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-lakshmi-

@-lakshmi-

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+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#731

this was such a magical update... usually in a part there will be a line or two which touches our heart but this time if i have to tell my fav line i will have to copy ur whole part😉... it had such a beautiful play of words ke kya kehne... hum pehle hi aapke ghayal the ki iske baad am 🤢

baaki thodi si kasar agar bachi thi tho aapke maan ne wo bhi poora kar diya, by let going his past poonam , by accepting that she was not made for him, by accepting geet wholeheartedly ...

a big hug for u from my side for this part🤗

waiting for the next magical part

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susi

@susi

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Posted: 13 years ago

#732

maan's situation was explained nicely

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mandymore

@mandymore

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+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#733

Beautiful prt di...
frm maan's realization of his love 4 geet till he let go of poonam was magical...
waitng 4 reality check...

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Niharika

@Niharika.Nair

Rocker

+ 9

Posted: 13 years ago

#734

It was a very beautiful depiction of Maan's feelings and the best part is that it was slow and genuine transition!! well written dear...

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Anubhuti

@tellyme

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+ 18

Posted: 13 years ago

#735

Oh dear... This was an awesome part and I have no words for it...

Just wonderful..

In such busy schedule too you can write such an awesome update... I bow

Freeing poonam was the best part... Yes, only if he free poonam, he can embrace Geet whole heartedly which he madly wants to do now...

As he want to be truly and completely in love with her...

He knows she deserve his whole heart and not part of it , so it was necessary to free Poonam from his heart.

And the small hilarious thought of what Vicky and Geet would think about star... Haha..

Song combination was brilliant...

Both poems were great too.

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sweet scorpio

@sweet scorpio

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#736

the way you potrayed maan's love is just amazing

that was touchy

continue soon

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maaneetfanatic

@maaneetfanatic

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#737

OMG I LOVED IT. IT WAS SO TOUCHING AND BEAUTIFUL. AND THE WAY THAT HE TALKED TO POONAM WAS BRILLIANT. GREAT JOB WRITING THIS PART HUN.

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crazydream

@crazydream

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#738

Zabardast update.
Woh din aa gaya jiska intezaar tha..

Realizations of feelings...
Maan in true sense realised how
Important is Geet in hos life.. That
She completes him... N that he is
Irrovacably fallen in luv wid his
Cite little yet mature wife n her antics.

All the songs in addition to this update
Added beauty to this part n enhanced Maan
Feeling.

Ab aage kya hoga???

N time to open up a new thread.

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anks_ams

@anks_ams

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#739

wow finally maan realised his love for geet

awesome update ...now cant wait for the next one:)

update soon...

i'm waiting eagerly!

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soumya.99

@soumya.99

Beginner

Posted: 13 years ago

#740

Wonderfully written di... Maan's feelings wer brought out really really wel di... His litl talk wit poonam ws so luvly :-). tnx for the update.. I wish der ws a bit of maaneet talk in dis... Bt, nw eager for nxt

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