**FLAMES OF DESIRE** MG FF #3 IMP NOTE pg 144 - Page 41

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dear its more than 4-5 mins...
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FLAMES OF DESIRE

PART-18

"good...now be ready at sharp 8 tonight...will pick you up"

"lekin hum ja kaha rahe hai aur itni raat ko kya karenge"

she said still not getting the correct basics of going on date...

maan turned back hiding his smile...then again faced her with a straight face...

"hmm you and me alone...i wonder what can we do together"

and he winked at her giving his teasing smile...geet blushed getting his words...ran from there hiding her blush...maan laughed wholeheartedly falling on the bed...thinking...

"this would be one adventurous date"

maan got ready after some time and went to office with dev...but not before giving a warning glance towards annie...poor annie got scared and ran to vicky's room...

vicky- "hmm...any news?????"

annie- "nahi vicky"

vicky- "tumse ek kaam bhi thik se nahi hota na...sirf ek kaam bola tha, maan bhai pe nazar rakhane ka aur woh bhi nahi kar sakti"

annie- "woh maan bhai mujhe aise gusse se dekh rahe the...mujhe lagta hai unhe pata chal gaya hai ki I am spying on him" she said making a scared baby face...

vicky- ainne you fool...tum itna bhi thik se nahi kar sakti...he got panicked...tumhara kya hai tum unke gusse se bach jaogi...lekin mai....images of maan beating him, came in front of his eyes...ohh god meri toh dusari aankh bhi jayegi...he said keeping his hand on his another eye...

annie made a baby angry face..."tumne mujhe fool kaha you bandar"

vicky- "bandar...tumne mujhe bandar kaha...you idiot abhi ke abhi nikal mere samne se"

annie ran out of his room making an crying face but not before harshly pulling vicky's hair...

vicky screamed in pain cursing annie...

On the other hand geet reached her home...completely worn out...went directly to her room...screaming to her mom...

"mumma mujhe bhook lagi...jaldi kuch bana do"

she dropped her bag on the bed and ran into the washroom...had a cold shower and then came out wearing towel around her petite form...she fished her wardrobe and wore a nice pair of shorts and t-shirt...keeping her wet dripping hair open, she went down...entered kitchen and hugged her mom from back...

"mumma bhook lagi hai" she said nuzzling her face on her mom's shoulder...

rano- "aaj mera bacha itni jaldi aa gaya ghar"

geet- "ummm" she moaned lazily...

rano- "acha chalo jao baitho waha...mai paratha leke aati hu"

geet dragged herself and sat on her favorite chair...leaning her head on dining table...rano sat next to her...placing the plate infront of her...caressing her hair...geet looked up with her droopy eyes...

"ummm mumma aap khilao na mujhe...me feeling very sleepy"

rano lovingly started feeding her..."aaj kaha itni bhagdaud ki mere bache ne"

"bas asehi mumma" she said softly...actually geet was very tired after all the morning events...maan's passion was taking toll on her...draining every bit of her energy...

"mumma ab bas...my tummy is full" she said cutely patting her tummy...rano smiled at her and went away with the plate in her hand...she was in the kitchen when geet spoke...

"woh mumma...woh mujhe aaj raat ko...bahar...woh unke saath"

geet was not able to form words to seek permission from her mom for the date with maan...she was fumbling with her words...when rano abruptly came out...
"geet dekh tera jo bhi plan hai evening ka usse cancel kar...maan is gona take out for dinner tonight...so me and papaji want you to go out with him...and spent some time together...rano's temper raised with every second seeing geet's casual approach towards maan and their future relationship...you both are going to get married soon...and we both are very disappointed with you beta, you hardly spent time with him, either you ran away or keep looking down when he is around...pata hai maan ne papaji ko phone karke permission mangi hai for tonight...usko bhi pata hai tu kitni jhalli hai...atleast he is taking efforts to know you"
geet made a puppy face looking down...then with her mom's increasing temper she got tears in her eyes...rano felt guilty looking at her tears

"ollleee mera bacha ro raha hai...mumma is sorry baby" she said wiping geet's tears...

geet looked down with continous hicupps...

"baby we just want you to spend some time with maan...usse janogi nahi toh puri zindagi kaise bita paogi"

geet nodded her head still looking grumpy, pouting...mentally cribbing to her babaji...

"tu jayegi na geet" rano asked expectantly...

geet nodded her head positively...rano smiled...carressed her face lovingly..."beta maan is a nice guy...woh tumhe hamesha khush rakhega"...geet blushed and kissed her mumma cheek...and ran to her room shouting

"mumma me sleeping now...mujhe baad mai utha dena"

geet entered her room, closing the door behind...fell on her fluffy bed...breathing heavily...then turned around facing up...she stretched her hand and pulled her sweetu on top of her and hugged him tight...sweetu is geet's teddy bear...her new found comforter from this evil world...

then she opened her one eyes looking up at babaji...making pouting face...then closed it again...after few seconds she again opened her both the eyes...hugging sweetu close, she tried giving a dangerous look to babaji, with her cute snorting nose...

"aapko bohat maza aata hai na mujhe daat khilake...dekha mumma ne bina wajah kitna chillaya...jabki meri koi galati bhi nahi thi...aur toh aur unko maan ekdum sidhe lagate hai...unko kya pata kitne chalu hai woh...then thinking...aur kya mai unse dur bhagti hu...woh kabhi koi mauka chodate hai mere kareeb aane ka...she pushed sweetu away in anger...meri kisiko koi parwah hi nahi hai....and she turned around sleeping on her stomach...digging her head in pillow...

maan reached office and got involved with his client meetings and presentations...it was 4pm when he got some free time...he entered his cabin...and sat on his chair, loosening his tie...then leaning his head back, he closed his eyes...flashes of geet in her wet form came infront of his eyes...he abruptly opened his eyes, mentally smacking himself...then again closed them...but this time images of geet and him making out in washroom flashed infront, scaring him out of his dreamland...he got up abruptly and drank some water...

"maan sudhar ja beta...your thoughts are going too wild...get a grip on your erotic libido dude...warna geet ko pata chala toh tere pas bhi nahi aayegi"

he tried distracting himself from geet's thoughts...then finally gave up and called on her mobile...waited impatiently for her to pick up at once...

geet was sleeping peacefully holding sweetu close to her...then she heard her mobile ringing...getting disturbed she closed her ears...snuggling into sweetu...then giving up...she fetched her mobile...kept it close to her ear...

"ummm hello" she said huskily maoning in her sleep...

uff that sexy sound was enough for maan to get turned on...he kept his mobile on his heart...shutting his eyes tightly...not able to stop his erotic thoughts...

"ummm bolo na" she said with her eyes closed...
maan took a deep breath controlling his sexual desire...kept mobile on his ear...listening to her slow and steady breathing...
"so princess is sleeping" he thought...smiling...

then an evil thought came into his devil mind...

"geet" he huskily whispered...but by now she was again in her deep sleep...maan smirked and screamed her name loud enough to scare the hell out of her...poor geet abruptly got up and looked here and there to see what had happened...she got so scared and started trembling...then finding everything ok she looked at her phone...picked it up...kept near her ear...scared thinking if any ghost is on the opposite side...

suddenly her eyes grew big an anger covered her cute face hearing maan laughing crazily on the other side...she made a crying baby angry face...snorting her nose...looked other way mentally cursing him thousand times...but poor girl could not voice her cute and sweet galiya's to this duhta danav of hers...as she knew her date would come in danger if maan gets angry, and then her papaji and mumma would again blame her...

she looked up...again cribbing to her babaji dekho aapne mujhe kiske gale bandh diya...bade bade aankho wale ravan...lafange kahi ke...dekho abhi tak has rahe hai...

maan finally controlled his laughter...getting amused with complete silence on the other side...thinking...

"hmm now this is unlike my mishty...lagta hai gussa ho gayi"

"baby gussa ho gaya" he said sweetly...

geet twisting her pouting lips, looked other way...

maan closed his eyes smiling...imagining her cute anger...

"acha baba i am sorry...ab bolo bhi"

she still didn't budge...

"mishty baby please...i am sorry" he said getting imapatient...desperately wanting to hear her sweet voice...

"jaan please maan jao na"

geet smiled hearing his cute manofying...

"i know you are smiling" maan deliberately called her jaan...as he knew this would work...

geet smiled even more...getting excited..."aapko kaise pata mai smile kar rahi hu"

maan smiled at her cuteness...

"mishty i can feel it"

"woh kaise" she said getting confused...

"because i lov..." he left those words in mid way...then closing his eyes...leaning back...he blushed at his almost confession...

geet too blushed wanting to hear his unspoken words...but didnt had guts to ask him to say it...

"woh mishty...woh i wanted to say...that i...woh"

geet bit her lips feeling shy...anticipating his confession...

maan closed his eyes...smacked his head...

"woh mishty...woh i will pick you up by 8pm...be ready" he said hurriedly before she asks him any further questions...and disconnected the call...

geet made a pouting face..."jab mai bol sakti hu toh woh kyu nahi...maine toh bola tha na babaji...ab dekho yeh kaise nakhare kar rahe hai...chaddo..."

and she slept for some more time hugging her sweetu...

It was 7pm when maan reached khurana mansion...he entered his washroom removing his cloths behind...stood under the cold shower...feeling the chill ran down his body...making him shiver...

he caressed his hair back looking up...letting the coldness drench his sexy handsome face...

then moving his palm down his neck, then to his torso...he caressed the skin below...water was contiously dripping from his magnetic features...making him look irresistably desirous...

he came out of the shower...wiping himself...entered his room and stood before mirror...sprayed some Drakkar Noir cologne...then wore his casual pair of blue jeans and white shirt...keeping his top two buttons open...he pulled his sleevs up...wearing rolex watch...he gelled his hair...wearing that killer smirk on his face...uff he looked breathtakingly handsome with this killer look...he was hotness personified...

he picked his wallet and mobile...then looked at a packet...smiled...picked it up...kept in his pocket safely...and dashed out towards his car...took the keys from driver...and drove towards his destination...

here at handa haveli...geet stood infront of mirror...looking at herself...blushing hard...

she wore a beautiful light pink colour anarkali suit with diamond ear rings...and diamond kadas to compliment her beautiful dangling earrings...keeping her hair open...she applied some kajal making her hazel eyes look more prominent...and applied pink shining lips gloss to her full lips...making them look irresistablely delicious...lastly she perfumed herself...then checking herself from top to bottom if anything she missed...

finally she smiled and gave herself a thumbs up..."love you geet...you are the best"

she did a victory dance as if she conquered some battle...

"bas babaji ab koi gadbad mat karna ok...maine bohat mehnat ki hai yeh date pass karne ke liye...please let me clear it with flying colours...or else mumma and papaji will again blame me if maan gets angry...poor girl is comparing this date with her school exams..."

she dressed up with everything which maan liked...she knew he likes her in indian dresses...she blushed thinking how will maan react after seeing her...will he like it...then shivered, what if he doesnt...she was engrossed he her thoughts when rano called her to come down...as maan is waiting for her...

geet trembled feeling his presence, as she climbed few steps down...feeling his intense gaze on her...maan was spellbounded looking at the angelic beauty cascanding from heaven just for him...he was drinking her raw serene beauty, which was only meant for him...just him...

geet knotted her duppata, playing with it in her nervous ness...skipped a step, suddenly about to fall down...closing her eyes shut...anticipating to get hurt badly...as maan moved with the friction of second...holding her in his strong arms...before anything would hurt his mishty...he was horrified looking at he trembling in his arms...

"jaan you ok" he asked getting concerned...caressing her face with his other hand...while holding her firmly close to him...

she opened her hazel eyes meeting his concerned ones...getting mesmerized with the greek god holding her...uff he looked smoking hott she thought...she kept looking at him...drooling at his sexy features...moved her hand up to his face...caressing it sensously...maan blushed when she moved her thumb over his lips...pressing them softly...

they both where in their trance...completely intoxicated feeling eachother...maan gripped her closer...pulling her up...

rano and mohinder looked away smiling...then rano nudged mohinder to speak something to get their attention...mohinder coughed...but it didnt worked...then with no other choice...he spoke...

"geet beta are you ok"

both geet and maan shivered getting out of their trance...then looked at their position...got embaressed...maan pulled her up...making her stand...both of them looked other way...hiding their blush...

"beta you both are getting late...i think geet is fine, so you can carry on with your dinner"

"ji papaji" maan could not utter any thing more then this as he was hell embaressed romancing their daughter infront of them...

he moved ahead with geet following him...rano and mohinder bid them good bye...as maan and geet moved towards their car...

"they look so cute together" rano said hugging her husband sideway...

"hmmm both are perfect for eachother" he said smiling...

maan and geet drove towards their destination in complete silence...both could not utter a single word...as niether of them wanted to spoil the magical feel developing in them...geet looked outside at the full moon decorating the deep black sky...she smiled feeling the cool breeze kissing her skin...maan glanced her way...watching her glowing face...he so much thanked his stars for bringing her in his life...making it much more beautiful then he deserved...yes he felt lucky to have her completely for him and just him...he stopped the car sideways...as they reached...she looked at him...getting lost in his passionate eyes which were already looking at her...

suddenly he pulled her closer...holding her waist...looking at her with oozing emotions...she started breathing heavily as she felt his warm breath fanning her yearning lips...

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Precap:- first kiss😳😳😳😳😳

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Edited by mahimaneet - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Hi dear, wow I am first today lol! Saw u updated n cld nt resist lol! Will wait 4 pm! Nywyas superb fab update! Well written! Geet goes home n Rano shouts her abt nt taking her n Maan;s relationship serious! Poor Geet! Vicky n annie n hilarious !Maan thinking abt his Geet! He calls her n disturbs her sleep! Geet upset! Maan aplogises! MAan almost confesses n geet upset! Maan goes home n gets ready! Geet also ready n Maan mesmerised! rano n Mohinder happy! Maaneet leave! Precap is awesum!update soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
That was an awesome update...

Loved Geet's cribbing and Maan's antics...

the most awaited date... and the precap is making me want the next update soon
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lovely update
waiting 4 date&&&&precape
cont soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
That was a long update !!:-)

Superb update

Loved it 😉
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Posted: 13 years ago
loved it...
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Kya baat hai JI

dono besharam log kisi ke ssmne shuru ho jaate hai! lolz

awseome update..

PS>.loved the pics..;) no need to tell u which ones/...:P
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Posted: 13 years ago
nie update dear
ohhhooo first kiss waiting

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