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dolly10

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Posted: 13 years ago

#381

I wanna know the past...but u do as ur wish

Continue soon

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Anupama

@anupm04

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Posted: 13 years ago

#382

It's up to u Jass
I Thnk u should show fb in middle while blooming love between maneet

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misty_drastifan

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Posted: 13 years ago

#383

waiting for the revelation dear
but anyway its up to you to decide about the FF
because you are the creator and you know what is best
for the story go ahead with that

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Deepa

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Posted: 13 years ago

#384

part 27
nice part...
poor Mannat...
shes so affected mentally...

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punam2712

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Posted: 13 years ago

#385

THIS IS NOT THE TIME FOR THE PAST TO COME OUT

RIGHT NOW IT IS TIME TO CONCENTRATE ON THE RELATION BETWEEN THEM

MAAN HAS TO LIKE MAANAT FOR HER SAKE AND ALSO MAANEET HAVE TO FALL IN LOVE

THE STORY WILL BECOME PREDICTABLE IF THE TRUTH COMES OUT RIGHT AWAY

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6n6s6k6i6r6a6n6

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Posted: 13 years ago

#386

hey Jass dragging the suspense un necessarily is boring and in long run it irritates...

it is already covered 28 chapters...how many more will u take to reveal it...

if they are connected to each other or not...if the answer is no then ur readers will definately feel cheated that u unnecessary dragged it...just like making a hill out of mole...

anyway it is ur FF...u said u want to reveal but ur hands are not able to type...yaar I know u have studied literature but is it reality...ur hands will type what ur mind wants...

I am reading many FFs...dragging and dragging unnecessary suspense like a daily soap...but there are many FFs also where there is no hidden story and they are very interesting and sweet...

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faria86

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Posted: 13 years ago

#387

superb update

poor Maaaneet she is so sensitive & maaneet's way of thinking is surprising but really cute

both Maaneet & rehaan are so sweet

dragging the suspense will get boring

so it's good to reveal it...

& if u want you can reveal it to us but not to Maaneet i mean you can make them fall in love without knowing the true

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Sampa Ghosh

@sweetsampa39

Rocker

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Posted: 13 years ago

#388

hi buddy,i'm jst loving flow of d story. its not dat ki i dont wanna know d past,but u may keep hidden until d plot demands it.Right now i think d -Maan-Mannat,track needs attention 2 deepen maaneet's love to each other.Now dats totally my personal view,u can carry fwrd d story acc. 2 ur & ur readers wish,i'll welcome it anyways.

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shalinisaran89

@shalinisaran89

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#389

superb vm...

lov it...

do as u thk d story need...

if u thk its nt d tym 2 reveal d truth den dnt do it...

i thk at dis tym going in past is boring...

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Infinity.

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Posted: 13 years ago

#390

Part 28
Awesome update
Loved it
Loved mannat ...she's so cute
😲 geet taking depression pill
wat happen to her??
waiting for next
continue soon
thankx for PM

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