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mystique_girl

@mystique_girl

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#551

a cute update...

Geet's innocence and true self shines through..

And even Maan went gaga over her and became senti 😳

They are moving closer 😃

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khwaishfan

@khwaishfan

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+ 9

Posted: 13 years ago

#552

hi thanks 4 da pm n rokcing fab update! Loved it! It was Geet lol! Maan n dadi found out nw! Dadi is so understanding! Maan speaks his heart out! Well written! update soon

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samirah

@samirah_amjad

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Posted: 13 years ago

#553

are yaar kitna chota chapter hein, ab plz update jaldi se do na...am so desperate

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crazydream

@crazydream

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Posted: 13 years ago

#554

BEAUTIFUL UPDATE.

Amazing

Didn't expect Geet to be the buyer... But it was nice to see her.

Maan n Dadi getting shock by shock...
The hidden Layers of Geet is Cuming out.

Loved the way Geet was answering their
All doubts. Maan is amazed to know
Geet riding a bike.

Waiting for next.
Continue soon.

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Anubhuti

@tellyme

Sparkler

+ 18

Posted: 13 years ago

#555

Awsome Dear... loved this part totally...

OMG... what a surprise package Geet is aur Maan tou is always now a days loosing himself to her...

Geet is complete surprise package for Maan.

Ohh I loved the way he got carried away with her pouting and complain and his urges... "Control Maan".. loved it.

Loved his concern towards her

Geet ke chori pakree gayee and in what a beautiful way... I have no words... just loved it to core...

sawere sawere mann khush ker diya...

Ohhh abhi se I am waiting for their bike ride.. jaldi...

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evasumi

@evasumi

Rocker

+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#556

Thank you Ritz.. for 2 chapters in a row... and both of them were fantastic..

Well so the Knight Rider was caught today by the her Man.

It was done beautifully and Dadima also got involved to give the permission..

Yes cannot wait for the bike ride.. so bring it on and some great Maaneet moments...

Loved the way Maan showed concerns for Geet's safety and almost slipped in saying that he would have been reall upset if something happened to her... hmmm that was nice... May be a Maan needs to say something like that out of concern and surprise both Geet and himself ... or may be he just cannot see any danger coming to Geet and just loose control and let her see what is in his heart...

would wait for all those realization... coming in your own style...

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sona rai

@sona-rai

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#557

lovely mindblowing update yar loved it a lot

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ETRIKA

@etrika

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Posted: 13 years ago

#558

hi dii

loved bith the parts maan is sooo shocked the geeet loves bike riding n she is the one going to buy it.

thanks for pm n waiting for nxt

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minnie_tweetie

@minnie_tweetie

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#559

beautiful updates di
loved them all
so maan started missing her and then took his daadi to ISKCON temple
o i so loved it...
then the bike plan was awesome di
superb...so geet's talent came in front of his family
glad maan is getting closer to her now...
waiting for next di
continue asap