SS: MG- LOVE MAKES CHANGES:EPILOGUE may 30th - Page 3

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Posted: 13 years ago
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loving it...do continue soon...😊
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awesome start
loved the part 1
precap seems interesting
plz continue soon

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: eiya22

loving it...do continue soon...😊


glad that you liked it...

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Originally posted by: kamiya

awesome start

loved the part 1
precap seems interesting
plz continue soon

all the best for your os



thank you very much...
will be updating now...
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Part 2

Thanks for all ur comments and likes. I replied to all. Pls do check if needed. Hereis the second part. Pardon me with my mistakes.

At Delhi

Maan was geeting ready in a high pace to go out with his friends . maan never thinks of work on Sunday's as it was a party day for maan. He wished his dad and reached his parking lot and started his car.

Geet and pinky decided to go for shopping so they reached bus stand and waited for the correct bus to come.

Pinky: Geet ' City square is the best mall in delhi' after a long life we are going to have lots of fun'.

Geet: yes pinky'. Me too very much excited'.

Pinky: hey geet' just a minute' I saw my friend there' will be back in few minutes'.

Geet: sure' carry on'.

On the way maan saw geet standing in the bus stand alone while he was waiting for the signal to turn green'. He just pulled his car seeing her beauty. He doesn't know why he felt something inside him.

Maan: hi sweetheart?

Geet: who? Me'.

Maan: yes, sweetheart?

Geet: sorry sir, I really don't know you

Maan: you see, I don't like dragging things. I always say something straight in front of the person. And here I am "can you be by girlfriend for one day"

Geet: sorry, I think I didn't hear you.

Maan: sure you did.

Geet: girl friend for one day'.

Maan: ya'

Geet: Are you out of ur mind. Asking an unknown person to be ur girlfriend.

Maan: yes, I can give you as much as money you want.

Geet: Do you think money can buy anything.

Maan: yes I do.

Geet: Then change ur mind. You can't buy me. I am not just any thing to buy with ur money.

Saying so, geet went in search of pinky leaving maan behind.

At shimla:

Geet: mom, dad, meera''. I am home'.

Mom: geet beta, when you came?

Geet: just now mama'

Mom: ok beta' you must be hungry' go freshen up'

Geet: ok mom' where is dad and meera'.

Mom: meera went to her college as see has some special class and ur dad went to meet his friend'

Geet: ok mom' I will be back in 10 mints'.

'''..x'''.

Dev kapoor is a small business man in shimla' he has two sisters sameera and nithya' he is the only bread earner of his family. He is a man with low self esteem and he always worries about his family, business, loans etc'

'..x'..

One day when geet was playing with the children in the park , dev saw her and he felt in love with her'he spoke to geet the very first day. They became good friends suddenly dev decided to say his feeling for her' After hearing the proposal, geet was bit shocked. Then she thought of no reason to reject him as she also liked him a lot'. So they started dating each other'

At Delhi:

Khurana and company

Dev: can I meet Mr. Maan Singh Khurana pls'.

Receptionist: Do you have an appoint?

Dev: No' but I know ur boss very well'. Just tell my name'

Receptionist: your good name pls'.

Dev: Dev'. Dev kapoor'.

Receptionist: ok sir, wait for a minute' I will let you know'.

Dev: ok'.

Receptionist informed maan about dev's arrival. As soon as maan heard the name he asked her to send him immediately.

Maan: hi dev' how r u?

Dev: fine man' then how is life maan'

Maan: As usual , business , party, fun etc'

Dev: oh maan', you never change'

Maan: As you know. Then any interesting news'.

Dev: yes yaar' I am engaged'.

Maan: oh that's nice to hear' who is the girl?

Dev: Her name is geet' we both came here for some work' I want you to meet her'.

Maan: Fine then I has a small office party this evening at 6. Can we meet there'.

Dev: oh that will be great'so I will meet you at 6 then'

Maan: sure buddy' bring ur girlfriend too'

Dev: sure maan' will do'.

Evening at 6:

Maan was inviting his guest and he was dev entering with her girlfriend, geet. At first he was in total shock. He felt like something is leaving from his life. Then finally he composed himself

Dev: hi maan, meet Geet Sharma'.

Maan: hi geet'.

Geet(shocked): hi

Dev: geet' meet Maan Singh Khurana, my best friend.

Geet smiled weakly.

Maan didn't show dev that he know geet. So did geet. Maan asked them to join the party. He kind of started respecting geet as his best friend's girl. After party is over, they bit good bye to each other.

Precap:

Maan in shimla

geet's marriage fixed with someone.

Dev's family drama'.

pls do press like and comment. It means a lot to me.


part 3:https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/2993871/ss-mg-love-makes-changes-epilogue-may-30th?pn=10

Edited by sweetysaran - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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hmm good going dear
its getting really interesting with every update
waiting eagerly for the next update ...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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its really awsome
just loved it
read both the part s thanx for the pm
plzzz continue asap😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: Hanishadevi

nice... keep on t update


thank you...
will update when typing is done...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: Angelic_mishty

Awesum update


continue soon



thank you very much...
will be back soon...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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thank you very much...

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