MG- FAIRY...TAIL???!!! THREAD 11 - Page 68

mindblowing

cannt handle it anymore no more speration

im officially dead after reading thgis 😭

POOR GEET. OMG SO MUCH PAIN... ASH NOT RIGHT YAAR... KAHA PHASA DIYA TUMNE GEET KO ... YAAR CLEAR KARO NA SAB...

Originally posted by: teddy500

Hey ashy,

gr8 part.

very well written.

But i found one thing quite confusing.

You wrote that avantika came to know about mohinder's japanese business partners trying to take geet away with them forcibly and then they misbehaved with her in a vulgar manner.

How did you work that one out?

I mean, under the japanese penal system, people who misbehave with women or torture them are punished very severely indeed, aren't they?

Ok, i agree that those people took away the 45% property and shares that was in mohinder handa's name, but as for trying to take geet away forcibly, well you gave me a jolt with that.

Could you explain that bit clearly through a reply on this comment?

WHATEVER did those men intend to do with geet?

Forcibly marry her off to somebody to get her property or make her enter the human trafficking area through the flesh-trade business?

Or did they want to murder both jasmeet and sweetu?

How did mother-daughter manage to come away to india?

Did the court officials and lawyers engaged in the auction help them out after the mansion was sold?

See, ashy, whenever you point out any legal hassles in any of your stories naa, make it a habit to clarify your points and tragic moments properly.

I am a law student and have come across some attorneys and property lawyers from japan.

They told me loads of interesting things, you see.

But never mentioned about the dead bizmen's young daughters being taken away forcibly by the

other businessmen.

I hope you shall clarify my doubts soon through a long and satisfying reply.

I am also going to send you a pm.

Have you come across any of my fanfics?

me name is teddy500.

Please read my works if you get the time.

Ritzy and mrs.msk shall let you know about my works.

Ok, me is busy now so shall contact you later on.

Ciao,

take care and update soon.

teddy500

hieee since you had asked me to clarify...me here..at your service ma'am!!!😉
coming to the 1st question here...
i DID NOT mention everything whatever happened in japan..everything is just a rough sketch!!!
now about the japanese partners...i never mentioned they were purely japanese!!!
whatever idea on business i have..(though very little) big companies deal with different clients from different areas be it in ones own country though!!!


about the japanese penal code and the laws...i have a little idea about the japanese red streets
and this is entirely fictions dear... nothing is true..everything is just out of my mind...😃
and this story revolves around sweetu-MK..so i dodn't think describing japanese penal code here or planning their escapade was necessary here..
moreover..u had already made it clear that avantika was saying this to maan whtever she had heard from jasmeet...so definitely jasmeet wouldn't go on explaining all the legal precedures to her!!!



now coming to the next point...and my most fav part...lol😉
am completely a science student..😎
i hve no idea regarding my own country's penal code..how should i explain anything about japan??😃😆
agreed am very interested in japanese language and culture...but it never tells me tht i should study their law too!!!!! hehe hope am not being rude dear..but if i am..then please dun get mad!! am sorry!!!😳

about the auction...i would reply the same...i am from a completely different field than that of yours...so definitely you'll hve a much better and a clearer idea about law than me!!!!😳
this is just a fiction...nothing resembles the real life...😛

this is supposed to be a love story...i thought it unnecessary to put in all that!!!
i just wanted to give a rough sketch as to what might have happened
and am sure no reader would be interested to know the real legal procedures either...
please dun take it in a negative sense..am just trying to put forward my point!!!!😳
u are definitely right in your own place and wouldnt dare to interfere or force my points on u as u hve a better knowledge in ur field!!!!!!!😳

i hope now u may feel my points clearer in the updates as well as here!!!!
about your fanfics...i hve come across some...
but never got time to read..in fact i hardly read n e thing
just busy busy with studies!!
and will defo ask ritzy di!!!😉


waise i hve another ff which requires a person from law field as it requires one for the main story!!
can i contact you for tht???😳

part 91
OMG whats wrong with her?
here she goes again...
is she suicidal?
Maan still hasnt connected the dots but is comparing sweetu with Geet...
duffer will soon realize...
OMG sweetu and her mom have gone through so much...
cont soon dear...