SS- Bhaag D.K. Bose. no no Geet lst pt & epi pg 9 - Page 4

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Posted: 13 years ago
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SO IT WAS ALL MAAN'S PLAN TO MAKE HER CONFESS HER DREAM
MUST SAY IT WAS WELL DONE
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Posted: 13 years ago
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loved the plan made by maan to make her confess...
thanks for the pm...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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maan the hitler 😆

nyc part ...great start !!!

so all thats to make her confesss 😲...

great 👏⭐️

Edited by aziza_ahmed - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Maan hugged him back and said yash please . yeh thank you ki koi zaroorath nahi hai. . as maan realeased from the hug he said. Ab sab kuch teek hogaya hai . aur haan tum mujhpe naraaz nahi ho na ki meine geet pe chillaya. Agar hai tho mujhe maaf karna. Par mere paas auur koi raastha nahi tha to make her confess.

Nahi maan mein thumpe naaraz kaise ho akthi hoon.

Teek hai tho mein chaltha hoon.

PART 4 ( LAST PART )

Papa ! geet gasped seeing her father standing right in froint of her eyes with tears.

Kya mein ithna bura hoon ? bolo geet

Nahi papa aisa nahi hain.

Phir kaisa hain beta ? tumne yeh soch kaise liye ki main tumhe apni marzi se jaane nahi doonga ! huh ?

Papa wo main '''

Geet mein ithna bhi bura nahi hoon ki mein apni beti ki khushi kea age parampara ko dekhungoi. Wo Parampara tumhare saamne kuch nahi hain.

Are meine thumhe law padne ko kaha kyuinki mujhe laga tha ki thum bhi usi mein interested ho .

Papa !!

Lekin meine ek bahuth badi galthi kiya hain. Mujhe thumse puchna chahiye tha. Lekin thum tho aake mujhe batha sakthi thi naa.

Papa mujhe dar lag raha tha !

Are kaise dar ! apni pap se daregi thu kya ? haan mein maantha hoon ki mein bahuth strict hoon lekin idska mathlab yeh tho nahin kit hum mujse dar jaaogi.

Papa ' geet rushed and hugged her father really tight.

Ithna hi samaj paaye ho kya mujhe ? saying so he embraced geet.

I'm sorry papa .. mujhe maaf kardo.

Are pagli isme maafi maangne ki kya baath hai ? they broke the hug.

Patha hai geet. Thum bilkul apni mama pe gayi ho. Wo bhi apni dil ki baath kisi se share nahi karthi.

Papa aap bhi na.

Mohinder laid his hand on her head.

Jaao beta jaake jeele apni zindagi ko.

Thanks papa said geet with happiness oozing out.

Thumhe thanks mujhe nahi maan ko kehna chahiye.

Maan ?? geet asked questioningly

Haan beta. Uski wajah se hi mujhe yeh sab patha chala.

Within a second all the hatred geet had for maan turned into admiration.

Excuse me may I come in.

Maan looked up and was shocked to see geet in his office.

Geet , thum yahaan ?

Wo mujhe aapse kuch baath karni thi !

Ab aise khade khde mere saath baath karogi ya phir baitke karogi.

Uff aap seedhe seedhe mujhe baitne ke loiye nahi kahenge kya ?

Maan smiled a bit. Baito.

Bathaao kya baath hain.

Wo'''' thanks maan

Kis ke liye maan asked smirking.

Are aap bhi na ! aap jaanthe nahi kya main kis ke bare mein baath kar rahi hoon.

Sorry nahi.

Tho main hi batha dethi hoon ki aapne jo meri help kiya haina uske liye.

Kaunasa help ?

Maan !!

Accha accha teek hai. I was just joking.

Aap joke bhi karthe ho kya ?

Geet !!!

Ok ok !! sorry.

Waise thum kya logi ? coffee tea, kuch vagera.

Are nahi , kuch nahi chahiye.

Just then maan received a call.

After attending it he turned towards geet.

Geet ek emergency hain. Mujhe court jaana hoga isiliye chaltha hoon. ok . hum baadh mein milthe hai.

Ek second ek second.

Aise mein aapko jaane nahi doongi.

Accha, par kyun.

Are, aapne meri ithni badi help kiya hain , uske liye mujhe aapko kuch dena hi hoga na.

Geet aisa kuch nahi hain.

Aisa hi hain. Ab jaldi batha dijiye. Mein kuch bhi dungi aapko.

Kuch bhi ?

Haan haan kuch bhi ! maang ke tho dekho.

Just then geet felt that she saw a wicked glint in maans eyes but she just ignored it.

Dekhlo geet. Aur baadh mein apni promise math bhoolna.

Are geet handa apni jaan bhi degi aap ke liye.

Mein thumhari jaa leke kya karoonga. Sirf jail jaaoonga.

Maan mazak chodiya aur jaldhi bathayiye.

Teek hai. Mujhe jo cheez chahiye use thumhari next birth day par maangoonga.

Are lekin wo tho agle saal hai.

Koi baath nahi.

Waise birth day ke din aapko hoi mujhe gift dena hoga. Aur aap hai ki mujhse gift maang rahe ho.

Wo aisa hi kuch gift hai jo sirf thum mujhe de sakthi ho.

Accha . teek hai done.

Ok ab main cahltha hoon. aur haan apna promise math bhoolna miss. mogambo. warna yeh hitler naaraz ho jaayega.

Next second the impossible happened . maan just winked at her and left leaving geet spell bounded.


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EPILOGUE :

Geets monolougue :

Finally the day has arrived. The day I had been waiting for my whole life. The day I'm releasing my first novel. It feels really wonderful you know. I am here sitting on the diaz with other delegates woith the lauch of my new novel - CHRONICLES OF WOMEN.

I saw my family sitting in the front row. Especially my father who had happiness in his eyes. His eyes were conveying that he was really proud of me. Yes this is the moment I've been waiting for.

And now let uas welcome MRS. GEET MAAN SINGH KHURANA to speak a few words.

I turned to my right and saw my prince charming, my husband , my maan.

That birthday was an unforgettable one. Maan had proposed me. And the gift he was asking for was my love. Eventhough I had started liking him I was a bit hesitant. But he promised me that he'll wait. And after I completed my masters in literature I was head over heals in love with him. And now after being married here I' releasing my first novel with maan's support and care.

End of monologue.

Mrs . hitler aise hi dekhthe rahoge ya phir aage bhi jaaoge.

Maan yeh chidane ka waqth hai kya /

Geet ab jaldhi jaao warna aapke papa mr. mogambo naraaz ho jaayenge.

Maan aap bhi na. saying so geet rose from her seat and moved forward.

But suddenly she became nervous. She got a bit tensewd.

She turned around and maan gave her a confident look which made akll her fears dissapera.

And then she moved forward confidently to give her speech.

---THE END---


well that is the end of this ss . uff finally i've completed one.

pls hit the like button and leave ur comments.

pls read the note on my other ff miss hspur express- the imperfection.

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/2946970/ff-ms-hspur-exp-the-imperfection-pt11-pg-42


Edited by sarkh26 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#35
lovely story
finally geet's novel is released

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Posted: 13 years ago
#36
loved the end n the epilogue...

lovely SS...


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Posted: 13 years ago
#37

woow nice end yaar ...

he asked for her love ...

great
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Posted: 13 years ago
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awesum dear

thanx for the PM...
keep writing..🤗
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Srini awesome update dear..😃 Thanks for the PM..
Keep it up..🤗
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Posted: 13 years ago
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awesome ss and ending is superb

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