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mayashri

@mayashrisawant7

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#751

so so so sweet yar i cant wait for next update di pls jaldi se next update krna whenever u got good tyme and all the best

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maansee

@maansee

Sparkler

Posted: 13 years ago

#752

finally maan accepted ..right well said. poonum to uske liye bani hi nahi thi . agar bani hoti to jati ky. he got his real humsafar...

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Miss-Riz

@Miss-Riz

Navigator

Posted: 13 years ago

#753

awesome updates just read the last 2 parts updated both really good :-)

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KrishnaSourav

@AayaTohModiJi

Achiever

+ 10

Posted: 13 years ago

#754

awesome, brilliant , beautiful part
loved it
loved maan's self thought and slowly slowly maan realized geet's presence
he is missing geet badly
geet also in same condition
but finally maan let poonam free and understand geet is his soul mate
waiting for the meeting
continue soon

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vaninair95

@vaninair95

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#755

o dat was an awesum update...i njoyd it thoroughly...just want very sooon maaneeet 2gether...fast plsss

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gudmeet

@gudmeet

Navigator

Posted: 13 years ago

#756

excellent work

how well u have described his realisaion

keep up the good work and update soon

and i will pray that all ur poblems in ur work get solved out

thank u so much for such an amazing story

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majaam00

@majaam00

Beginner

Posted: 13 years ago

#757

Loved the update thoroughly...
Wen i read the precap in last update...i was like oh no maaneet scene...will b slow...etc.etc...
But this was super...each and every thot of maan was touching...
And the best part in this whole ff is the lines he told to poonam without hurting any of them
Loved it...i always wanted geet to b more special than poonam to him and u gave tat in a beautiful way
Thank u..plzzz update soon...

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aarthi

@Aarthi_01

Sparkler

+ 7

Posted: 13 years ago

#758

di i just remembered this Tamil song i hope this suits the situation...

[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=XeRwe6eFb1s[/YOUTUBE]

Newyork Nagaram urangum neram thanimai adarnthathu
Paniyum Padarnthathu'
Kappal Erangiye kattrum karaiyil nadanthathu!
Nangu kannadi suvarkalukulle nanum mezlukuvarthiyum'
Thanimai thanimaiyo' Kodumai kodumaiyo'

Its night in New York City

Night is full of mist now'

And wind comes via ship and its

Walking on the streets now..

But in my room now'its only me and some candles

Oh it's very lonely'and lonely is pain'

Pechellam thalatu pola ennai uranga vaike ne illai

thinamum oru mutham thanthu kalai kapi koduka ne illai
vizliyil vizlum thusi thannai navaal eduka ne engu illai
manathil azlum kuzlapam thannai theerka ne enge illai
Nan enge neyum anga
Entha thanimayil nimishangal varushamanatheno!

You are not here to sing me a lori

And make me sleep'

You are not here' to give'me a coffee with a kiss..

You are not here to remove the dust from my eyes with your tongue..

You are not here to make all my heart feel good...off the pressures and stress

I am here and you are there

And in this loneliness'EveryMinute is like a century for me

Vaan enge Nilam Ange
Entha uvamaiku eruvarum vilakamanatheno !!!

Naatkuripil nuuru thadavai unthan peyerai eluthum en pena
Eluthiyathum erumbu moika peyarum aanathenna thenna??
Jil endru boomi erunthum entha tharunathil kulir kalam Kodai anatheno ?

Va anbe neyum vanthal senthanal kuda panikati pola marume !

Our separation is like

The sky'and the land at

Extreme ends'

My pen will write ur name a

Hundred times in my daily planner'

Hundreds of ants will start eating my planner

Thinking ur name is drops of honey

It's very cold winter here'

But still in this loneliness I feel like hot summer here'

Come my love 'if you are here even in hot desert'it will start snowing for now'