing firmly...making geet close her droopy eyes, leaning her head back...letting him do watever he wants...

"do you really think I will hurt you????" he said brushing his lips on her closed eyes...wanting them to meet his...

"how can I hurt you geet" he started planting slow passionate kisses on her face...as his hands started moving down from her breast towards her navel...he pushed the kurti aside from her navel...and started caressing it, making patterns with his long sexy fingers...geet sucked her breath in, as his hand moved dangerously down in her salwar...she opened her eyes meeting his closed ones...as he was busy feasting on her cleavage...with his other hand he pulled her dori open, and pulled her one of the sleeve down...exposing her shoulder to his lips...he gave several love bites on her half exposed breast, licking his way up to her shoulder, lingering his tongue all over it...his hands where doing wonders down, caressing her over her panty...feeling her wetness just for him...

"nobody can make you feel this way geet" he caressed her wetness making her arch her body close to his...as the devastating sensation on her private parts, took over her senses...geet involuntarily spread her legs, making him come in between her legs...she could feel his hard manhood playing around her thighs...

She knew they are crossing there limits, but she felt her self to much drugged with his passion...maan again moved towards her lips, capturing it for a slow passionate one...as his hand started rubbing her up and down...he so much wanted to make love to her right at this moment...but he knew he need to control...not for him but only for her...for her innocence...as he knew she wont be able to understand his desire...

Her eyes grew wide open when she felt his fingers sliding its way in her panty...she looked at him with pure disgust...but maan was to much intoxicated feeling her hot wet flesh, that even he knew she wont agree for this, but still he could not hold back the urge to feel her hidden secrets...what he only dreamed for so many days...he bit her lips, as his fingers glide through the cervix of her vaginal lips...the intimate touch provoke the beast inside him, as he started kissing her madly...making her wriggle under him in panic...she was raged and hurt with his actions...as he again proved her how much he lusts over her body...

"I said don't touch me...its feels so much disgusting" saying she pushed him away, gathering her wits...covering herself with her dress, she climbed down from the bed...hurrying for her duppatta...not wanting to leave this chance to get away from him...maan hurriedly went to her...and took hold of her wrist...

"I am sorry...i went too far..." he said helplessly...but geet prayed his hand away...

"don't touch me please...i don't like you touching me" she whimpered fearing his outburst...moving back as he cornered her yet again...

"you don't like me touching you?????" he said gritting his teeth, as he pinned her to the wall...holding her wrist above her head...

"please leave me" she cried...

"not before you answer me for the last time" he made his hold harsh on her already bleeding hands...but he was not bothered this time with her pain...as whatever way he tried making her understand but she acted all the same...denying him everytime...his ego was hurt badly...geet denying his touch, that was the hard blow to his self esteem...

"yes I don't like your touch" her meek teary voice gave away her inner turmoil...but how could she back away now...after getting so much humiliated for no reason...

Her answer made him step back, away from her...creating huge distance between their bodies...geet could feel the hurt in his eyes with her denial...but she was helpless because of his anger...so much of harshness she never went through ever in her life, which maan is forcing on her now...his anger, his words scared the hell out of her...on the other side maan turned around facing his back to her...hiding the tears which came out of his eyes for the first time because of this unbearable pain of her hatred towards him...

Geet knew he was hurt...and now she felt the urge to let go off her fear and hug him madly...because the pain she felt with his harsh words now felt nothing compared to the pain she is feeling now to part away from him...determined to sought this, she moved ahead to hug him...but stood froze when she heard him speak...

"leave" he said hurriedly...fearing to breakdown before her...the emotional turmoil was creating havoc in him...making him do such things which he could regret later...

Geet stood there rooted looking at his back...not wanting to leave, as she knew if she leaves now, she wont be able to see him for next 5 days...and parting away like this meant, breaking there relationship...

"I said leave now" he shouted, making her jump back with fear...as geet ran out crying madly...not able to take this much stress and hatred...

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precap:- parting away

hello dearies...i know sorry will be a small word to seek any apology for my late lateefy...but there was sm real prblm dats y i cud not update...

now coming back to my update...i know its sad update...but it was very much needed now...but dont worry u can trust me wid this ff...i wont spoil the essence of it...
(guys if u feel this ff boring or the characters are not presented well, then let me know properly...as i am getting too confused wid the response for geet's character...or else i need to wind up this ff soon...so keep that in mind before commenting)
this update is dedicated to my frnds who support me wid my every pagal panti😆...appy, 18mypride, 3295, mahi-ve, aananyagurti, kawaii.geet, khushi1022, sobia4maaneet, jostnajonn09 and for all who waited for my update...n specially for those three silent readers who commented for the very first time...
love u so much dears...for ur support and love...
now give me lots of likes and comments...wil wait for ur response...and again write anything besides an awesome or any one word comment😆...
love u lots
varsha😃

Edited by mahimaneet - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
loved it yar thanks update milgae finally 😛 i want maan to regret he was forcing her even though i know they will be back together but still i want maan to go after her geet is to innocent and naive
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Posted: 13 years ago
Superb Update !! 😃 !!

Ohh Geet And Maan

Oh God Whats Gunna Happen Now 😲

Cant Wait =D

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