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-lakshmi-

@-lakshmi-

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Posted: 13 years ago

#561

just lovvveddd it...

and my favorite...
Jab mere fayde ki baat hogi toh saare haq jata ti hai aur jab khud ki baari hoti hai toh kuch kehti hi nahi."
am total lattoo on this line yaar...

waiting for the next

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maaneet0887

@maaneet0887

Dazzler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#562

AWESOME UPDATE RITZY LOVED HOW GEET SHOWED THE INTERESTS IN BIKES AND LOVED MAAN'S SOFTNESS IN HIS VOICE...HAYEE...AM WAITING FOR THEIR MILAN...THAT WOULD BE SO ROMANTIC.😳👏

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preethia

@preethia

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Posted: 13 years ago

#563

loved the update

loved the cute expressions of geet

haaye maan req and almost slipped by saying uski jaan nikal jaathi

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Ash1991

@Ash1991

Rocker

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Posted: 13 years ago

#564

amazing updates...

lvd both chapters...

geet is so cute...me want to see maneet on bike ride together...

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-Crayon-

@-Crayon-

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Posted: 13 years ago

#565

Read all the remaining parts!

This FF is too awesome..Loving it!

The holi sequence was too good ,the way you described everything reminded me of my Holi celebrations ...Now I want to celebrate it once again! 😆

Truly Holi always brings a freshness to our mind ,those colours ,water ,fun all around..it carries such postve vibes around it and the sequence very well suited the situation !

Awww...loved Geet's kissie...she is such an angel.

Even loved Geet's engineer avatar! Waise I so wanna read something like Geet riding a bike with Maan on her back! It'll be super fun!Love the way you portay different facets of Geet .Haila Khurana famly forgot Geet's birthday but koi nahi...the Picnic idea was ek dum mast!

Haaye..I loved it when Maan whistles the tune of Desi Girl and leaves the room! I couldn't stop smiling after reading that!

Aaah...Geet-Rahul relationship is amazing! The H,He..counting actually cracked me up!!!🤣

Maan agli baar na Geet ko koi bike gift kardo..her excitement will make you fly in the air!😳

Aww...So finally she spoke about her nights with the bike ...It was awesomee

I loved this line

This became her routine once everyone slept in the night. She felt as if she was free and enjoyed her own 30 minutes every night. As night breeze intertwined in her hair, she let go of herself her fears, her insecurities and just connected with her inner self finding much needed solace

This is such a beautiful FF!!👏